A/N: Thanks guys for the review its great but on a side note. If you do not like anything I mean you have a problem with anything please review or PM me. Right now I'm trying to make this appeal to teenagers or at least those who have read Naruto and played Prototype. You see when I write stories I try to appeal to a group. I do this because I believe a good writer can write so it can appeal to a certain group. I have failed and wrote some pretty crappy stories but I have succeeded in some others.
Once again if you have any qualms (problems) or even some suggestion tell it to me Every Little Thing Helps.
-Tenchi Sawada
UNTO THE STORY, NOW WE SHALL GO.
Naruto and Yugito woke up early that morning. They had paid for a small room with 2 beds. They went under the guise of a honeymoon. This of course left them blushing afterwards when the Keeper insisted on giving them a one bed room.
Naruto cleansed himself with water but left the hot water in the tub for Yugito. Naruto walked out and sat on the window sill staring out at the sea. It was peaceful to him, the smell of the salt from the sea, the cool breeze, peaceful indeed.
Naruto winced as a stab of memories went through his head. This happened often when he was resting. The problem with his consummation of people is that their recent memories pass first and keep going down as far as they remember. When they were finished Naruto could search through them endlessly.
The only problem was the consciousness of the mind. You would think yea their dead. Wrong and right, their consciousness has been terminated but there are echoes. These echoes are the 'subconscious-ness' of the deceased and they come when the mind is relaxed or at least not active. (So in a fight the mind would be working a mile per minute and the subconscious part of the mind's effect would loosen.)
Naruto took a deep breath and continued to look out at the sea. Yugito had woken up, when he was calming himself, and gone into the bathroom. Naruto heard a squeal, "OH, thank you Naruto-kun." Naruto raised an eye to the suffix. Naruto took out some fruit he had forged on the run to Kumo (cloud) and started to eat slowly going over how he was going to approach Mika.
20 minutes later
Naruto sighed. He then smirked and said in a loud voice "I thought kitties didn't like water"
Naruto heard a growling, and a series of several wooshing items. Naruto, of course, ducked under several dangerous projectiles of shampoos 'oh and a hair conditioner', two bars of soap 'did that say mint fresh' and … pink PANTIES.
Naruto's face turned red at the sight. "Uh… Yugito you uh … through your panties at me."
"…"
"…"
"N-n-naruto could you through it back please."
Naruto tossed it back into the restroom.
"T-t-thanks."
"Y-yea."
'Well that was awkward.'
15 minutes later Yugito came out fully clothed. Naruto smiled at her and she smiled nervously back.
It was funny when he was around her he felt like she was a kitten needing attention. She needed to be taken care off. He didn't know why but he felt that way.
"C'mon Yugito."
"Yea"
The two Jinchuuriki left the hotel and headed towards the docks.
20 minutes later
Naruto looked out to the sea. He was leaning on the rail his hair billowing out. He looked torwards the left to see Yugito looking curiously at the fish which where brought on board.
Naruto could see her eyes glimmer with hunger even though she ate a full course meal just before. Naruto chuckled at Yugito's antics and turned back to the sea. He felt a small breeze come at him. It was cool and salty full of warmth from the sun.
'Times like these are worth it.' Naruto thought to himself.
"Nice isn't it" Naruto heard a voice next to Naruto looked to his right to see Mika looking out next to him.
He got a good look at her not just at the poker table but he felt something ju
"Yea it's a rare beauty."
"Hnn.."
"Have nice sleep"
Mika snorted "Pfft you think after your offer, someone could sleep."
Mika…
Mika was our anchor to earth. She kept up us down made us serious. She would be someone to hold us together and keep us from doing some crazy things. Half the time she was overreacting the other half she saved us. She was forgiving too, and on the rare occasions she would joke and let herself relax unless she was gambling of course.
She was like an older sister, a really cool older sister.
Naruto gave a small smile. "Sorry about that"
Mika chuckled "Nah I thought all night about it and before I give you my answer tell me about yourself."
Naruto looked down. "I don't remember."
Now Mika raised an eyebrow "Don't remember or Don't want too."
Naruto shook his head "Some guy name Danzo injected me with something, my bodies … abilities … changed and lost all my memories."
Mika looked up and closed her eyes. Her right and scratched her head and the other one supported her body against the railing. "Danzo… Danzo ah I know isn't it that guy in Konoha."
"Yep, I know this cause…well I have this ability ya see… I can … 'consume' people."
The Gobi Jinchuuriki looked into the blond one. "What"
"I can consume people like eat e'm for breakfast and inherit all their memories… and some pretty bad after affects"
Mika looked out again comprehending what he just told her. At first she thought it was a good ability but the way he said must mean the after effects must be horrible. "How bad is it." Mika asked carefully.
Naruto shook his head. "Its not bad in the heat of battle but afterwards I hear echoes of pain, it really sucks."
Mika nodded but then got a thoughtful look on her face. "Why are you telling me this anyways."
Naruto looked at her dead in the eye "I'm telling you this to show you I trust you."
Mika blinked and got a sly smile on her face. "What about her" Mika nodded torwards Yugito who was playing with a flopping fish.
Naruto chuckled "I haven't told her … she is … relying on my relation ship as a tether from becoming a mindless weapon or insane demon. Once we gather the others and everyone can really trust each other i'll lay down all the facts."
Mika nodded ocne again "Yea that's sound like a good plan"
Naruto turned back to the ocean, he could hear faintly the waves against the boat, the captain cursing at his sailors for being slow, even Yugito's giggling at the fish she was juggling, "So are you in."
"Yea., but why are your goals and why now"
Naruto shrugged "When I learned I was a Jinchuuriki I thought to myself there are others like me or at least similar. That to me tells me I'm not alone in this world."
Mika smiled at him and nodded "That's wise."
Naruto laughed bitterly "Comes with living over 6 lives and dieing every time."
Naruto looked back on to the ocean pushing away those haunting thoughts, he wondered what Wave was like. Mika left to go to her room. It was night now and they had only 2 more days till they reach Wave. (I don't know how to estimate distance so don't judge me).
After a while Naruto went to bed also.
The next two days were brighter in the sense that Naruto, Mika, and Yugito laughed together. They played around like old buddies and when Yugito would fish for … well fish … Naruto and Mika would rob the sailors, of their money, at poker.
At Wave (some unknown town which I have no idea what to call)
Naruto paid the captain extra so that he could say sorry to the sailors for ruining them. That extra was about 9000 Ryo. The captain said that if he ever needed a ride he could get it for free.
Naruto waved him off and called for Yugito and Mika.
"Alright guys lets walk around."
The ladies nodded. Naruto drifted around the town. He walked looking around with his sight he didn't bother to put his hoodie up because he probably hadn't been to this town before.
Then he noticed that some people were staring at him. They weren't Ninja but regular civilian. They were whispering at each other and pointing. Naruto's enhanced hearing made him able to pick it up easily.
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"Hey isn't that Naruto"
"Wait The Uzumaki Naruto the kid that saved our village"
"Yea I think that's him."
"Wait till he finds out about the bridge."
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'Well … $#& … the know me here.'
At this Naruto quickly ducked into a street and transformed into the informant he had absorbed earlier. Even though they probably knew something about his past he couldn't take the chance of leaving a trail, At least till the Akatsuki were destroyed. He walked slowly and continued looking around with his 'sight.'
As he walked Naruto pondered their words.
'So I have been here before, but I was a hero here.. huh.. must have done something good here. Now what was that bridge they were talking about.'
Naruto walked around town for a bit then he saw a very large bridge 'That must be it.'
As he neared it he saw what appeared to be two graves. 'hmm that's a huge Zanbato (sp much) I wonder who was it.'
Naruto turned to the bridge and blinked …. He blinked again. The bridge read
The Great Naruto Bridge.
'Wow they named the bridge after me; man my past self must have done something really big.'
Just then an old man with a sake bottle came up next to him.
"Admiring my work eh"
Naruto turned to him. The man had grey hair and glasses. He wore a head band and a sleeve less grey shirt, his shorts were a worn brown.
To reply, Naruto nodded and then he made his face into a curious and confused expression "Excuse me who is Naruto by the way."
The man laughed "The names Tazuna by the way, Anyways Naruto is the hero of this village. He was a gennin when he came and he was really energetic. He was supposed to guard me on a c rank mission but it was actually an A because they had to fight an A Rank NukeNin and his partner." Tazuna nodded to the two graves there.
Now Naruto raised an eye brow at this. From what he remembered Nuke Nin usually didn't get graves.
"The Nuke Nin was Zabuza. I forgot about the partner, anyways they were hired by Gato a crime lord controlling the wave. Naruto helped bring spirit back to the town and helped us fight back."
'Well that's unexpected'
Naruto nodded to the man "He sounds like a good kid."
Tazuna raised his sake bottle like a salute "He sure is, he always said he wanted to be Hokage too."
'Hokage… I wanted to be Hokage…'
Naruto smiled at the info he just got, it was both amusing and suprising.
Tazuna said he had to get back to his daughter and grandson. Naruto stayed behind and looked at the bridge. After a couple seconds Naruto called out "You can come out now girls"
The two Female Jinchuuriki appeared next to him. Mika was having a giggling fit.
"You ahahahhaahha…. Ahahhaha you wanted t ahahah bec-ahaha c-come Hokage shit man that was the funniest shit I have ever heard"
'Well shit' Naruto thought
Naruto shrugged "Must have been the past."
Yugito, with a smile on her face giggling softly, asked "What about the Sanbi"
Naruto shrugged "He's not here so we need to go."
Mika nodded "Where too."
"Well let me ask Kyuubi."
Naruto took a deep breath and went into his mind
Mindscape
Naruto's nose wrinkled at the smell 'dammit I really need to clean this place out.'
Naruto walked towards the room and said out loud "Kyuubi you really need to stop pissing and shitting on the floor it stinks."
"Shut it brat"
"Anyways, We need to know where is the Sanbi."
There was a pause and Naruto felt minutes pass by.
"Kyuubi"
"…"
"Kyuubi"
"ZZZZ…"
"DAMMIT KYUUBI GET YOUR F$CKING ASS UP"
"Huh what shit I fell asleep"
"Damn it don't fall a sleep old man"
"SHUT UP BRAT"
"Back on topic where is the Sanbi"
"Hmm across the bridge I think … Yea he's over there."
"Ok… Thanks."
"ZZZZZZ"
Naruto sighed and left.
Real world
Naruto blinked and shook his head. He turned back to Yugito and Mika and sighed.
"Stupid fox keeps going senile"
As Yugito and Mika chuckle, Naruto feels a stab of pain in his stomach. 'Ouch'
"Any ways the Sanbi is across the bridge so let's hurry."
"Yea"
Naruto smiled "Race you."
Mika and Yugito looked at each other, then back at Naruto "K'ay."
They lined up at the start of the bridge "Ready Set…. GO!" they cried as one.
Running off as fast as he could Naruto easily passed the Ladies who yelling curses at him.
It didn't take him long to make it through the bridge. When he was over half way (the girls where using chakra to keep up though they were really far behind). He detected chakra spikes. 'A battle… Shit"
Naruto yelled behind him "Sanbi is in trouble"
Naruto pushed chakra into his legs and ran faster. Naruto looked ahead and found 6 Hunter Nins fighting one Nin. This Nin had a slash across his head band marking him as a Nuke Nin.
The man was about the same age as Mika. He had Dark blue hair and aqua green eyes. He wore a tattered light blue shirt and dirty brown cargo pants. Naruto could feel something from this Jinchuuriki. He felt like the ocean on a slow day, soft, maybe tired, but something that could be dangerous if it wanted to be..
Immediately Naruto used his sight to see that the Nuke Nin was the Sanbi. Naruto's suspicion was confirmed and Naruto doubled his pace.
'Damn it not on my watch.'
While running Naruto transformed his hand into a blade and jumped up. His speed and height of jump led him in a perfect arc into one of the Hunter Nin. He slashed cutting the man perfectly in two.
Naruto moved in front of his fellow brethren and faced the Hunter Nin.
Naruto called out "Its ok the name's Naruto I am like you Sanbi"
The Nuke Nin eyes widened then immediately brightened and he chuckled "Well its nice to see someone who is a fellow brother."
The Nuke Nin got up slowly and slipped into a Taijutsu stance. He smirked and said "Once we get out of this I'll pay for the first round of drinks but who ever gets the least out these Hunter Nins has to pay the second." Naruto nodded and charged to his left and the Sanbi to his right.
To explain the positioning, Naruto had three on his left while Sanbi had two on his left. They did this because Naruto was fresh while Sanbi was quite winded from fighting and holding his own against six of them.
Naruto slashed at the closest Hunter Nin who jumped back; let's call him Hunter Nin 1, for sake of identification. The Hunter Nin to the left of Hunter Nin 1 , lets call him Hunter Nin 2, Callled out a water jutsu. From the water behind Naruto a Water Dragon came out and shot at Naruto
Naruto immediately thought to himself 'Sheild.'
His left arm swarmed with tentacles and a huge shield formed out of Naruto's left arm caught the blow. Naruto was pushed back but he took the blunt of the blow. Naruto looked over his arm briefly and smirked.
Not wanting the Nins to recover, the blond shape shifter charged at Hunter Nin 2, who was trying (key word tried) to recover from using a high jutsu, and skewered him through the stomach. As Naruto took out the blade tendrils shot out absorbing the body.
Memory of Intrigue(i gave up trying to find a good breaker)
"Your mission is to hunt Yamamato Masahiro"
"He is a Jinchuuriki be careful"
As Naruto filtered quickly through the memories he had absorbed quickly, he turned back to the fight. Now the third Hunter Nin who we shall call Stupid Idiot charged at Naruto screaming on top of his lungs.
Due to Naruto's memories from the Hunter Nin he understood how they were supposed to do their job well, he almost palmed is face with his shield. The Stupid Idiot was actually charging head on, For Crying Out Loud he had a Sheild and Sword.
Naruto shook his head and slash downwards enhancing the sword with Wind chakra. The Idiot was cut cleanly in half blood splashing the ground in gallons.
Naruto looked over to the last hunter nin/Hunter nin 1 who was going through numerous hand seals.
'Shit a high level jutsu.'
Suddenly Hunter Nin 1 stopped. With shaking hands the Nin 1 took out a kunai and stabbed himself in the throat.
'What the fck' Naruto thought.
He then felt two presence coming in. Naruto turned to see Mika panting her hands in the Horse seal. Naruto looked back and forth between the dying man and Mika. He finally snapped his fingers and said "Genjutsu right"
Mika nodded "Yea Gobi is also famous for Genjutsu (If you want to know look it up on the website I gave last time.)
Naruto smirked then turned his attention to the last two. The sanbi was holding his own against the two but he was having trouble finishing it.
Naruto leapt forward slashing with his sword. The Hunter Nin jumped back just in time. Naruto pivoted on his left leg and slashed with the wind chakra. The sword enhanced the slash cutting the Nin cleanly in two. The Final Hunter Nin turned to run when a cry was heard.
"Lightening style: Thor's Hammer."
Multiple bolts of Thunder came out from above the hunter nin. The bolts smashed down as if solid and fried the Nin into a charred corpse.
Naruto looked over to see Yugito breathing hard and her hand extended while her other was in a half tiger seal.
Yugito gave a small smile before walking over. Naruto turned over to Sanbi who was wobbling. Mika came up behind him and grabbed him before he fell. Taking him by the arms she lowered him slowly to the ground.
Naruto fished through his pack and pulled out a canteen. He tossed it to Sanbi who drank it eagerly.
"Thanks."
Naruto nodded to him and then turned to see that Yugito had arrived.
Naruto closed his pack and helped Sanbi get up. "C'mon we need to move By the way what's your name Sanbi. "
The blue haired man looked up and smiled tired "Yamamato Masahiro"
Yamamato Masashiro heh…
My rival, best friend, and drinking buddy. He always had a bottle on him, he said it was just incase we needed to party. The idiot, He was a good friend. He made sure everone wasn't stuck up and no better way to say it 'Go with the Flow'
He was a Older brother, or an old drunk but someone to lighten the day and wash away the bad times.
2 Hours later
Naruto explained his plan to Sanbi who, causing quite a surprise and after taking a swig from his bottle, immediately agreed.
"Alright Next order of business, I know for a fact that the Akaktsuki will not move for 3 more years. So here's my plan, we will train for 2 years straight and on the last year we will move around the Elemental Nations searching for the rest of the Jinchuuriki making they are snug and safe."
The other three Jinchuuriki nodded.
Naruto scratched his head "Now where to—" Just then Naruto felt a tug on his consciesness. "One sec guys Kyuubi's callin"
Mindscape
Naruto let himself be dragged into his mind. Suprisingly he was actually met by the cage instead of having to walk through the muck to get here.
Naruto just shrugged at the change and looked up at the cage "Whats up Kyuubi."
"-Yawwn- Well I suggest you head to the border of Konoha to an area called the Valley of Wrath."
Naruto filtered through his memories and remembered that the valley was ravaged by a huge Firestorm when Konoha was fighting Kiri. It was near the edge of Konoha but no one dared go near it fearing it was cursed by souls.
"Why there."
"Yawn, well over the decades Jinchuuriki have been using it as a hideout. There are tons of stuff there."
Naruto raised his eyebrow. "And how do you know this. I know there are other Jincuuriki before us but how do you know?"
"We demons like to brag about our Jinchuuriki…"
"…"
"…"
"OK thank you for the advise and … Yea…"
'Well that was really weird, Demons brag… wow'
Naruto exited his mindscape allowing his body to welcome his presence again.
Naruto blinked and rubbed his eyes. The other three were waiting patiently for a about 3 seconds.
Mika seeing he was back brought up the desired question "Well what did it want."
Naruto looked at her and sighed "He wants us to go to this place called the Valley of Wrath and train there he says he knows a place to train. Don't ask how."
The Three other companions nodded "OK lets go"
And so the Four Jinchuuriki set off torwards the Valley of Wrath.
Interlude or Time Skip
At Konoha
Jaraiya went right throught the gates not bothering to talk to the gaurds.
"J-jaraiya-sama you need to regist—"
"No time out of my way."
Jaraiya walked quickly, thinking how to break the news to Tsunade. Jariaya swept past the gaurds at the tower, inside the tower, and near the hokage's door. He entered right in and stared at the Hokage.
Tsunade looked at Jariaya and saw the look on this face. Immediately, an joking around passed. These two weren't the Super pervert nor the person that would hit the Super Pervert. These two weren't old war buddies and teammates going to talk about old times.
This was a soldier reporting to his Hokage.
Jariaya sighed "We have a problem"
Tsunade nodded. She did not question why Jariaya was back when he was supposed to be with Naruto. She knew what Jariaya said would be important.
Jariaya closed his eyes to pause. Then he opened his eyes and said "Naruto has been taken by Danzo."
Tsunade put her hands in front of her face and closed her eyes. "Do we have evidence to arrest."
Jariaya sighed again as he leaned against the wall, "I did but my contact … disappeared before he could give it to me."
"Let me guess Anbu root"
Yes, that's right Jariaya and Tsunade knew about Anbu Root. One lesson for shinobi is 'Never underestimate Jariaya's network.'
"I came here to inform you but also tell you not to send teams out for search."
Tsunade nodded Jariaya had his reasons "You'll search for him on your own."
"Yea, we need to keep up the charade we still have the gaki"
"And Dazo"
"We'll deal with him on due time, what about that other girl, Naruto's teammate."
Tsunade dropped her head "Actually I'll tell the rest of the rookie Nine"
Jariaya straightened up "Why"
"We need them to grow, we need more power. Konoha is weak right now I can see that, we need a new generation to blaze the way."
"And Naruto's disappearance would be a driving motivation to get stronger."
"Just how Naruto was with Sasuke."
The two nodded grimly. Naruto's determination was not something you would see normally in the Elemental Countries but his intentions were too pure he didn't know the dirty work of Konoha. He didn't know the true path of the Hokage, a path of a murderer.
A/N: Guys lets be reasonable, to be hokage you have to kill, and you have to be in anbu. I think you have to kill… A LOT…
They exchanged a few words on how to tell the rookie Nine and Jariaya left.
Tsunade sighed she took out a bottle of sake work be D$mned she needed a drink. As she poured sake into a bowl to drink she called Shizune.
"Get the Rookie nine in here NOW!!"
She was finishing her 2nd drink when the rookies came in with their sensei's. She looked at them at sighed. She had to tell them out right, tell them everything the Kyuubi , The akatsuki, Everything.
Kakashi looked around lazily and turned to the Hokage "Hokage-sama what are we all doing here."
Tsunande sighed 'Better start from the very beginning then.'
"What do you know about the Kyuubi…"
Valley of Wrath, the outpost of the Jinchuuriki
Naruto walked through the charred ground. What was strange is that it looked like it was done recently.
'Uh… Kyuubi is this safe.' Naruto focused on this thought hoping he wouldn't have to go into his mind walk or stand in filthy muck that was probably the Kyuubi's piss since it smelt so bad and listen to and worse smell the overgrown fur balls breath.
Naruto felt a stab of pain in his head, probably the Kyuubi being annoyed at his thoughts.
He felt a slight feel of reassurance and sudden 'knowing' that the charred ground was simply because a battle of demons was fought here.
Specifically, the battle was between the Kyuubi and the Hachibi. The Finish was so spectacular (at least in the Kyuubi opinion) that the land remained charred and hot (or sortive warm.) This air was blown by the ocean wind into Konoha's main living areas making it nice weather. No one really knew this because … no one bothered to come here and explore.
Naruto continued to look around for the cave that Kyuubi had mentioned. It was supposed to be hidden so that only people with Demonic chakra could see. So each of the Jinchuuriki charged a bit of the demonic chakra.
Naruto kept looking, jumping over rocks, hills, boulders, a cave… wait a minute a CAVE.
Naruto dropped down and saw a cave clear as day. 'I wonder how do I know this is the cave.' Naruto snapped his fingers and released his demon chakra.
Naruto blinked and saw that the cave wasn't there any more 'Wow must be a high level genjutsu.'
Naruto took a depth breath and called out "GUYS I FOUND IT"
He waited for 2 minutes and he heard 3 people drop down behind him.
He turned to see his 'family' had arrived. It took them 3 weeks to get to the Valley of Wrath and 2 days to scout it.
Yugito raised her fingers in a V pose "Yes we DID it"
Mika and Mashiro chuckled at her antics and started to walk towards the cave. Each of them channeled Chakra through out their body just incase there were traps that would spring if they didn't have it on.
Naruto walked through the cave unimpressed. It wasn't what he expected, yea he knew it wasn't like they had tools to build something but he expected a bit more. Naruto kept walking and then he saw a light up ahead. 'An exit'
Naruto transformed his arm into a shorter form of the Blade form. Yugito noticed and took out her tanto. Mika put on her gloves and Mashiro clenched his hands. They walked in to the next area and they dropped their jaws.
They were in an extremely furnished room with beds and a library of scrolls. There was a swimming pool/bathing pool to the side, some comfy chairs able to sit. Naruto walked forwards in awe. Then he noticed something strange there was light in here. Naruto looked up and his jaw dropped. At the top was a flaming red orb.
'Uhh… Kyuubi WTF IS THAT'
'Huh, oh that's just my jutsu I had my Previous Jinchuuriki learn so we didn't have to use candles'
'OH..' Naruto said in a small voice or … thought 'Wait how can I hear… ah nevermind'
Naruto walked around the huge room , more like hall. He then noticed 4 more doors. Naruto walked to the first door on the left and opened it.
Inside was a cool area just like the outside. But what bugged Naruto out was the stacks and stacks of weapons on racks and shelves. From Spears to Tantos. Also every 'section' of weapon had a scroll to it.
'Wow these guys were really good documenters.'
'You have no idea.' Naruto jumped but then he relaxed knowing it was Kyuubi.
Naruto left the room and walked towards the other room, once inside he saw a gigantous, I mean gigantious grand hall. Or at least huge ass room where one could train.
'We could use this to train but would it hold our power.'
'Gaki other Jinchuuriki have come here I think it'll hold' Naruto jumped again
'Stop doing that you senile fox'
'SHUT THE HELL UP BRAT'
Naruto ignored the Kyuubi's rant and moved to the last one. Once he was inside he nearly fainted, yes fainted. Inside was a farm. Yes a farm. Just like the main room it had a glowing orb. Naruto could see a river coming into the crops through irrigation.
'I wonder were the water comes from'
'The sea' this time Naruto was prepared for it
'How does that work'
'Seals to clean'
'Wait a minute how the hell am I talking to you anywas'
'There is demonic chakra running through here, it allows me to contact you easily'
'Ah now I don't have to go into the smelly sewer you always stink up'
'That sewer is your mind'
'Ah touché'
Naruto turned back and walked into the main room. Yugito layed sprawled on the floor. Mika had her head stuck in the weapons room and Masashiro was looking at some scrolls. He smiled and called out "Lets get started guys"
A/N: I really didn't like this chapter why it was SO HARD TO THINK. I needed to make a transition any ways if you have any questions please review or PM me.
To Fallen-Ryu
Hi, thank you for the review and all other reviews but i have a bit of a bone to pick with yours. You are implying that i took the title from you but i have some things that go against that claim.
I qoute Fallen-Ryu:
I ALREADY HAVE THE DAMN TITLE JERK! PLUS I HAD IT OUT BEFORE YOU!
End qoute
Now if you simply Look at the publishing date of the two stories they were published on the same day. Now how could i copy your title when we published on the same day...
Second I have only read a couple stories and one of them being Protofox by the Real Master Cheif before he re did it. This is where i got the idea from and also if you look in the reviews it is shown clearly i reviewed there a couple months ago.
So Fallen-Ryu i am not going to change my title because i have no need to. also i wanted to tell you your accusations have no ground on them so you can F off.
Chapter 3