Shunnpo Chapter 5
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OK HERE WE GO
This is a review by Crypton89
Crypton89: Well that wasn't bad at all. I never knew you liked NarxYugi so much but I certainly could live with that. They would make a good pair and are nearly the same age.
Tenchi: Eh it depends on the reader
Crypton89: Now for the chapter: I'd have to say that it's a good thing that all three of them are becoming stronger and not just Naruto alone. If you look at Kishi's team 7, you can see that till the finals of the Chunnin exams, none of the three Ninjas made any progress which I think kind of sucked. They didn't even get any training from Kakashi which is not the case in your story where they are trained by Anko and Kurenai. (Anko appears more than Kurenai :))
Tenchi: Well technically they are in a time of high crisis and high alert so they doubled up the training regiment… PLUS Someone's group is going to be reformed at least… officially
Crypton89: I wonder what Naruto's skill in fuinjutsu in curently, since even though it doesn't appear in many storys can be a very pactical asset, when you are dealing with Jinchuriki, emaninating seals, traps, developping seals etc. I'mnot saying you should only write about those things but sometimes you could bring this up on occasion if you want to.
Tenchi: Naruto's skill in Fuinjutsu is all red stuff… None of the super stuff like sealing demons or making elaborate seals. Naruto has a great understanding in seals in which he can break down seals into their basic parts and replicate the effect with simple seals.
Crypton89: Than there also is the part of Naruto's training with dispelling Genjutsu, does he also learn to cast them or isn't he a Genjutsu type just like it is the case in Kishi's Naruto?
Tenchi: He isn't a genjutsu type
Crypton89: If I am not mistaken than you got the name of the one Naruto is playing Shogi with wrong. Nara Shikaku is Shikamaru's father, Aburame Shibi is Shino's father but there is no Nara Shibi I think, but that is only a detail and not an important one at that. A negative thing I have to say, is the part of Shino's progress, it's to much progress at one time, you wrote that he had to put up with 20 kilo weights and run a lot, what about the other 2 didn't they have to do the same things?
Tenchi: OH… T_T … Anyways onto the second part… I felt that Shino was under powered and needed him to be a bit stronger. Kiba shall be learning a type of Shupo but different from Shunpo so will Shino… And no they are all training to improve what they lack not improve in what they specialize.
Crypton89: I think that no Aburame is a taijutsu type or any good at that, and than there is Shino who suddenly becomes really fast even so fast that Naruto has to use Shumpo in order to win against him in a taijutsu fight? That is to exagerated, since I thought that Naruto was a rather fast ninja even without Shumpo. I hope that Naruto's speed will go up a lot and Shino's stop to progress or at the end of your story Naruto won't be anything out of the ordinary. Of course you are free to carry on with the story just as you like since it's yours but the other way around it would make your story a lot more credible.
Tenchi: Bah I'll make it up… Shino has been increasing his weights so he is faster. Now yes Naruto is fast with out shunpo but you have to remember Naruto is not using weights and I just said gain upper hand… Naruto could still win in a Taijutsu fight without it but Naruto would be hard pressed to do it…
Crypton89: Now for Yugito, holy shit that was a lot of bonding only trough eye contact ;) if you don't make those two a pair it's gonna be war :). I definitely don't dislike NaruYugi so make it pairing rather than simple friendship and we will be good. ;)
Tenchi: Uhh.. TY I like NaruYugi … but the reason I put it in there was because I wanted to focus on the concept of connection… I feel that Kishi did not focus enough on the familiarity of Jinchuuriki simply because the Jinchuuriki did not meet. Gaara and Naruto don't count… at least to me they don't… And NaruYugi…. Is still a maybe I have doubts on what readers would want but I can make it work… Well…
Crypton89: Also thanks for the comments regarding my review, I always like it when the author takes the time to look at what the readers wrote and replyes even he deems the review 'worthy enough' :). Keep up the good work and update fast please. I very satisfied with your work so far.
Tenchi: Thank you for reviewing its nice to see people reading my stories and telling me what they think about it…
This is a review by the DragonBard:
the DragonBard: Need to explain the differences between Shunpo and Shunshin.
Tenchi: There are very big differences. Though both involve speed Shunshin is just used to move once place… Faster and is limited by how fast the user can go. Shunpo is used in combat and can be used for combat in all forms of dodging and attacking. Shunpo also increases a person's speed by their use and concentration of chakra and how much they force out…
Shunshin – Speed
Shunpo – Chakra manipulation.
This is a review by FFwatchdog:
FFwatchdog: just so i can be clear on this, naruto isnt going to be teaching everyone and their uncle flash step right?
Tenchi: NO he is going to teach his temamtes a different form of Shunpo… But only because it fits their style…Now Later in the story this will become the signature move of team 8…
FFwatchdog: and will naruto reach a flash step "master level"? i mean because i was looking at bleach some more, and flash step is pretty badass, and is vastly superior to the hirashin.
Tenchi: Naruto has a long way until he can reach the master level. What I mean is Naruto doing something like Ichigo in Bankai mode. In my mind Naruto has 3 more steps to go…
FFwatchdog: 1. because naruto can increase how fast he can go with Flash step, minato could not with hirashin since it was a seal.
Tenchi: IN my head there are only 3 more possible ways he can improve but I'll keep a secret. The first one he'll discover in this chapter the other two are built over time
FFwatchdog: 2. flash step is far more versitile hence he doesnt have the special seal limiting how far he can go.
Tenchi: yes which is why I didn't want him to go into the Hirashin. The shunpo is not based on bleach but I admit is influenced. I actually got the idea for Rurouni Kenshin.
FFwatchdog: im more or less talking to myself there, its just ive read storys where idiots have said that the hirashin makes the 4th move at the speed of light,
Tenchi: HIRASHIN IS NOT AT THE SPEED OF LIGHT
FFwatchdog: and i was like...what the fuuck? it doesnt say anything about lightspeed in fact i think the 4th would blow himself up lol.
Tenchi: Yep still the Hirashin is formidable but if I get Naruto to the level where I want him… He will be able to rival or surpass the Hirashin.
WOW That took a lot …
OK if you have any questions just shoot me a review
NOW ON WITH THE STORY
Naruto got back late that night. It was 11:15 at night when he stumbled in the Hotel with a goofy smile on his face. Luckily Anko and Kitty-chan had already left for their mission but Naruto had to get past… Kurenai.
Naruto looked up at Kurenai who was looking at him with a raised eye brow.
"Naruto its late why did you… Wait minute… What did you do"
Naruto blinked
"Eh what do you mean"
Kurenai smiled "Your smiling like you got a first kiss"
Naruto blushed and shook his head "Sensei stop teasing, we didn't do anything like that. Yugito-chan and I just talked."
Kurenai raised an eye brow again while smirking "Yugito-chan eh"
Naruto blushed even deeper and looked away. "I'll be going then"
Kurenai watched him leave and smiled… Wait until she told Anko…
Naruto hurried to leave and escape his sensei's teasing.
The Next day…
The team 8 got bright and early … They had been informed by Kurenai in the hotel that they would be taking down a bandit camp that had taken some people hostage, the ransom was supposed to be paid today so it would be a "simple" kill and go. They would be working the outside and securing the prisoners. Kurenai charged Naruto with leading the mission while she supported the Kumo team. Naruto had them wake up early to explain the plan to the rest of his team.
As team 8 breakfast Naruto started to talk.
"Ok since I am the fastest with shunpo I'll be the first to go in… Kiba will be supporting the sides while Shino shall be protecting and freeing the prisoners."
The rest of team 8 nodded … They trusted Naruto's judgment. After they had finished packing and eating and what not they went outside. They only waited for a few minutes for Kurenai to arrive from her briefing from Raikage and another few minutes before they saw the Kumo team arrive. They all greeted each other politely. Naruto looked over to Yugito. They shared a knowing smile and a slight glimmer in each other's eyes.
"Hey Yugito-chan"
"Hi Naruto-kun"
At this both the sides raised an eye brow "Kun." "-Chan"
Both Yugito and Naruto looked around wondering what they were talking about. Samui was the first to recover "Come on we have a bandit camp to destroy."
And so the two teams walked in silence
Naruto looked over to see that Karui and Omoi both had Katanas strapped on their back. Puzzled at this Naruto asked "Karui-san … Omoi-san you practice Kenjutsu."
Omoi looked at him and nodded. "We were taught by Killer bee-sensei "
Naruto nodded he had heard about the Other Jinchuuriki who had taught the team and was also teaching Yugito. Yugito had told him about her life here in detail and so did Naruto's at his own.
And the journey continued with the two teams asking each other question. At first it was uncomfortable being with different Nins who were asking you questions like an interrogation but as they got more into it they forgot their differences and started responding as if they were simply from the same village but didn't know each other. To the Jounins it was nice to see the generation after them bonding. But they had to stop for it was time to start the mission.
Kurenai called out "Naruto, Kiba Shino its time… move into your position."
Immediately team 8 stopped talking and nodded. Silently they each ran off into the distance of the shrubbery. They were positioned there so when the distraction was ensued by Kurenai and Team Samuil, Naruto's group could move in.
Naruto looked out from his position and examined the bandit camp. There were a group of 20 bandits milling around a fire and another 8 guarding the a large tent… their target
10 minutes later Kurenai and Team Samui or team A struck. Team A had did a great job in the first strike. They took out 8 of the 20 bandits with well placed Kunai's. Kiba and Shino stiffened at the killing right in front of their eyes but they calmed down. They knew this was the life of the shinobi… path of a killer.
Team A drawed them away quite quickly. Some of the bandits guarding the tent also went to help so there were only 5 left at the camp.
"Ok I'm going in" Naruto whispered.
Naruto shunpo-ed forward and struck the closest man in his stomach sending him sky rocketing back against another man. Naruto didn't stop there. He shunpo-ed again and struck another bandit in the face. Naruto turned and saw that the 2 bandits, now lined up, were starting to charge with their weapons.
Naruto immediately took out a kunai and shunpo-ed a small distance and stabbed The bandit farthest to the left in the gut. After Naruto spun and stabbed the man in the neck. Naruto watched him drop… Naruto's world slowed to a crawl… He had just killed a man… Taken a man's life… this man had memories, a life, a purpose, a goal just like him and he took it away. Naruto did not notice the man behind up getting up and rushing him with his short sword.
Naruto was snapped out of his thoughts as he heard a cry of Gatsuuga.
Naruto turned and saw that Kiba had covered him from the bandit. Kiba looked back at him his face grim as Naruto had just killed someone. Kiba grasped hs shoulder "Come on we have to keep going "
Naruto nodded… Together they went in and saw Shino freeing the prisoners. Naruto and Kiba started to file the people out. Naruto used Kage Bunshin to cover them. It took 30 minutes to do it but they had successfully gotten all of the hostages to the designated rendevous point. There they saw Team A waiting for them. As the walked Naruto looked into the Kurenai's eyes and those red eyes staring back at him widening with realization.
Kurenai
Immediately when she looked into Naruto's eyes she saw not an eye of a young gennin still learning. She did not see a bright and ignorant boy. No she saw the eyes she saw every day amoung her collegues … amoung her friends. This was an eye of a killer someone who done the unspeakable sin.
Kureani closed her eyes in mourning that one of her students had broken innocence at such a young age.
Naruto
Naruto watched As Kurenai greeted them. He was glad that Kurenai didn't give him special attention even though she saw that Naruto had become a killer. You see when someone kills for the first time, their eye dulls. It is not a noticeable thing like the light has gone out of their eyes or something like that. It is more subtle, their eyes 'feel' less alive, less curious.
"Alright Samui and I Will escort the villagers to their homes and pick up the payment while you guys can head back."
Though there was spread confusion about the act, Naruto nodded as well as the rest of the teams. They walked quietly for a while on the road back to Kumo.
It wasn't until Yugito walked next to Naruto did something happen. Naruto nodded at her presence and she just kept walking beside him. They had no need for words… Yugito being there was comfort enough. It said to him 'I'm there for you…Its ok…'
Kiba looked at the two and sighed… These two were really a pair for each other… Kiba's nose twitched… Kiba immediately stretched out his senses and focused with all his might.
His mom said that when an INuzuka's nose twitched that meant danger. Kiba really didn't believe his mom but after meeting Anko …He took no chance. Kiba eyes widened at what he detected. He ran forward toward the two blonds and pushed them both in opposite directions "SCATTER!" he cried.
Everyone heard a cry of "Doton: Split Earth Turn Around Palm."
Immediately The gennins dodged up to higher ground and saw 4 Nuke nins from Iwa, judging by the scars on their headband, coming out.
Naruto gritted his teeth "Kiba Shino" Naruto waited for the two responses but only received one. Naruto turned around and saw Shino looking back at him.
Naruto looked back at where he last stood when he was pushed by Kiba and saw that Kiba was under a pile of rocks… His right arm and left leg crushed. Luckily the rocks were not huge so it probably only broke his arm…But the real problem was that Kiba was bleeding heavily and would die of blood loss if not taken care off.
Naruto was mad, no pissed off to the very depths of hell. Naruto looked at the Nuke Iwa nins and started to see red. "Shino" Shino turned immediately worried for his friend… This was a demonic voice full of… blood lust. "I want you to take one of them alive"
Naruto jumped down and started walking towards the Iwa nins "Omoi can you please dig out Kiba and Yugito and Karui can you assist Shino"
The Gennin teams went immediately did so. Naruto started to undo his bandages. He jumped over where Kiba was, placing himself between the Smirking Iwa nins and Kiba.
When the Iwa nins saw Naruto's arms they laughed. One even jeered "What you think Tatoos gonna help you boy."
Naruto eyes grew slitted and red. Naruto channeled a huge amount of chakra into his arms. Both his arms look liked miniature bon fires. As they were burning all around him scorching the grass and trees.
The Iwa nins took a step back… And watched Naruto carefully… The smirk wiped off their faces. This was a boy who was dangerous.
Naruto disappeared. One of the Iwa nins said stupidly "What-" That was all he got out as his body was consumed in flames… All that was left was him screams in agony. Naruto was standing a little bit behind the burning corpse. Naruto turned to the other Nins.
They saw his eyes ….Eyes of a demon …eyes of monster… Eyes of their executioner.
They tried to run… but they were burned. Naruto looked at the three fires… They were burning their blood evaporating from the flames… their ashes would remain on the ground to nature the plants. Naruto looked up at the sky. He … understood now …why he had to kill… to protect his friends… To make sure no one got hurt. Naruto closed his eeys and took a deep breath… though he took in smoke from burning corpses, though he in took ashes from burnt skin, though he in took the smell of blood… Naruto in took his new resolution.
Naruto looked over to his team. Shino was tying up the last of the Iwa nins. He had a cut forehead but otherwise fine. Omoi had finished digging out Kiba, who was laid out on the ground, and wrapped up his wounds. Akamaru was whining near his master's head. Karui had several cuts on her arms but they were shallow. Yugito was sweating but otherwise looked fine. She was reading a scroll she had pilfered from the Iwa Nin pack. As she read it her eyes got wider and wider.
"Guys" She yelled out. Everyone turned to her "We have to get this to Raikage right away."
Naruto nodded he would trust what Yugito said "Give me the scroll … I can get there fast."
Yugito threw him the scroll and Naruto Shunpo-ed as fast as he could. As he reached the gates of Kumo he was stopped "Konoha Nin where is the rest of the team."
Naruto took a deep breath "I have a scroll to deliver to Raikage"
Naruto held out the scroll Yugito had given him. The Anbu looked at it for only 4 seconds and then yelled at him while running towards the Raikage tower "Follow ME NOW"
Naruto ran after him as fast as possible. They Entered the Raikage's office at a new record. Naruto was dead beat tired after running, killing, and more running. Naruto saw that the Raikage was doing paperwork, and wasn't asleep this time.
The Anbu stepped forward kneeling with scroll in his hand "Raikage-sama this is very important."
The Raikage nodded and grasped the scroll he looked over it his eyes widening. The Raikage in one fluid motion stood up and punched through the window behind them "D%MN THEM"
Naruto's eyes widened. Not even pausing, the Raikage sat down took out an extremely fancy scroll with the Cloud seal on it. The Raikage opened it and sigend it quickly. Then he took. He turned to the Anbu and gave him both scrolls "SEND THESE TO KONOHA IMMEDIATELY"
The Anbu took it "Hai Raikage –sama" The Anbu left so fast that some of the Paper work flew up, but the Raikage didn't seem to care. The Raikage instead just sat down in his chair sagging…
Naruto was still confused. What had that scroll contained? Naruto cleared his throat "Raikage-sama … What was that scroll about"
The Raikage sighed "…The scroll was a mission … An A class mission for an Iwa team to Act as Nuke nins and Assassinate Team Samui and Team 8…"
Naruto fell to the ground on his but. He was exhausted and the news of someone wanting to assassinate him coupled with the fact that he killed four people in one day was heavy.
The two occupants in the room did not say anything for a while. Naruto got up and bowed to the Raikage "Good day Raikage"
The Raikage chuckled "Soon we won't have any more good days to talk about."
Naruto went to the gates for his teammates to return…
Konoha 2 days Later
Sarutobi was having a good day. He had just finished all his paper work today and was having a nice cup of tea with his favorite tobacco. Sadly his Day ended as a Jounin ran into his office. "What is it Genma"
"Hokage-sama This is for you" Genma said panting while holding out two scrolls one sealed with the Cloud seal and the other that looked like a mission scroll..
The Hokage took it and opened the mission scroll. The Hokage's eyes immediately widened, and then hardened. Genma knew those eyes. Those were the eyes of the god of Shinobi or the Professor… the war Hero… The Hokage. The Hokage took the other scroll and opened it. He read over it briefly and signed it.
The Hokage looked at Genma who was having a hard time trying not to look nervous and held out the Cloud sealed scroll. "Genma make a copy of this scroll and then send it back to Iwa and then raise the War Level to Preparation"
Genma eyes widened but he quickly recovered "Hai Hokage-Sama" and left immediately.
The Professor stood up and started to walk to a certain and hidden building that not many knew about.
War Levels were a tricky thing. As its name can indicate it will tell at what level a War is at. For Konoha it had been on 'Peace' for the past couple years. The other levels were 'Hostile', 'Preparation', 'Silent War, and 'All out war'. In Konoha there have only been 3 and all out war. An all out war to Konoha would be that every shinobi would fight in the open combat… Gennin, Chunnin, Jounin, and Anbu alike. All of them would be stained in blood in war. Of course those three times would be the 3 Great Ninja Wars.
To further the point, Different Villages had different 'Levels in warning'. Iwa had only three levels, Kumo had four, Aimi had Six and Suna had Five. It all depended on the useless squabbling of Council members. But it didn't matter to the Kage's because when it came down to it… War was just war.
Sarutobi hated himself for doing this. He knew this was the only way. He kept on walking to the building that was hidden quite well. He saw 4 Guards and walked passed them. They didn't bother trying to stop him… They knew they couldn't even if they tried.
As Sarutobi walked in the Hallway he knew that this decision would cause the massacre of thousands of people. The Sandaime knew that… As long as it wasn't His people.
You see The Hokage was like a parent to the population of Konoha. He watched over them… Cared for them… Made sure they were safe. But when some one tried to hurt his children… Tried to scare his children… Tried to kill his children… Sarutobi would make sure that person would never try again. Just like a parent, The Hokage would do anything … go any length to ensure safety for his Children.
The Hokage walked into the office of rival. Though he usually would be annoyed or angry seeing this man… For now he was content on knowing this man would back him up.
The crippled man looked at him and smiled "And what do I owe your presence Hokage-sama"
The Hokage looked at this man dead in the eye. He hated this mans guts. He knew what this man was doing but he accepted it for the better of Konoha.
"Danzo I am officially reactivating Anbu ROOT"
Danzo eyes widened. Sarutobi threw him the scroll and Danzo deftly caught it and opened it. His eyes widening as he read it.
Danzo paused as he finished and then finally looked back at the Hokage.
"Our mission."
"Destroy Iwa"
A/N": WAIT WHAT WILL HAPPEN TO KIBA
DANZO BACK IN THE BIZ
SILENT WAR ON IWA
HOLY SH&T
Any ways please review guys… And I will rewrite this chapter… You have my thanks