Thnx to the two who reviewed! If you haven't checked out the picture of Falacis, please do! Any way, here are some quick replies to people who reviewed from te first and second chapter.
ThePersonofAwesomeness- I'm glad you like it! :)
Sweey- He is kinda like Mta Knight but there's a reason. This should clear it up for you. I understand what you mean though, and I'm trying to make him different. Thnx for the constructive critism! ;)
Chapter 3
"Who's Fantis?" Tuff asked.
Tiff thought for a second, trying to remember what she had heard. She was about to answer, but someone else did. It was Meta Knight.
"He was a fellow Star Warrior. Fantis was my apprentice." Meta Knight said weakly. The crack in his mask had been fixed.
"Was?" Tiff repeated. She retrieved Meta Knight a glass of water, but he didn't touch it.
"It is … complicated." The warrior sat up, making it clear they were all in for a history lesson.
"During the war, I had an apprentice. We had been trying to train new Star warriors in order to keep our ranks strong. Fantis—or rather Falacis now- had much promise. He had natural skills and an eagerness to fight. But he also had a fatal flaw. He wished for power. More power than he would be allowed as one of us. He turned to the power monsters promised him. He never received it."
"But he was so strong!" Tiff protested. "He nearly killed you."
"Jes. But he had rage and revenge on his side. He always had many problems controlling anger."
"I don't get it. Why would he want revenge on you?" Tuff said.
"He believes I am the one that kept him the power he wanted. It is true. I knew he would become a danger to everyone if he had as much strength as he wanted. Especially himself."
Meta turned to Kirby, who stood silent and without expression. "And you Kirby, must defeat him."
Tiff scowled at the injured knight, hands on her hips and her eyes harsh. "And how do you expect Kirby to beat him. Not even you could!"
"Kirby is quite young and is patient. He can easily outmaneuver Falacis, and it would be unwise to send him into battle without some help. Sword, Blade—."
"We came as fas' as we coul' Lord Meta Knigh" Blade huffed.
"Arehdoe okuhelsy?" Sword said.
"There is now time. You must hurry; we have little time, and Falacis expects Kirby to run, not to face him."
"Don't worry Kirby!" Blade shouted, "We got your back!"
"Yeah! Gahfiek ardfenslei!"
Kirby frowned, looking back to where Meta Knight stood safely in the shadows. "Poyo…"
"Go on." Tiff said. Waving her arms in a motion to walk. When Kirby stayed still, she gave him a little shove. "Go. Don't you want to help Meta Knight?"
"Poyo, poyo…" Kirby remembered that his friend needed him and toughened up, ready to enter the castle and face—Oh a butterfly! Kirby squeaked 'poyo' and smiled wide, starting to chase the colorful butterfly.
"Kirby!" Tiff shouted. She grabbed him as he ran past, spinning him around to face her.
"Kirby! Listen up, I need you to…" The butterfly once again flew behind Tiff, causing the distracted pink puffball to lean over and try to get a better view. "…And you didn't hear one word I said. Did you?"
"Poyo?" Kirby said, still trying to glimpse the flying gem.
"Come on." Tiffs pulled Kirby into the castle then, in a classic ding-dong ditch fashion, knocked on Falacis's chamber door, and ran for it. Kirby stared after her, unsure what he was supposed to do.
When Falacis opened his door, Kirby yelped and tried to run.
"Very wise my teacher." Falacis laughed evilly. "Send a child to face me."
In his dark corner of the castle Meta Knight said to himself, "And how wise of you, my student, to underestimate Kirby."
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Don't you just love the little Kirby page break? :D anyhow thnx for rading: sorry their so short though :P Love you all! REVIEWS?
