Well I can't say I've updated in a while been like what a year? Anyway just for the record I wrote the first 2 chapters in 7th grade so try not to criticize those too much I know I am complete garbage at spelling so try to lay off that and lucky cookie if you still want to beta that would be great! Any way to the story seeing as how I never actually wrote a plot it might be a little rough around the edges… actually I am pretty sure it's the wrong point of view all together…
Sunset came early for Eragon he had talked playful in to the night exploring many lands in Star's mind as she did to him. After sunset however there dragons joined them and Eragon he could only notice that his dragon seemed to glow despite being the last of her kind. Their conversations between the new dragon and rider stretched endlessly the longest topic of conversation by far was the conversation of Elduri. Unable to break his oath to the Queen he was surprised to find her already up to date with the subject the discussed many ways of cutting off Galbatorix form these Hearts. The most likely of these solutions was to draw the black king away from the castle while sending Star to take out the Hearts within the castle. But feeling it unwise to stay much longer Eragon extended his hand to take Star off on a walk. As the moon shone high above them they set off to the woods.
"Well Star what is your impression of this land and its rider so far?" began Eragon
"Eragon this land screams of great horrors in the past but as for its rider I can see your ability to do great harm as well as your longing desire for respect for elders such as the elves. However coupled with this I can great compassion for the people of this land as well as a radiance of power much like a dragon about to strike down its prey however I must ask shadeslayer what do you think of me?"
"When I see you I first think of a rose more beautiful than any around it however if I tried touch it, it would slice my hand to shreds."
"Eragon!" Giggled Star as she reached the entrance of her tent. "I will see in the morning then no doubt
"I await that moment as we speak" Replied Eragon bidding her goodnight as well.
Grinning silently to himself as he retreated he suppressed the strong urge to sprint and jump as high as he could. As he got back to the tent the elves set up he noticed Saphira curled p humming as she waited.
"Hello little one." She said simply as she continued to hum.
"What's gotten in to you?" Inquired Eragon "and why are you purring?"
"I might ask you the same question?"
"Alright but I am tired I will tell you in the morning when we set off for the Varden."
With that He changed out of his tunic in to the robe relay by the bed and fell in to I quick dreamless sleep.
Sooooo? How was it for a restart I know it's kind of boring and short but hey you have to start somewhere. Anyway it would be great if someone could tell me how to spell Elduri the dragon's heart of hearts. But review… I will be quite surprised if any one even remembers this story or reviews it! Any who off you go!