Shunpo Naruto 2
A/N: I am still having a writers block so I'll keep going on this.
Here is a Pm I got from Challenger
Challenger: Naruto trains his all 5 senses(which already just as good as the Inuzuka Clan's, thanks to Kyuubi) by filling the Chakra Points that are in them.
Tenchi: Its been over done and I really don't want to make his senses that high
Challenger: Naruto learns Tsunade Super Strenght by filling in Chakra Points in a fist.
Tenchi: I have something to do with his hands that is simply more powerful, destructive, and … Bad ass
Challenger: Naruto's Taijutsu style should become Mixed Martial Artist that so power of many Taijutsu styles are one.
Tenchi: One Mastered Taijutsu is enough… I don't want too much. And plus I am going to make Naruto an MMA fighter later on…
Challenger: Also reason why Naruto choose the orange jump suit is so he can hide a ll training weights he is wearing under it.
Tenchi: Eh I don't want training weights its redundant… I'd rather have it part of his Mask.
Challenger: Also maybe Naruto makes the Shunko(in english "Flash Cry")technique that Yoruichi & Soifon used when they fought each other.
Tenchi: Now this I can agree with…
To all my old readers. Once again I am reuploading. Why is it so slow? I am rewriting and re-doing the story. Of course I will leave many things untouched but I will change things. Maybe make some grammer corrections or even change the freakin Kage's name to the proper one. Anyways Keep on reading and Keep on reviewing.
NOW ON TO THE STORY
Konoha
Naruto yawned as he got up. IT was finally the day he would start the academy. Naruto sighed he already knew the Curriculum for the first year of the Academy from his readings in the Library… He already knew what he was going to do… He would stare at the teacher and be blank… while he practices a very difficult chakra exercise of making a string, stiff but still Malleable, into that of a Paperclip, this was satisfying even though Naruto wanted to practice his elemental affinities.
Naruto knew his affinities were Fire and Wind. Wind and Fire were very dangerous or at least that was what Birdy-chan told him . Then he tried to practice it, and it didn't turn out so well. Wolf and Dolphin hog tied him and dragged him up a really tall tree and hung him there until he swore on the Ramen gods that he would not practice Elemental jutsu. Yes, Naruto did swear on it and yes,w Naruto did repent for his sins later.
So Naruto snuck into the library a couple months ago. This time he had Doggy-kun and Birdy-chan come with him. He read the Chakra manipulation all the way through, memorizing it.
After a good o'l two hours of so of straight reading, which was a miracle for Naruto. Both Anbu and Naruto were tired, well ok the Anbu were bored as hell and Naruto was sleepy. Now why hadn't Naruto gotten his research done already? Due to the fact that when Naruto read something he didn't understand, he wanted to research on it but the Anbu knew very well that would lead one thing to another and another and another until he had pretty much gone through a whole trip 'in and around' library and finally settle back down and read the Chakra Manipulation scroll again. Then when he finds another thing he did not understand… The process happens all over again. So Wolf had the very annoying task of making Naruto read everything in the chakra scroll first and then dragging him home, Wolf needed his sleep too.
When Naruto went home he 'found' a taijutsu scroll with a feather on it. Naruto made a note to say thank you to Birdy-chan.
As Naruto went through his daily exercises of dashing through trees, walking up and down the tree, across the river and back, sticking leaves to his finger tips while hanging upside down, and practicing Shunpo for thirty minutes Naruto put on his disgusting orange jumpsuit and ran to Academy not wanting to be late.
Naruto walked towards the academy. He arrived just as he wanted to be not too early as to draw attention but not to late to look like a fool. Arriving when more kids arrived would be optimal since other kids would be distracted amongst themselves. Naruto walked and looked around. Of course he did so inconspicuously…
He noticed a lot of clan members or heirs. This made Naruto raise an eyebrow… Maybe he wouldn't have to pretend at all or at least not hide his ability all that much. Naruto walked to the middle right of the classroom and sat down near the Aburame heir. Naruto turned to him and held out a hand
"Hello my name is Uzumaki Naruto" Naruto said with a small smile on his face but his eyes were dazzling with hope of a friend, that is of course if this Abrume's parents weren't biased against him… like for some reason all the other parents were.
The young Aburame had a large coat that covered most of his face and glasses on his eyes so it was hard to see his reaction. But the positive thing was that the Aburame turned to him and shook his hand.
"My name is Aburame Shino" Shino said while nodding
Naruto nodded as well. Naruto then turned and examined what kind of heirs did he have in the class. He had one from the Uchiha clan, Sasuke, brother of Itachi Uchiha; he would have to watch out for him. Next was a Hyuuga Hinata, Naruto had heard from
Doggy-kun what happened to her and pitied her. Naruto made a silent promise to not let it happen again. The other one was an Inuzaku Kiba though not the clan heir he seemed like a prideful boy. Another was the Ino-Shika-Cho trio kids. Naruto would definitely look out and watch over these three for like the Hyuuga, he owed a life debt to their families.
Naruto kept his promises even the unspoken ones.
Naruto broke out of his musings and used all his will power to not jump out of his seat and yell. This Chakra was the exact copy of Dolphy-kun. Naruto clenched his fists to calm himself down and turned towards the door. It slid open to reveal a man wearing a chunnin vest; he had his hair tied in a pony tail and a scar across his face. Naruto's eyes narrowed as he suspected the newcomers identity.
Iruka walked to the center of class cleared his throat. When the class did not listen Naruto could see a vein bulge on his head.
"SHUT THE FUCK UP BRATS" Naruto reeled back at the force of the yell and thought 'Yep definitely Dolphy-kun.
The years passed and Naruto became friends with all the students there. He was a nobody there or for at least people who couldn't see through his façade. There were only certain people who could see that he was holding back and Naruto was not surprised who did see through it. Nara Shikamaru saw through it after 3 weeks and questioned him nonchalantly while playing shogi. Yamanaka Ino a great pretender saw through it next. She pretended to be a weak girl but in fact, like him, it was a mask. Naruto asked her about it and she said that her father Yamanaka Inoichi had told her how he acted in school and used to act. Another person was obviously the silent one, Aburame Shino, who though his talks with Naruto, Figured it out easily.
Naruto made close friends with all of these peoples but he would not show them his true skills. When they asked him about it Naruto just referred them to the Nindaime's scroll.
Naruto stayed in the background scoring just average. But in secret, Naruto trained in his style becoming more proficient, and now under the under cover Anbu Dolphy-kun Naruto studied more history.
Time Skip 4 years later
Naruto trained heavily over the past 4 years in secret. His Anbu guards had retired from service when he was 10. He made sure they had a great send off since he did color all of their underpants pink. Wolf's hair was now yellow, Dolpin's scare was now a tattoo… Well for Bird and Cat… Naruto was too scared to do anything to them… last time he tried … well he got an extremely stern talking to.
IN the Soaring Fist style there were 7 levels and Naruto was on level 6. He learned that this Taijutsu style not only was a way to strike quick but also from afar. It showed a use of chakra and how to push it out in a burst. But the only problem was he compress the chakra enough no matter how much control he had. When he asked the Hokage about this, The Sandaime wrote several seals on his arms that automatically compressed the chakra and shoot it out when he pushed chakra in it.
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Naruto walked into the Hokage office to find the Old man working steadily on his dreaded enemy … Paper work.
Naruto cleared his throat and the Professor looked up.
The Sandaime brightened "Yes Naruto-kun"
"Old man I am having trouble compressing my chakra so I can send it out of my hand."
The Old man's eyes immediately narrowed "Naruto what have I told you about-"
Naruto raised his hand to placate the god of Shinobi "it is for my Taijutsu style I …Found a while back"
The Hokage sighed and said in a tired voice " I may not be a genius in seals but I am adept. I'll use them to compress the chakra. Come here Naruto."
As Naruto walked the Old man took out ink and brush
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Then Naruto started to ask more of about seals after several weeks the Sandaime relented. He took pages out of books and gave them for Naruto to studied. Naruto learned from explosive tags, to storage seals.
Naruto was adept at seals and he knew that the tattoo on his stomach was not a tattoo but a storage one… even if he couldn't understand it. But what … was this … the thing so many hated him for.
As for his shunpo Naruto copied, refined and made seals on his legs to create the Shunpo. Now Naruto could control the distance he could cross by just focusing how much chakra he focused on his legs.
Naruto also started to cover his hands with gloves so no one would notice the seals by accident.
To Naruto's delight Naruto read that if chakra is focused by seals it couldn't be properly seen by the Sharingan. A year after the Uchiha Massacre Naruto started to …dislike… the Sharingan for its… copying abilities. He read up many scrolls on how the Sharingan was used to copy or steal so many things it pissed him off. Yes it was a good weapon but there was a point where it had to stop. The stuck up Uchiha did not help either. Naruto felt sorry for Ino who had to keep up her mask as a love sick fangirl.
It was almost time for Academy Testing when Naruto was called into the Hokage's office with Dolphy-kun.
Naruto looked at the Hokage and did not see the Old Man he used to play with but the Leader of a Hidden Village. Naruto immediately dropped his mask and was all business.
Dolphin immediately started the conversation. "You called Hokage-Sama"
Sarutobi nodded "Mizuki has been receiving information from an outside source. I believe he plans to steal some thing from Konoha but I do know what. Naruto I am going to give you a mission to fail. If Mizuki approaches you and asks you to do something do it. I will have Iruka tail you. When the time is right he will appear and both of you will take out Mizuki."
Naruto mentally smiled at the part of 'Both'.
Both said in unison "Hai Hokage-sama"
As planned Naruto failed and when Naruto came out he silently left the room without a word. He sat on the swing and pretended to look sad. One of his friend tried to approach him but he simply jumped away.
As planned Mizuki told him to take the scroll and learn a technique.
Not as planned Naruto read the first technique in the scoll quickly 'Kage bunshin eh hmm allows user too… $^ly Sh#t … ITS AN ANSWER TO MY PRAYERS!!! NOW I CAN READ ALL THE SCROLLS!!! YEAAASSSS!!!!!'
Naruto quickly went through it but sadly Mizuki had not arrived yet. Naruto sighed.
'Well….' Naruto thought smirking 'Might as well take a peek at the other sections of the scroll.
Naruto opened another part of the scroll… Clone EXPLOSTION!!! OHHH… This one was even simpler than Shadow clone so Naruto learned it as well. Naruto skipped over some of Nidaime's water jutsu and Shodaime's Earth jutsu and came to where he wanted. Sandaime's Fire techniques.
Naruto looked at … shook his head and looked at it again. IT was a seal that was placed on one's arms… IT allowed the arms to be covered in FIRE!!
'Amazing creating seals that would transmute your chakra into Fire elemental chakra'
Naruto quickly memorized the seals and in his head mapped out how to incorporate it into his own and use its chakra to power it. 'ARGG This is so exciting but I need to write this all out. Lets read it one more time'
As Naruto did he felt the presence of Dolphy-kun in front of him. Naruto looked up and smiled "Hey Iruka –sensei"
As planned Iruka scolded him for stealing the scroll.
Naruto kept smiling and said "but Sensei Mizuki sensei told me"
Dolphin feigned surprise and said "Mizuki"
All of sudden they both turned their heads and jumped out of the way. A hail of kunai stabbed in their place.
Mizuki's eyes widened … how did they sense him… How did they even dodge that.
Naruto glared at the man "Mizuki-teme your under arrest for treason"
Mizuki's jaw dropped what the hell.
Mizuki decided to play it cool "ahaha stupid Brat do you actually think you were going to steal the scroll"
Naruto smiled and Mizuki's heart dropped "YEP I was ordered to by the Hokage."
MIzuki became enraged how dare this DEMON TALK TO HIM LIKE THAT. "You know What you are… Huh Naruto… YOU'RE THE KYUUBI"
Naruto's eyes widened … he stepped back. His eyes widened… jaw slack. Mizuki heart was filled with glee 'YES' Mizuki took out a shuriken and was about to throw it when his body suddenly felt weak. He felt something wet drip down on his clothes. Mizuki looked down to see 4 kunai's in his body. One just below his neck, one just below his heart, one in his lung, and the final one …in his most sensitive part… but it didn't matter because he died quickly.
Naruto closed his eyes and fell to the ground. Mizuki was taken care off by his old guards so he was fine. He pulled up his knees and held them in…'pain'. Dolphy-kun landed next to him and put a hand on his shoulder. Naruto looked up into Dolphy-kun's eyes. HE saw regret, sadness, and …comfort, love …and friendship…
Iruka smiled bitterly and said "come on lets go to the Hokage"
4 Hours Later
After debriefing with Naruto and a long explanation that Naruto wasn't the demon; Naruto was finally able to leave the Hokage tower and go to his house. Naruto put away his new forehead protector and sat on the bed and sat for a while. He reached out with his senses to make sure the familiar presences weren't there.
Safe from anyone prying into his privacy Naruto smirked. His plan worked perfectly. Naruto had learned of the Kyuubi a long time ago. Of course he had never met face to face with the Bastard demon he figured it out with the seals he was given. I mean come on people calling you a demon or Fox brat every day it kinda made you wonder why. Naruto being a genius figured it out simply.
Naruto took of his horrid jumpsuit and placed it on a hook in the middle of the room. Naruto then took out his own set of Ink and Brush and started writing away plans. He did so for forty minutes until he was satisfied with his layout.
Then Naruto started to draw on seals that would meld his Soaring Fist seals into Sandaime's Raging Flames But instead of using his chakra… They would use the Kyuubi's.
You see many people think seals are really hard… Not really. All you need to know is what is what. For example a Explosive tag simply is the intake of Chakra and release of energy like a grenade. So in reality it is just exploding chakra. Seals is like a microwave, Instead of warming it by yourself over a fire you could just put it in a micro wave and it would do it for you… All it needed was energy.
Now the different types of seals are not that hard either, just more letters or more combinations. Instead of 24 alphabets there were 298 and the bigger and more elaborate seals where just a combination of that. So if one knew how to break down seals into their base … that person could easily understand a foreign seal in just a few seconds.
Naruto was doing exactly that. He had already broken down the seals in his Soaring Fist Style and he spent 20 minutes breaking down the Raging Flames. After he mixed them together and added a buffer to collect 50% of Demon chakra that had not been purified.
This was like killing to birds with two stones. Though the seal on his stomach did in fact purify and add to his chakra… there was a constant flow of demonic chakra in him. Now normally Hyuuga's couldn't see it but Naruto guessed that it was a little sliver going through the chakra system. This messed up his control because he had his normal chakra and then this super hyped up chakra that he had to tame. And chakra is like college students in a party… when one area gets pumped up the whole party gets pumped up and break outs the beer.
So by taking some of those slivers he could pump up could easily power up his new Flaming Sky Lark Seal…
A/N: Here's my little spiel on this… the demonic chakra is obviously million times more potent then normal chakra so powering up a seal should be no problem. Now considering there is an non stop flow of small kyuubi chakra going through Naruto's body I think its gonna charge up fast. Also Naruto is not going to put this onto his legs because he thinks his Flaming Sky lark wont charge fast enough if he did.
Oh where I came up with the name I have no idea.
Naruto finished the seals and smiled. It had taken him 2 hours but he had did it. Naruto faced the HORRID ORANGE JUMP SUIT. He sent a small amount of chakra into his right arm.
Immediately his arm was covered in dark red flames. Naruto took the Muukuuken stance. His punch lashed out a burst of flame burning through the HORRID ORANGE JUMP SUIT, through the wall behind it, the other 5 walls behind it and finally out into the air.
Naruto looked wide eyed and the looked back at his hands. Naruto immediately stopped the flow by drawing back that sliver of chakra he sent to his arm.
He then looked back to the burning carnage he had left with his punch.
Naruto smacked his head 'Dammit how am I going to finish this.'
The Naruto remembered what he had just learn. Naruto put his hands in a familiar seal "Taijuu Kage Bunshin no Jutsu"
And 20 clones appeared. Naruto smirked… Oh yes this was the life.
The next day
Naruto woke up and looked stared at his sealing. He yawned and stretched his arms. He looked around and saw his Konoha protector and smiled. He put it on and look at himself in the mirror. Now he could stop pretending, Now he could show the world who he truly was. Naruto then turned walked over to the new wooden wall his clones had made. Naruto tapped it 'Maple eh not bad'
Naruto cooked breakfast and washed dishes. He did his stretches and remebered he had nothing wear.
Naruto bit his lip… Maybe he could visit Dolphy-kun for clothes. Then Naruto spotted a bag with carved statues of a bird on a wolf and a dolphin jumping over a cat .
Naruto smiled 'Today's a good day'
Naruto walked down to the academy in his new get up. He wore a black sleeveless shirt so he wouldn't burn it when he activated the F.S.L as he dubbed it. He now wore bandages covering his hands and fore arms. He wore a Brown cargo pants with multiple pockets and hooks that had shuriken holsters on them. Though these clothes may not seem much underneath there was a hard mesh steel steel similar to Dolphy-kun's girlfriend wore.
Naruto got in and looked up… He saw his friends smile… They knew what this meant… They knew this was the end of pretending and the beginning of a new era…
'Yes' Naruto thought 'This is a good day'
The end
A/n: JK YOU THINK I'd ACTUALLY END IT THERE AHAHAHAHAHHAHA
Hokage Tower early in the morning
The Hokage looked at his jounins they had finished assigning 1 through 6 and now came the hard part … the specialized teams. Seven through ten were the specialized teams which students would be the fore front of Konoha's ability.
"Before we start is there anyone you would like to claim"
Kakashi raised his hand "The Uchiha boy"
No one disagreed of course I mean the Uchiha boy needed a Sharingan mentor.
"Anyone else"
Suprisingly Asuma raised his hand "The Next gen for INo-Shika-Cho"
Sarutobi nodded "Alright" That was actually a good idea, because Asuma had worked a lot with the trio.
Then Kakashi raised his hand again. Sarutobi nodded
"HOkage-sama I would like to recommend Shinobi's Aburame Shino, Inuzaku Kiba , and Uzumaki Naruto for Kurenai's team.'
Everyone choked. Someone actually recommending a team for SOMEONE ELSE.
WTF O_o was everyone's face. It was unheard off, no not even thought about. Of course someone could ask for a specific student, maybe two students was pushing it, the rare exception for a full team… but for someone else… that was asking for a kunai up your ass.
Kurenai whipped her head around to Kakashi her face red with rage and her red eyes turned had turned into the glare of demon. But Kakashi had taken out his book and used the Ungodly powers of the Icha Icha to counter the death stare. 'Thank you Icha Icha gods' Kakashi thought
"KAKA-SHIT DO YOU WANNA TELL ME WHY THE FUCK YOU RECOMMENDED A TEAM FOR ME"
Sarutobi coughed and Kurenai blushed in embarrassment and bowed "I'm sorry for my outburst Hokage-sama"
The Professor waved his hand and turned back to Kakashi. "You're reasoning for your suggestion Kakashi."
Kakashi nodded "I believe Kurenai can develop this team into an Assault/Tracking/Capture team… with the situation with the other villagers we need teams that are more diverse."
Sarutobi nodded "and the Gennins chosen"
Kakashi nodded again "Kiba will obviously be a tracker but his clan techniques can also be used as an Assault. Shino can easily track like kiba and capture with his Kikai bugs. Finally Naruto is fit for all three… he has honed his senses after… a few incidents [This caused some men and women in the room to flinch] and he knows enough anatomy to knock out a person with a senbon, and finally with the techniques he has just learned and that he can easily be used in combat."
By that, Kakashi meant the Shunpo step but he had promised Naruto to keep it a secret and he respected that.
Sarutobi nodded he knew what Kakashi was talking about but Kurenai didn't. Once again glared at Kakashi but the blessings of the Icha Icha gods blessing still held true.
"Kakashi do you mean to tell me you don't want him because of it"
Kakashi looked at her and gave her his famous eye smile "I said that not it"
Sarutobi cleared his throat once again and they turned their attention back to him.
"Its decided then Kurenai you will get Aburame Shino, Inuzaku Kiba, and Uzumaki Naruto."
"Hai Hokage-sama"
"Kakashi you will get the rest"
"Hai Hokage –sama"
Sarutobi stood up and looked at his Jounins… His elites "I will not lie to you… we are on the brink of another war… no one will be cut this time but everyone will be trained. We will up the regiment on all gennins training them 6 days a week. Make them tough and strong. Pick up your own training as well, do not slack off, and carry the Will of the Fire with you dismissed."
With that the Jounins left to get their teams.
Sarutobi sighed and pulled out his pipe once again.
A/N: TWO CHAPTERS IN ONE DAY
YEAAA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
If anyone has questions go ahead and ask I'll answer them
Once again please review and I am going to post up the sequel soon!!
This is from some guy who didn't bother to leave his name
Hey, I just finnished reading your author page... I remember reading Shunpo Naruto before, and my question is "if you're glad to rewrite it, why does it suck even worse than before?" I mean before you had at least a modicum of respect towards grammer and spelling, but now it's like you dont even care.
Also, You fucking hypocrit! In your profile you defame all who would critisize an author for writing a fanfic the way they want, the turn face and bitch about how Kishimoto writes Naruto.
hypocrits get sent to the Maelbolge, resting place of traitors, not purgatory.
I would just like to say. Try having a story which you put a lot of time and effort in. You were all up and for writing the last chapter. And then you get an email saying your story has been deleted because of one small thing you did. Now then, once you've done that go ahead and talk to me about my grammer and my story. Yes of course there are times where my grammer and spelling are horrible but for you to flame me like this. IT makes me wonder why I leave the anonymous review on. Now then I'm pretty sure you've read my story before but do you really want to wait ALL That time for me to repost the story. I don't so STFU.