'Now for some traning' Naruto stood in the middle of the clearing in the forest. He then perform a hand sign "Kage Bunshin no Jutsu!" (nothing happen) 'Eh!' "What happen! Whay can't I use Kage Bunshin?" "Cause this is not the land of the living." Kyuubi answered. Kyuubi then appeared beside Naruto. "How did you get out !" Naruto pointed his finger at him. "Don't be so dramatic. I'm not really out. Only you can see me, I'm sorta like a " Kyuubi quoted his hand "figment of your imagination". Kyuubi smirked "And if you keep on shouting at me I'm sure others would think you're nuts." Naruto retreated his fingers and blushed lightly.
"Ok, I will make this short and simple so you can understand." deep breath "You don't have chakra." Kyuubi quickly stuck his fingers in his ears. "WHAT!" Naruto shouted. Kyuubi flinched. Naruto keep on ranting and Kyuubi finally snapped. "Would you shut up!" Naruto eeped and closed his mouth. "Now proceeding, chakra is the energy of the living so when you're dead the energy is gone. Instead you have reiatsu, and the principle of reiatsu is different from chakra but it is possible to utilise it and use in combat" Kyuubi said slowly but by the blank look in Naruto's face Kyuubi knows he already lost him. "In short you need to learn how to use reiatsu from the start."
Naruto's jaws drop and his eyes wide. "Y-you... mean that... all that training...on chakra... control""Yup, pretty much useless." Naruto's eyes slowly went blank. "Uhm, are you ok?" Kyuubi ask. "I think he lost it" Dark Naruto answered. Kyuubi went over and slapped Naruto. "Hey! That hurt!" Naruto pouted.
"(sigh) Guess we have to do it the old fashion way." Naruto stood up and dusted himself. He was about to start training when (grumble) "..." "Uhm... Hehe I'm hungry." Naruto scratch the back of his head sheepishly. Kyuubi blinked and then sigh "guess it can't be helped." "Hey, where can we find food?" but Kyuubi didn't answer, instead he rolled his eyes and dissapear. An angry tick appeared on Naruto's head. 'STUPID FOX!'
Naruto walked around the forest hoping to find a river but instead he walked out of the forest. He then proceed to enter the village in hope of finding food. He walked around the village and noticed that most of the villagers were looking rather pale and sickly. After a while, he spotted a store that sells fruits. He went there to see if there's anything he could eat but he suddenly remembered, he doesn't have amy money. sigh 'Now what? I can't find a river to catch fish and I can't buy food'
Suddenly there's a voice behind him "Well, look at what we got here?" Naruto widened his eyes 'shit!' He turned and saw the three that harassed him last time. The leader narrowed his eyes. "Looks like we found you, bitch." Naruto looked around and saw that the other villagers were avoiding his eyes. He then looked back at the three. Naruto glared at three of them. "Hmm... Looks like you have some spunk huh... Lets see if you dare to humiliate me again after I'm done with you slut" The two lackey went behind him. Naruto was surrounded.
Naruto's hands went to the sword but was scorched. 'What the hell! What are you doing Kyuubi!' But Kyuubi didn't answer. Naruto panicked. He doesn't know what to do. Then he suddenly remembered his words 'I was a shinobi! I couldn't even take care of a few thugs. I'm so weak.'. Naruto look the three of them and took a fighting stance. 'Even if i can't use Kyuubi, I still have my bare hands. I did not spend years of training for nothing.' The leader seeing this laughed. " Ha! What are you gonna do, fight us? Oh please, you against the three of us" One of the lackey from the left lunged and Naruto dodged to his right. The other lackey tried to grab him but Naruto dodged and caught the hand and threw him over his shoulder. The lackey landed with a painful thud. The lackey that failed to grab him tried to punch him but Naruto seeing this, went down and swept his feet making the lackey tripped.
With the both of them down, Naruto turned and face the Leader. The leader was seething. He was practically breathing fire. Naruto narrowed his eyes when the leader when into his sleeve and took out a dagger. The leader wasted no time and lunged at him. The dagger swipe past the left part of his face because Naruto didn't manage to dodge in time and a small thin trail of blood was flowing down his cheeks. 'That was too close, I've let my guard down.' The leader smirked and took the dagger up to his mouth and licked. 'Eww...' Naruto looked disgusted. He's starting to get tired because of the hunger. 'I need to finish this fast.' This time Naruto attack first. He fisted his right hand and threw the punch at the leader stomach just below his rib. Naruto's fist sunk into the flesh and the leaders breathe was knocked out. Instead of backing away, he gritted his teeth and held the sword tighter and lunged it down at Naruto's back. 'Shit!' Naruto closed his eyes and expected pain but nothing came. When he opened his eyes , he saw someone holding the leader's wrist.
The man was wearing some type of weird black kimono and he has a sword strapped at his side. "That's enough." the man said. The leader widened his eyes. He dropped the dagger and tried to run but the hand holding his wrist is not letting. The man glared at him "Don't ever let me see you in this part of the town again. Or else..." and then he let go of the wrist. The leader and both of his lackey quickly limped away.
The man then turned back to Naruto "Are you alright kid?" Naruto's eyebrow twitched, just when he wanted to shout he's not a kid when (load grumble). Naruto was beyond embarrassed. Why did his stomach betray him at that moment. Naruto' face was burning and he wanted to run away. The man just chuckle lightly. "I see that you're hungry, how about I treat you to some ramen." Naruto's mouth watered when he heard the word ramen but he was hesitant. The man seeing this just smiled knowingly "Think of it as a thank you for beating up the gang just now. They have been harassing the towns people for a long time. So they frinking needed some ass kicking." Naruto nodded slowly and followed the man towards a ramen stand.
"So who're you?" Naruto asked. "The name's Abarai Renji, but you can called me Renji." the man answered.
I need some review's on the fighting scene cause I don't know if you like it or not. Oh, I'm also starting another new story but I won't post it yet cause I won't be updating that one soon. I'm more focussed on this one.