Ok so this chapter should be a lot better than the last one due to my new beta Luckycookie! I will clear some things up at the bottom because I wouldn't want to ruin the chapter. Also there is some odd spacing so try to bear though it. Lastly, this chapter is also dedicated to luckeycookie to who without u wouldn't be able to understand my spelling.

Chapter 2:The Elves Surprise

Saphira.... Don't you think it's a little odd that the funeral
is in six days after the day they died rather than three?"
 "Well little one, perhaps the elves have been grieving after the past
battle and haven't had time."

"The elves don't appear as the kind of race that would leave
dead bodies laying around. Especialy not ones from elders as old and
respected as Oromis and Glaedr."
 "This is truly something that only time can tell. Now no longer puzzle me
with insolvable riddles, I must fight these winds!"

Thump!!
The blue Rider awoke with a start as his dragon landed. Shaken awake
he noticed he was surrounded by elves who all had vigilantlooks on their faces. One stood out among them all, A stern looking woman with three feathers in her elaboratedhead dress. He quickly strode over and knelt before her.
"Rise Eragon Shadeslayer, last free Dragon Rider."
He rose quickly and began the formal introductions of the elves
only to be cut off by queen Islanzadi
"Eragon I respect your formality but we are in a crisis situation" she stated curtly "The death of my master and his dragon was no doubt tragic,
however, I wouldn't call it a crisis."
"Yes, Oromis and Glaedr's death wastragic. However, their funeral
was three days ago. The real reason you were brought here was because of
the issue of the order dragon riders. Being the last free rider you are fit to be called the king of the dragon riders "Queen I see no riders dragons here other than Eragon and myself" Saphira pointed out.
"Ahh my dear dragonessthat is the very reason I have brought you here as I stated before." She said calmly. "Aiedail!"
They stood in silence for a moment and then the crowds parted to
give way to a young elf woman slightly shorter than Eragon with a dragon
slightly bigger than Saphria.
"Eragon, this is Aiedail. She arrived on a boat out of nowhere
yesterday" stated the queen.
Still in shock from the sight of another Rider, Eragon simply nodded.
"Hello, I am Aiedial, which means The Morning Star so call me star for short
. This is my white dragon, his name is Ice and I present you my blade Adurna and its gem Edoc'sil ."

"Welcome to the great land of Alagaesia. I am Eragon Shadeslayer and this is my dragon, her name
is Saphira" Who roared when her name was said "and I present you my
blade Brisingr."
"Thank you Eragon and Saphira for welcoming me to your land.
As I have been already told there is a great war against your evil king so
I have brought many magical people of my land. They are called the gray
folk. They are skilled at their craft and redy to kill and who kill the innocent. Also you might be thinking that I have an inapt amount of training but Ice hatched for me when I was five and we have trained ever since. Now I haven't heard any of your dragons or how the fall of the riders occurred so tell me some over dinner. I am starved!" The two Riders went to the table as the dragons flew off into the night
sky.

At the table, Eragon was the first to speak up.

"So Star, what race are you? I see you have pointed ears like an
elf but more rounded features on your face?"

"Well as odd as this seems, my father was human and my mother was

an elf, this appears to be the same with yourself, is it not?"
"Actually, I was altered at the blood oath celebration by ancient magic."

"O well Eragon, I think we will get along quite well"

"O yes, and if you don't mind me asking, how old are you?"

"Eragon!! How dare you ask my age!"
"Sorry,sorry! I didn't mean to be offensive."
"Eragon, I'm only kidding I am seventeen"

High above the air, the two dragons were frolicking playfully
through the air.

Well a bit random about the parts about but you will see in the next chapter and il make the spacing better next time too.