Shunpo Naruto Chapter 3
A/N: OK seriously why am I doing this …. I HAVE NO IDEA
OK right now your thinking why did I give Naruto such an OP power with the sealing… I didn't. The problem is he cant control it… at all and this will cause problems… Of course he wants to keep it hidden but there is a …special event that forces him to use it if he wants to stay alive. Of course that won't happen yet…
OH to Darksnider..
TEnchi: I would like to say thank you for Reviewing … Yes of course the mask is cliché but I couldn't think of anything else. Now for the torture thing… Couldn't think… Anyways I will fix it soon or before I finish this chapter… Either way I would like to say thank you because that type of criticism is good. Yea it might hurt the feelings but it tells what I can improve on and that.
Now please if you're going to say what's good or bad explain why.
Oh yea &&&&&& is a sign that there is a change in time place or anything at all that relates to the PAST FLASHBACK
ON TO THE STORY
Konoha Academy
Naruto was sitting talking in a drawl fashion with Kiba, who responded pretty well. Kiba and Naruto were wondering who they were going to be teamed up with… so they talked and jibed about who would be in which teams. They argued about a couple placements but they both agreed that if Sasuke was put with Ino and Sakura… Sasuke would suicide. Naruto said in 3 days, Kiba gave him 1.
Then Dolphin came in with a clip board. Now of course Dolphin or … Iruka was not in his Anbu get up but Naruto always put that tag on him. Everyone quieted down. This would be the last time they would consider him a teacher and they knew to respect that.
Iruka looked at all of them "Today you will graduate and become Ninja. But unlike how we usually do things we are going to test your abilities and train them to the limit."
Many of the students murmured at the change but stopped once Iruka continued on.
"I will not lie to you … we are on the brink of another war… Hostilities are high and your actions in the future will decide how this play out. Train your hardest; Keep your comrades safe… Carry the Will of the Fire." And with that the Students held their breaths as he listed the names
Iruka started to call the out the first 6 teams and they left with their Jounin instructors.
Iruka looked at the nine left and sighed "You guys are the specialized teams… You'll be run into the ground and then some… You are now the foundations of Konoha don't slack off one bit."
As Iruka called out his team "Inuzuka Kiba, Uzumaki Naruto, and Aburame Shino."
Naruto smirked. He got a good team… a versatile team. Kiba and him were perfect in combat, Kiba and Shino were good trackers too, and Shino and him could capture if put to the test.
Kiba jumped down to Naruto's row and Shino was already sitting in the row. Kiba gave a feral grin and Akamaru woofed in glee.
Shino nodded to both of them and Naruto just leaned back and smiled.
"Looks like we're team mates now" Naruto said in a satisfied voice.
"Yea" Kiba responded
Shino remained silent and let the two talkative people do the chattering.
Then Kiba noticed the bandages.
"Hey Naruto what are those bandages for"
Naruto looked at his hands and then turned over to see that team 7 was still in the room. Naruto turned back too Kiba "Tell you later when we are with sensei"
Speak of the Devil…
Kurenai Yuuhi just walked in. "Team 8 with me please"
They followed Kurenai into a café and sat down in a booth. Naruto made sure to look away when the Waitress was serving them so she wouldn't find out it was him and cause trouble.
They got their food and waited for Kurenai to speak.
Kurenai gave a nice friendly smile and started to speak "My name is Kurenai Yuuhi, I like my friends, learning Genjutsu, My dislikes are perverts and sexists, my dream is to become a master of Genjutsu and raise a good team."
The whole team blushed at the comment. After a few seconds of silence Naruto decided to take charge.
Naruto gave a smile "My name is Uzumaki Naruto, I like Ramen, Friends, Learning and Reading, and a Certain bunch of 4 [Kakashi sneezed on Sakura, Iruka sneezed on his food, the Neeko sneezed on her boy friend who coughed, and the Eagle sneezed on her nephew Neji.] My dislikes are Traitors, Biased people, How the Library closes late… My Dream is to become the greatest Nin I can."
Kurenai mentally put a note that Naruto had ambition, which was quality in a leader, if controlled of course.
Shino looked at Naruto quizzically or so everyone thought because they could see his eyebrows rise above his head. "Why do you not like the Library closing late?"
Naruto smiled at him and nonchalantly said "because it makes me wait longer to sneak i- … Never mind" Naruto caught himself just in time or at least so that the other gennin could not hear.
Naruto blushed and looked away. Kurenai raised one of her own eye brows 'hmm sneaking into a library eh'
Kiba decided to go next. " MY name is Inuzuka Kiba, I like Akamaru, my friends and chasing cats, I dislike My sister giving me noogies, people who can't keep secrets, and Baths, (Kiba shuddered for a brief moment and then continued) My dream is to become a legendary Tracker."
Kiba nodded to Shino who nodded back.
"My name: Aburame Shino, I like: Friends, Bugs, and Learning how to use clan techniques, I dislike: People Killing bugs, Water and pesticides, My dream: to be a worth Clan Leader."
Shino nodded to signify that he was done.
Kureani smiled once more "Ok tomorrow you'll be tested on your abilities and we will find out what you need to improve on. I'm sure Iruka has told you that you cannot fail but if you don't do well I will make you train Seven days aweek instead of Six. Your objective tomorrow is to capture me. You have the rest of the day to figure out a plan. Meet up with me at training ground 12 at 8:00"
The Trio nodded to show that they understood her message.
Kurenai left and the new Team 8 walked out in silence. NaRuto reached out with his senses to make sure Kurenai had left. After a few minutes he was sure that she was not in the immediate vicinity. Naruto turned to Shino "Did you mark her with a Kikai"
Shino nodded "It seemed logical to do it at the time."
Naruto turned to Kiba "You got her scent"
Akamaru yipped twice. Kiba translated "Yep"
"Alright follow me I know a good place to train."
Both Kiba and Shino nodded and Naruto led the way to Training Grounds #39.
It was a large pretty large and clear but there were some large boulders planted on cetain spots for target practice or cover.
Once they had arrived Shino decided to speak up "I think it would be good if we knew each others abilities"
Naruto nodded "Yea that's a good idea … I'll start"
He waited for any disagreement but received none so continued.
"My Taijutsu is called The Soaring Fist style it mainly focuses on the hands and striking from multiple angles. I have not mastered it yet but I am close."
Shino nodded and add in his two cents "After we finish explaining lets have a spar to better grasp each other's techniques"
"I have a couple techniques. My first one is Kage bunshin it allows me to make a solid clone but it takes an unnatural amount of chakra. My second Technique is a combo of the Bunshin. Jibaku Bunshin which allows me to make my Kage bunshin explodes but this is very dangerous and takes up a huge amount of chakra. My signature technique is Shunpo… By concentrating chakra into my feet and then pushing it out in a burst I can move in incredible speeds."
Shino was interested in this technique "Naruto Could you demonstrate this Shunpo"
Naruto nodded. He faced in a clear path concentrated chakra and stepped… WHOOSH… Naruto disappeared and reappeared a quarter of a mile where he stood. Naruto then turned on his heal stepped once more and Came back to them.
Kiba's jaw dropped and Shino's eye brows could clearly be seen
"HOLY SHIT" Kiba yelled.
Naruto Blushed and scratched the back of his head. "Thanks"
Kiba jumped up like a giddy child "You gotta teach me how to do that."
Naruto sighed "I don't think the technique would fit you"
Kiba stopped immediately and looked sharply at Naruto "Why not?!"
Naruto looked Kiba dead in the eyes "Your clan techniques make you go on your 4 hands and legs. I think it would be better if we adapted Shunpo into something that would fit you."
Kiba closed his mouth and nodded… Naruto wasn't denying his request just saying that maybe there was something better for him.
Naruto then unwound his bandages to reveal the array of seals. "This is my master piece."
Kiba and Shino looked at it intently until Kiba asked the question they were both thinking "What is it?"
"It's an array of seals I call the Flaming Sky Lark Seal it automatically converts my chakra into Flame elemental chakra and covers my arms with it. When I push chakra into it I can make a burst of flame come out… It is very destructive and I will never use this technique on an ally… its just too dangerous."
Naruto then rewrapped his arm with the bandages. "Finally I know how to dispel genjutsu but using the actual the actual style is useless to me because my chakra… seems resistant."
Kiba nodded in understanding he was worthless in the department of genjutsu also.
Kiba once again decided to follow "Any ways like Naruto my Genjutsu is Non existent ..."
Kiba picked up Akamaru and put him on his head.
"My Taijutsu is from my Family clan I get on my hands and feet and charge on four legs like a dog. It uses speed and makes powerful blows. As for my Ninjutsu I have two main ones the Man Beast clone in which Akamaru turns into a replica of me and Gatsuuga is when we launch our self at the opponent spinning rapidly … It is similar to a drill attack."
His teammates nodded to show their understand-ment in his technique.
Finally it was Shino's turn
"I have no genjutsu and my Taijutsu is from a simple brawl style made my caln to get in close and apply kikai bugs… I know the Bug clone and Bug Dome technique…"
Both Kiba and Naruto sweat dropped At Shino's … Lack of words.
Naruto then turned to Kiba and asked "Can I see your Gatsuuga on that rock"
Naruto pointed to a small boulder a couple feet away. Kiba nodded and yelled "LETS GO Akamaru"
Akamaru turned into a replica of Kiba on all fours. They ran at the Rock and started to spin "GATSUUGA!!!"
Kiba and Akamaru crushed the rocks into bits. Akamaru turned back into his dog form and yipped happily. Kiba got back on to his feet and gave a V sign "yea how was that"
Naruto nodded "That was good…"
But he was distracted thinking on how to improve it. 'They're very destructive but lacking speed and against a jounin we need to be faster… of course I am faster with Shunpo if I can outrun Anbu but…"
Naruto snapped his fingers "That's it" He exclaimed. Naruto ran over to Kiba and Akamaru
"Hey can you start spinning in mid air. "
Kiba thought for a second "Yea but if we did something like that we would have to be in mid air already and moving forward."
Naruto smiled "Alright try again and lets go against that one" Naruto pointed to a HUUUUGE ROCK.
Kiba Jaw DROPPED. He whipped his head towards Naruto "DO YOU WANT TO GET US KILLED"
Naruto shook his head "Trust me"
Kiba shook his head "Fine but your covering my Hospital bills"
Once again Akamaru turned into Kiba. Naruto then said to both of them as he grabbed the scruff of their collar " Make sure to start spinning as sonn as I let go."
Naruto used Shunpo with a little extra due to the extra weight he went forwards at high speed his arms groaned in pain. Naruto landed and through the two forward "GOOO!!" Naruto cried out.
Kiba and Akamaru started to spin but instead of swirling they went so fast they were their own separate Missile. They crushed through the rock leaving 2 clear tunnels between it.
Naruto tried to get up and found an arm supporting him. Naruto looked over to see Shino helping him up.
"That was impressive" Shino said nodding towards the two smoking tunnels in the Boulder that were just made.
Naruto smiled "Yea"
Shino and Naruto ran towards where Kiba and Akamaru were. They found Akamaru in the fetal position his beady eyes replaced with swirls. Kib who was next to him was no better. He was lying sprawled on his back and Swirls as eyes.
Shino set Naruto down near Kiba and then sat down himself. Naruto turned to Shino and smiled "this is a good technique huh"
Shino nodded.
"By the way Shino how much chakra control do you know"
Shino thought for a moment
"I know tree climbing and Water walking at a young age before I got my Kikai so I would not endanger them."
Naruto nodded that was expected from a clan like them. 'Well then they are probably good on chakra control cause I know the Inuzuka work on it also. But they don't have a lot of techniques'
Naruto snapped his fingers. "Hey shino do you think you can sleep over tonight at my house."
Shino raised his eyebrows in shock but he quickly recovered "Maybe Naruto I am assuming we should bring Kiba as well."
Naruto nodded
"What is this about sleeping over" Kiba got up groaning.
"Well you guys need more jutsu and I know where to find them but we need to go at night."
Kiba looked at Naruto with a questioning look on his face.
Shino answered for Naruto "Does this have to do with sneaking into a 'Library'"
Naruto nodded.
Kiba jumped up grabbing Akamaru and putting him in his coat "Come on then lets go!"
Shino stopped him "Wait we still have to spar"
Kiba froze and scratched his head looking sheepish "uhh Yea forgot about that"
Inuzuka clan house
When They arrived at Kiba's it was pretty late. Shino had passed out some energy bars for dinner. Kiba opened the door and The trio went in. Kiba walked in through the yard and into the main house.
"WHERE HAVE YOU BEEN PUP!!!"
Kiba eyes went wide "DUCK!!" he Yelled.
His team did so and a bottle came sailing over his head.
Naruto saw a Feral women who had just thrown the bottle. Naruto assumed her to be Inuzuka Tsume the clan leader.
As they stood Kiba started yelling back "MOM! JEEZ WHY ARE YOU OVER REACTING! MY AND MY TEAM WERE SPARRING!"
Tsume looked over at his teammates and lingered on Naruto. Tsume shrugged "Fine Now why are they here… Over for dinner or something."
Kiba shook his head "Nah We were going to do some … Late night training and camp out is that ok"
Tsume shrugged again "Fine but you come back tomorrow night. GOT IT PUP!!!"
Kiba blushed and nodded "Yea mom"
"GOOD NOW GET OUT OF HERE!!!"
And with that they were kicked out of the grounds.
Naruto turned to Kiba with a sweat drop on his face …"Kiba is it just me or is your mom a bit-"
Kiba looked at him and sighed "Yea I know"
Aburame Clan grounds
Shino had led them to his house and Kiba and Naruto found it was layered with trees for bug production.
Shino led them through the clan grounds and finally into a back brush area.
Naruto saw an older version of Shino… He had the same hair glasses heck even the coat was similar.
"Father"
The clan head Aburame Shibi turned to them.
"Shino"
"My apologies for being late, My teammates and I sparred to test each other skills."
Shibi nodded "I believe you have more to say"
Shino nodded also "I would like to camp out today and spend more times planning with my teammates"
Shibi nodded and turned back to his work.
With that team 8 left… silent at the difference between Aburame and Inuzuka.
Naruto turned to his teammates and scratched his head "Didn't your parents work on the same team"
Both of them nodded. Naruto whistled in awe and kept walking back to his apartment with his teammates in tow.
An hour later
Naruto showed them his apartment and got out some spare futons. Kiba was lounging his couch with Akamaru and Shino was sitting on a chair. Naruto looked at them and sat down.
Naruto decided they needed to work "Its going be an hour and a half at the least before we can go into the library without getting caught. We have two objects in there"
"One find out Jutsu and two find out About Kurenai-sensei"
Shino nodded but then asked "How are we going to find about Kurenai-Sensei"
Kiba spoke up this time "I heard that they kept records in the libraries so we maybe able to find something about her in there."
Shino raised an eye brow "I thought they kept records in the Hokage tower"
Naruto shook his head "that is official Registration but information like Test Evaluation or Psyche tests are in the Library … Most likely in the restricted section. I can probably break in by picking the seals."
Shino decided to keep the ball rolling "I Think we should work on some tactics."
Naruto and Kiba nodded.
The next Day
Kurenai got up bright and early to get some nice and healthy food.
Kurenai yawned and felt a hand on her waist. She looked down and saw it was small and petite….
'Oh Shit .. OH shit …. OH SHIT!!!" Kurenai turned to see Anko lightly snoring.
'FUCK' Kurenai got up and looked down at herself and immediately relaxed. She was in her full night gown, panties and all. (Stop thinking it you dirty minds).
Anko was also fully clothed… If you could called it clothed.
'Thank kami' Kurenai got up and started to cook some eggs and boil some miso soup.
Anko woke up from her groggy state and yawned. "Oh Nai-chan thank you for letting me sleep over… I'll help you teach the brats too as promised… YAWWN"
Kurenai immediately stopped. She had asked Anko to TEACH THE GENNIN…
What had she done…
Naruto's House
Naruto woke up and quietly passed Kiba and Shino… He took out a pan and started to fry some eggs. He put some bread in the oven and got out some cups for water.
He then heard Kiba get up and walk out. Akamaru was still in his jacket that was on the couch. "Morning Naruto"
"Yo Kiba getting some food ready"
Kiba raised an eyebrow "You know how to cook"
"Yea its an important skill you should learn it"
Kiba rolled his eyes and started to pour water into the cups and set them on the table.
Shino finally got up and just nodded to Kiba and Naruto.
The team scoffed down their food and all ran together towards the training grounds.
As they ran Naruto turned to Kiba and asked "hey Kiba I read something about Soldier pills do you know what they are"
Kiba nodded he took out a small reed pill and explained, "These were made by the Akimichi … they are little pills packed wit nutrients and everything … it makes the body run on overtime and doubles its efficiency but when it runs out it is easier to knock you out because your body slows down heavily."
Naruto thought for a second 'That doesn't really seem safe… Maybe if I use something like…' "Kiba do you remember my seals that I have on my arm…"
Kiba nodded
"Well to produce the flames the seals have to store chakra and convert it into flame … I was thinking we could do it for you , so your jutsus could last longer."
Kiba smirked "Alright … but where are you going to put it"
Naruto thought for a second "I've read the best place to store chakra is either on your head or base of your neck or the stomach… I don't think you want it on your head because many would ask questions and your stomach would be weird so I think the neck would be the best."
Kiba accepted his reasoning and asked another question "but other than just hiding it with my clothes is there another way we could disguise it."
Naruto bit his lip "I'll have to reference in the library … I remember it saying something about seals in the appearance of Tattoos. "
Shino then decided to speak up "Do you all remember the plan"
Shino's teammates nodded they remembered all the info they had gathered yesterday…
&&&&& Flash Back
Kiba, Naruto and Shino both walked up the wall of the Library very quietly. Naruto opened the loose window and ushered them inside. Like always Naruto went to the Accountants and grabbed a candle but this time he grabbed some extra ones.
He walked back carefully to Kiba and Shino who were looking around. He handed them out and they used Kiba's matches to light them. Kiba had a whole survival pack sealed in a scroll in his back pocket… Why because his mom was paranoid.
They walked around carefully looking for the subjects they assigned themselves.
Naruto was searching for some Ninjutsu for both Kiba and Shino. This was the harder part because There were not many high rank ninjutsu here… Too dangerous… Instead they had basic and maybe chuunin level jutsus. Naruto was assigned this task because of his kage bunshin… He would read each scroll and pick which one would have a low chakra cost while at the same time beneficial to them.
Shino being an analyzer would look at The maps for Training ground #12 and draw a copy… He would also mark areas where they could implement their planned tactics. Then Shino would go to Naruto, report, and get the ninjutsu scrolls to copy.
Kiba was assigned finding about Kurenai. As a tracker Kiba had to memorize descriptions on the fly and he practiced at home by reading a line of text once and then remembering it at the end of the day.
&&&&&&& Flash back end
Sadly they only got two Jutsus each that would really help them without hampering their chakra supplies but it would have to be enough.
They arrived at the Training grounds to see Kurenai and Some other women with her. Naruto climbed over the rocks and such and walked over to Kurenai.
When he and his team got there they all nodded and greeted her "Kurenai sensei and …"
Naruto scratched the back of his head "I'm sorry Lady I don't know your name"
The scantily clad women scoffed as she took a bite out of her Dango stick, she had in her hand. "the Name's Anko kid, I'll be helping you train in Combat later… Nai-chan over here will work on Capturing and we'll both work on tracking."
Naruto nodded it was not weird that Jounins stuck together when training.
Anko got up still chewing on Dango "I'll be watching from over there..." Anko pointed to a large tree that was near the edge of the training grounds. "See ya" Anko gave a cheery wave and Jumped over there"
Kurenai shook her had and turned to her team "Alright you have 1 hour to find me and I will be in this Training grounds … You cannot use the Trees for cover nor will I … BEGIN!"
Kurenai disappeared under genjutsu and the rest of team 8 jumped back as one.
Naruto looked back and forth trying to find his sensei but there was no avail.
Naruto whispered to his team "Do you guys have a track…"
Kiba shook his head "There is an overwhelming stench of… perfume it's covering my senses…"
Shino also shook his head. "It seemed my Kikai bug was disabled with said perfume..."
Naruto sighed and closed his eyes. "ALRIGHT THEN I'm USING THAT"
Naruto immediately jumped up his bandages unraveling …Kiba and Shino immediately jumped back even father not wanting to get caught in the AOE…
Anko was looking with interest 'Good their working as a team and they know each others abilities … very interesting… But what is the Fox boy doing.' And then everyone saw it.
Naruto who had jumped about 40 feet in there thanks to his Shunpo. Naruto charged a good amount of chakra into his arm… he hoped Kurenai sensei wouldn't get caught in this.
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Flash Back
Naruto opened his door … His face was nervous "uhh here's my house."
Kiba and Shino stepped in and looked around. His house was actually quite neat… Though some of the stuff was worn because he had found them in the Dump…
Shino walked over to the other side of the room and inspected the kitchen… There wasn't much in it but it was still enough to get by. Shino raised an eyebrow at the Spartan like areas Naruto had.
Kiba looked at a certain spot In his little house… The newly made wall.
Naruto scratched his head "Ehh… Kiba whats up"
Kiba pointed to the wall "that's smells brand new and all the walls behind it too.."
Akamaru yipped in agreement
Naruto scratched his head again and gave a shaky smile. "I kinda… used the seal I made on a target to practice and it caused that…"
Kiba and Shino both turned so fast Naruto thought they would break their necks.
"WHAT" Kiba shouted
Naruto sighed and explained…
Flash back end &&&&&&&&
Naruto pulled his fist back the fire burning like a Furnance on his arm… and in one motion Naruto turned his body and thrust with his right arm and whispered "Flaming Swallow Drive"
A huge stream of flames came out of the fist scorching the lands in front of him…
Though it did not cover all of the it did burn everything on the surface. Naruto fell to the ground and said "Initiating tactic 27"
Anko's mouth dropped… This kid had just sent a jutsu that burnt a good portion of the field albeit only on the surface. That was at least a B rank technique. She turned and expected to see Naruto on one knee panting like crazy but he was only BREATHING HARD!
'Damn Nai-chan struck gold'
Kurenai
'Dammit I so did not strike gold on this'
Kurenai was in the in the middle …. THE VERY MIDDLE of the attack… She did the only thing she could … Duck under ground…
Naruto
Naruto turned to Kiba "Scent?"
Kiba nodded "Straight ahead but the winds changing course so hurry."
Naruto nodded Akamaru had finally gotten out of Kiba's jacket and prepared itself for tactic 27…
Kurenai got out of the ground and found that Kiba was running right at her on all fours.
'Why is he doing that he's practically a mile away from me' Just then Naruto ran up behind him grabbed Kiba by his collar..
Kurenai narrowed her eyes 'What is he…'
Suddenly Naruto disappeared and reappeared only 10 feet away Kiba was Already spinning in motion and coming at her when Naruto cried out "Naruto Kiba combonation: Drill Bullet 1"
Kurenai jumped up and Kiba smashed into the ground debris flew up in huge chunks… 'Shit what the hell is that… wait a minute WAS THAT WHAT KAKA-SHIT WAS TALKING ABOUT'
She was suddenly broken out of her musings as she sensed a presence behind her …She turned and saw another Kiba! With Another Naruto coming right at her!!!
They cried out together this time "Naruto Kiba combination: Drill Bullet 2" Naruto threw Kiba with that same disappearing technique… and attached himself to a nearby boulder in the air.
'Sh*t' Kurenai immediately Kawamaried with a rock nearby and as she looked back she saw that the rock was completely crushed to dust. Kurenai went wide eyes 'Are they trying to kill me'
Suddenly she felt a grab from behind and she saw that Naruto had grabbed her in a Full Nelson hold.
Kurenai, her brain working over time, stuttered out "how did you-"
Naruto chuckled "I Kawamried with one of the many clones I had set up in the field"
Kurenai then smirked "Good plan but that won't-"
"Who said I Kawamaried with this one-" a voice called out
Kureani looked at the voice to see Naruto standing in front of her… "Then is this a kage bunsh-"
"Nope" Kurenai turned to the voice on the other side of her to reveal Shino…
"It's a Bug clone"
As the Naruto bug clone bursted and formed a loose dome around Kurenai Shino spoke "Sensei if you were the enemy I would have simply allowed my Kikai to suck your chakra."
Kurenai nodded "You've captured me"
With that Shino recalled his bugs. Kiba Walked up with Akamaru on his head both seemed unsteady… Naruto plopped himself on the ground panting… those multiple Shunpo's were really tiring.
Kurenai smiled at them "Congratulations on capturing a Jounin… Now we…"
"HEeeeeey NAI-chan! Don't keep them all to yourself!" Anko said as she jumped down from the trees.
"We have a lot of work to do brats" Anko said smiling
She grabbed Kiba and Naruto put them in a headlock. The headlock made their face touch… certain assets… making the duo blush… Shino and Kurenai just sighed…
-_-
This was the beginning of the next legendary team of Konoha…
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