Littleolmee: I love you!! Thanks for the review and advice!! XD and I kept close to the story line cuz I wuz clueless for my start but I'll be sure to drift from the game play. :)
Here's chapter 2 and well I wrote it write with chapter one but I wanted to wait before I added it. I wanted to see how people reacted first.
She was so cute that day I met her. She was smiling like she was having so much fun just talking to people. She was outgoing and lively. She glowed in my eyes. I wanted and needed that light.
It was spring. I always loved the spring time. All the flowers bloomed though I didn't really know what any of them were called except for the tulips. Tulips always reminded me of my mother before she died, but I guess that's why I like them so much. She loved those flowers. She even grew them in front of the shop, but it's been long since they withered.
It was just a normal day. I had heard that there was a new girl in town. I hoped she was cute because there wasn't a girl in town I really liked. Everybody told me that I looked good with Selena, but Selena was always so bossy. I didn't want to go out with a girl who would just tell me to do her biddings. Selena never liked my jokes, either. I really had no clue that the new girl was going to be more then just cute.
My dad had sent Bo to get the lumber today, so I sat around the shop fully bored with nothing to do. The phone rang. My dad answered it. It was Gill. I was listening in on their conversation. Something about cutting the root so the new girl could easily access the Ganache Mine District. My dad said he would do it, but when he hung up the phone, he sighed wearing a sad eyes. I could tell that my dad didn't want to cut the root. He had tried everything to revive that tree. It would kill him to have to cut it himself.
Then, the bell on the door rang as a cute girl with brown hair wearing a simple green shirt and jean shorts walked in to the store. "Hello," she said, "My name is Akari. I just moved here, and I wanted to meet everyone."
"Hello," my dad said. "I'm Dale and that's my son, Luke. He and another boy, Bo, are my apprentices." As he said this, I just stared at her. Just as I'd wished, she was cute, really cute, in fact.
"Hi," I managed to say. "Like Dad said, I'm Luke and one day I'll be running this carpentry!!"
I managed to say with my usual mile-wide grin.
She looked at me for a moment with wide eyes. She's got really pretty eyes.. I realized that my jaw must have been on the ground because she said, "Nice to meet you1 I hope I see you again sometime." leaving just as quickly as she came.
I continued to stare out the window as she left heading toward the forest. I want to talk to her. I don't know why, but I really want to talk to her…. I know!! I'll give her my old axe! She probably doesn't have one yet. "Hey, Dad, I think I'm going to give Akari my old axe." I yell as I run out the door heading to the forest.
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Akari was leaving the forest after having met the other young carpentry apprentice, Bo, but she couldn't get Luke out of her head. I found him! She smiled at herself when suddenly. BAM! Her new crush had just ran straight into her. "Sorry!" he said, jumping off of her. His face was a deep red, and she was pretty sure that her face was the same shade
"No, it's ok." I say staring into his honey colored eye.
"Well, I'm still really sorry. I just wanted to talk, no I mean, give you this." He pulled out an axe. "Here, it's my old one. You'll need one to collect lumber if you ever want to upgrade your house or build a barn or coop." I take the axe from him, being careful not to underestimate the weight like I did with the hammer. I placed it in my rucksack which was getting really heavy.
'Thanks" I say gratefully, hoping that my face isn't as red as I think it is. "Well, I'll see you later." I run past him.
"Wait" he calls, but suddenly, I trip. The rucksack was just a little too heavy for me. Luke is already by my side. "Are you ok?" His face is inches from mine, and I can see the worry in those striking yellow eyes.
"I'm fine." I try to get up, but I sprained my ankle when I tripped, so I fall back down.
"You don't look fine." He says. He puts me on his back, and I put my arms around his neck, blushing hard and thanking God that he can't see my face. "I'm going to take you to the clinic."
This is shorter than he first chapter. I'm sorry!! But I didn't want to progress to far.. tell me wat u think ^^ (i found a gillXakari fic that i wrote months ago in math class, i shud have it up in a couple of days)
