Dear mystery critic,
First off as I said I am a first time story writer so I am going to have many mistakes....I am by all means NOT perfect and NOT a spelling bee champion.
I personally think you are being a coward for being anonymous.
Also age has nothing to do with it.
I think you have major anger issues and need to see a specialist about that.
I am NOT in this for compliments I am ONLY simply doing this for the heck of it and the feeling of accomplishment.