OhImmaHoze,
I do not expect you to regret your comment. Everybody is entitled to their opinion. I agree with you that this Baby Girl had many mistakes, and I don't think I can fix them all. It was my first Fanfiction, and I had fun with it. But I have a new one called Fallen angel and would really love to have your opinion on it. It has gotten a lot of positive feedback.
No hard feelings
Leigha
If anybody would like to adopt Baby Girl please message me