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The next day, everyone had been excited to hear some more of the story. Ron, once again, was reading the story. Hermione believed that everyone should have a chance to read it. Ron, on the other hand, believes if everyone read it out loud than it would not be as real. Harry agreed with Ron, only because whenever Ron read the story it was funny. They were waiting on everyone else to show up. The portal opened, and everyone that was there yesterday came in. Of course, there were some new additions to the group. Ginny had brought Luna Lovegood. Parvati, through conversation with Hermione, had come along and brought Padma with her. Cho Chang and Cedric Diggory found out through Luna, and they also brought Marietta. Zacharias Smith decided to tag along as well. When Colin Creevy came, he was bouncing off the walls. He believed that Harry would be reading the hilarious story, but was disappointed when he found out it was Ron. He had brought his camera with him to take pictures to prove he has met Harry Potter. "Okay you guys! I know you all want to hear the story, but only under two conditions." Harry said as he stood up in front of the rest of the group. Everyone looked up at him. "First," Harry held up one finger, " do not talk about this story outside of here. There could be some hurtful things in the story that will get us all in trouble." He then held up another finger, "and secondly, no more people can come to the group. We're big enough as it is, the more people know, the more it could slip."

"What about other Gryffindors?" Zacharias Smith asked.

"Well, we can't help it if other Gryffindors come because this is the Gryffindor common room." Harry said as he sat back down next to Ron. "Now that you're finished asking questions," Hermione said to the rest of the group. She then looked at Ron, "Can we continue listening to the story?"

"Of course Hermione." Ron said as he pulled the big load of parchment out. "Now where were we," Ron said more to himself than to the group, "Oh yes, right here!" He said as he pointed at a place on the parchment.

Chapter 3.

AN: STOP FLAMMING DA STORY PREPZ OK! odderwize fangs 2 da goffik ppl 4 da good reveiws! FANGS AGEN RAVEN! oh yeah, BTW I don't own dis or da lyrics 4 Good Chralotte.

"Yes, it really says that." Ron said when he looked up. Everyone was wearing confused faces. "What is fangs supposed to mean?" Luna asked as she looked at Ginny. "I think it means thanks?" Ginny said. She was just as confused as Luna.

On the night of the concert I put on my black lace-up boots with high heels. Underneath them were ripped red fishnets. Then I put on a black leather minidress with all this corset stuff on the back and front. I put on matching fishnet on my arms. I straightened my hair and made it look all spiky. I felt a little depressed then, so I slit one of my wrists. I read a depressing book while I waited for it to stop bleeding and I listened to some GC. I painted my nails black and put on TONS of black eyeliner. Then I put on some black lipstick. I didn't put on foundation because I was pale anyway. I drank some human blood so I was ready to go to the concert.

"Why would she wear that stuff?" Padma asked as she looked at Parvarti. "Why would she talk about slitting her wrist as though she was talking about the weather?" Parvarti asked back. Cedric looked around and then asked, "Why does she feel the need to look like a gothic blow fish?" Everyone just stared at him for a full minute and then they all laughed. "Good one Cedric!" Zacharias exclaimed as the two did a fist punch. "Wait a minute." Hermione said as she took her hands and waved them. "She's not wearing foundation because she's pale anyway? She wore foundation in the other two chapters." Everyone just shrugged.

I went outside. Draco was waiting there in front of his flying car. He was wearing a Simple Plan t-shirt (they would play at the show too), baggy black skater pants, black nail polish and a little eyeliner (AN: A lot fo kewl boiz wer it ok!).

Everyone was laughing really hard. George was shaking his head. "No, no they don't."

"Looks like she turned Malfoy into a sissy boy!" Fred said and everyone laughed even louder.

"Hi Draco!" I said in a depressed voice.

"How can someone say that in a depressed voice?" Ron said, "There's an exclamation point after Draco." He explained to the rest of the group.

"Hi Ebony." he said back. We walked into his flying black Mercedes-Benz (the license plate said 666) and flew to the place with the concert. On the way we listened excitedly to Good Charlotte and Marilyn Manson. We both smoked cigarettes and drugs. When we got there, we both hopped out of the car. We went to the mosh pit at the front of the stage and jumped up and down as we listened to Good Charlotte.

"Who's driving the car?" Marietta asked. "Aren't they going to crash because they're doing drugs."

"Marietta, nothing in this story makes sense." Cho replied.

"You come in cold, you're covered in blood
They're all so happy you've arrived
The doctor cuts your cord, hands you to your mom
She sets you free into this life." sang Joel (I don't own da lyrics 2 dat song).

"Joel is so fucking hot." I said to Draco, pointing to him as he sung, filling the club with his amazing voice.

Suddenly Draco looked sad.

"This girl is crazy!" Lee Jordan says, "You don't go with your guy to a concert and say the singer is hot. Same situation for guys too."

"What's wrong?" I asked as we moshed to the music. Then I caught on.

"Hey, it's ok I don't like him better than YOU!" I said.

"Really?" asked Draco sensitively and he put his arm around me all protective.

"Since when is Malfoy sensitive?" Harry asked.

"Really." I said. "Besides I don't even know Joel and he's going out with Hilary fucking Duff. I fucking hate that little bitch." I said disgustedly, thinking of her ugly blonde face.

"And who is Hilary Duff?" Zacharias asked.

"Muggle singer." Seamus said.

"Well why does she hate someone she doesn't know?"

"Because she's a freak!"

The night went on really well, and I had a great time. So did Draco. After the concert, we drank some beer and asked Benji and Joel for their autographs and photos with them. We got GC concert tees. Draco and I crawled back into the Mercedes-Benz, but Draco didn't go back into Hogwarts, instead he drove the car into… the Forbidden Forest!

"Since when do they have beer?" Neville asked, "They're not even of age yet."

"And why did they crawl to the car?" Padma asked, "wouldn't they get killed because they would get run over by people?"

"Are you guys ready for the next chapter?" Ron asked.

"Read on Ron!" Cedric said.

Chapter 4.

AN: I sed stup flaming ok ebony's name is ENOBY nut mary su OK! DRACO IS SOO IN LUV wif her dat he is acting defrent! dey nu eechodder b4 ok!

"No. No. " Harry said.

"DRACO!" I shouted. "What the fuck do you think you are doing?"

Draco didn't answer but he stopped the flying car and he walked out of it. I walked out of it too, curiously.

"What the fucking hell?" I asked angrily.

"Ebony?" he asked.

"What?" I snapped.

Draco leaned in extra-close and I looked into his gothic red eyes (he was wearing color contacts) which revealed so much depressing sorrow and evilness and then suddenly I didn't feel mad anymore

"What? Since when did he get over his fear of the Forbidden Forest?" Neville asked. He remembered in first year how Malfoy screamed like a baby during their detention with Hagrid.

"And since when does he wear red color contacts?" Parvarti asked.

And then… suddenly just as I Draco kissed me passionately. Draco climbed on top of me and we started to make out keenly against a tree. He took of my top and I took of his clothes. I even took of my bra. Then he put his thingie into my you-know-what and we did it for the first time.

"Okay, so Malfoy climbed on top of her. Which would mean she would be laying down horizontal. But a tree is vertical. How does that work?" Ginny asked.

"Maybe it was an already cut down tree." Hermione said.

"Wait, was she going commando?" Cho asked.

"Maybe she was. She sounds freakish enough."

"That was the most unromantic sex scene I have ever heard of." Everyone looked at Cho like she had just spouted another head. "That is the only sex scene I have ever heard of."

"Oh! Oh! Oh! " I screamed. I was beginning to get an orgasm. We started to kiss everywhere and my pale body became all warm. And then….

"WHAT THE HELL ARE YOU DOING YOU MOTHERFUKERS!"

It was….Dumbledore!

"Oh my god." Fred said. "That was the most epic thing Dumbledore has ever said. He's my new hero now!"

"I want to sit in Snape's class and suddenly scream that." George said and had a smile as big as the Cheserie cat's.

"Don't do it." Ron said. "He will bite your head off."

"Oh yeah, he would." George said as his smile deflated.

"I can't wait to see what happens next." Marietta said as she looked at Ron.

"We have to wait until tomorrow." Harry said as he looked at the Maurader's Map. "McGonagall's heading up here." They all dispersed into their different directions as Ron went to hide the parchment.

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