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Chapter 3

This was the third day that they have found "My Immortal" and have been reading it. Everyone that came for the reading yesterday showed up. Ernie McMillan, Justin Finch-Fletchly and Hannah Abbot, however, were new to the group. Harry stood up as they entered the common room after Zacharias and Neville. "Hey, I don't want to be the bad guy. But you guys can't come." Harry said as he blocked them from coming into the common room. "Harry, we would have come yesterday." Hannah said as she took a step toward Harry. "Yeah, but we had detention with Mr. Filch."

"What did you guys do?" Harry asked confused. He scratched his head as he continued to look at him. "We didn't do anything. Something about ruining his floors." Justin said as he extended his arms. "Come on Harry, let them in!" Neville said from behind Harry. He had put his hand on his shoulder. "I think this one exception won't hurt." Cedric said from the couch. "Okay, you guys can come. But nobody, I repeat, nobody else can come!" Harry said exasperated. He wasn't trying to be an ass, he just knew that the bigger the group, the more trouble could easily find them. Harry had taken his place on the floor, and sat Indian style beside Ron. Ron was once again reading the story. "Okay, are you guys ready for me to start?"

"Yes Ron, start." Hermione said as she looked up at him.

Chapter 5.

AN: STOP flaming! if u flam it menz ur a prep or a posr! Da only reson Dumbledeor swor is coz he had a hedache ok an on tup of dat he wuz mad at dem 4 having sexx! PS im nut updating umtil I get five good revoiws!

"They spelled Dumbledore wrong." Ron said as he looked at the parchment.

"Why does this not surprise me?" Seamus said.

Dumbledore made and Draco and I follow him. He kept shouting at us angrily.

"You ludacris fools!" he shouted.

I started to cry tears of blood down my pallid face. Draco comforted me. When we went back to the castle Dumbledore took us to Professor Snape and Professor McGonagall who were both looking very angry.

"Why does she cry tears of blood?" Hannah asked.

"She's a vampire. But then again, nothing makes sense." George explained.

"Why are Professor McGonagall and Snape angry about something they didn't even know about?" Ginny asked.

"Think about Ginny, does anything this person writes make sense?" Luna asked.

"No, you're right." Ginny replied.

"They were having sexual intercourse in the Forbidden Forest!" he yelled in a furious voice.

"Why did you do such a thing, you mediocre dunces?" asked Professor McGonagall.

"How dare you?" demanded Professor Snape.

And then Draco shrieked. "BECAUSE I LOVE HER!"

Everyone was quiet. Dumbledore and Professor McGonagall still looked mad but Professor Snape said. "Fine. Very well. You may go up to your rooms."

Draco and I went upstairs while the teachers glared at us.

"Why would Professor Dumbledore yell?" Justin asked.

"He doesn't. Whenever I get in trouble with him, he doesn't even shout. He just uses a 'I'm very disappointed in you Mr. Jordan' tone of voice."

"I think they have Professor McGonagall and Professor Snape mixed up." Marietta said.

"Whenever Professor McGonagall gets angry, she never namecalls. That is more of Professor Snape." Cho said.

"Why is Professor Snape so nonchalant?" Neville asked. "I would think he was the one who would let them have it."

"Because they're from Slytherin house." Hermione said. "He favors those from his house."

"Yeah, that makes sense." Neville said as he scratched his head.

"Are you okay, Ebony?" Draco asked me gently.

"Yeah I guess." I lied. I went to the girl's dorm and brushed my teeth and my hair and changed into a low-cut black floor-length dress with red lace all around it and black high heels. When I came out….

Draco was standing in front of the bathroom, and he started to sing 'I just wanna live' by Good Charlotte. I was so flattered, even though he wasn't supposed to be there. We hugged and kissed. After that, we said goodnight and he reluctantly went back into his room.

"He asked gently?" Ernie asked confused "The hell is this?"

"I've been asking myself the same question ever since Neville brought this to us." Ron replied.

"Wait, why is she wearing that if they have to go to bed in the next ten minutes?" Justin asked.

"Why would Malfoy know the words to a Good Charlotte song?" George asked. "I thought it was a muggle band."

"It is. I would think that Malfoy would want nothing to do with anything muggle." Fred replied.

"He doesn't. He's a pureblood. He thinks anything muggle is revolting." Hermione said.

"Well, Malfoy is an idiot." Ron said.

"Why, thank you Ron." Hermione said with a smile. "Do you guys want me to read the next chapter?" Ron asked as he went to the next parchment."Yes!" Everyone exclaimed. Ron had a little smirk on his face. He then went to the next chapter.

Chapter 6.

AN: shjt up prepz ok! PS I wnot update ubtil u give me goood revows!

"Wow, and I thought I had bad spelling." Ron said. Everyone let out a little laugh.

The next day I woke up in my coffin. I put on a black miniskirt that was all ripped around the end and a matching top with red skulls all over it and high heeled boots that were black. I put on two pairs of skull earrings, and two crosses in my ears. I spray-painted my hair with purple.

"Wait, what does she mean when she says two crosses in her ears?" Luna asked.

"Maybe she puts them in a weird place?" Hannah asked.

"Why would she spray paint her hair purple? I heard you can die if you do that." Justin said.

"Really?"George asked.

"It won't kill you, but it will make you very sick" Hermione said.

"Oooohhhl" Fred and George said.

"Wait, she is allowed to wear whatever she wants but everyone else has to wear their uniforms?" Marietta asked.

"I guess that's what the scroll says." Cho said.

In the Great Hall, I ate some Count Chocula cereal with blood instead of milk, and a glass of red blood. Suddenly someone bumped into me. All the blood spilled over my top.

"Bastard!" I shouted angrily. I regretted saying it when I looked up cause I was looking into the pale white face of a gothic boy with spiky black hair with red streaks in it. He was wearing so much eyeliner that I was going down his face and he was wearing black lipstick. He didn't have glasses anymore and now he was wearing red contact lenses just like Draco's and there was no scar on his forhead anymore. He had a manly stubble on his chin. He had a sexy English accent. He looked exactly like Joel Madden. He was so sexy that my body went all hot when I saw him kind of like an erection only I'm a girl so I didn't get one you sicko.

"I'm so sorry." he said in a shy voice.

"That's all right. What's your name?" I questioned.

"Please, for the love of merlin. Please tell me that this person is not who I think it is." Harry said to Ron as he put his head between his hands.

"Ten bucks says this guys is Harry Potter!" Seamus said and the room erupted with laughter.

"This person is not who you think it is." Ron said. Harry could tell that Ron was lying. Harry moaned and laid on the floor and covered his ears.

"Sorry Harry, but that does sound like you." Lee said. "She described you to a T."

"She had an erection, yet she didn't?" Hannah asked.

"Harry wears makeup?" Cedric asked.

"I do not wear makeup!" Harry exclaimed. He was still covering his ears.

"My name's Harry Potter, although most people call me Vampire these days." he grumbled.

"Why?" I exclaimed.

"Because I love the taste of human blood." he giggled.

"Well, I am a vampire." I confessed.

"Really?" he whimpered.

"Yeah." I roared.

We sat down to talk for a while. Then Draco came up behind me and told me he had a surprise for me so I went away with him.

"Wait, so she roared like a lion? Shouldn't she be in Gryffindor?" Luna asked.

"Oh merlin no, we don't want her!" Hermione exclaimed.

"Okay first off, I do not grumble while making introductions. Second off I do not go by Vampire. Thirdly I think blood tastes disgusting. Fourthly I don't giggle like a little school girl no offense to any girls in here, and finally I do not whimper!" Harry said as he stood up and walked back and forth in front of Ron.

"No offense taken Harry." Lavender said as she appeared suddenly behind Ron. She then went to her room. Lavender came back down to the common room and said. "You guys, McGonagall could be up here any minute. She was a floor down talking to Professor Flitwick. Everyone who was not a Gryffindor left the common room before Professor McGonagall came in.

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