Hi guys, please review for this chapter cause that'll prompt me to actually make a chapter. I own nothing of this. This story will be told from third person view and I will make chapters narrated by eight characters. Also, tell me if it bothers you that I don't write in more than one chapter or that I don't write a little mini paragraph for characters speaking.
Chapter One:
Annabeth was very worried. She hadn't seen her boyfriend in eight months, EIGHT MONTHS! She hated Hera for getting rid of her boyfriend and she definitely would hit her upside the head if she got the chance. And why did everything have to happen to her? Her dad being neglectful of her in her earlier years (he never was neglectful again, thank the gods), Luke, the titan war, and Percy disappearing! She knew she shouldn't be thinking like that, so she tried not to think about it. And then her worry came back, as she despaired over thoughts like what if he doesn't remember me? What if he has a new girlfriend? As she dealt with her mental struggle her friend, Piper, came up and tapped her on the shoulder causing her to jump. Piper said, "Relax Annabeth, its just me. I just came to tell you Leo thinks it's going to be about ten minutes until we land in Camp Jupiter. Only ten minutes until you can see your boyfriend again," Piper gave her a wink. Then, when Annabeth didn't respond Piper asked, "What's wrong?" Annabeth sighed and exploded, "Everything's wrong! What if Percy doesn't remember me? What if he has a new girlfriend?" Piper replied evenly, "Being a daughter of Aphrodite I should be able to give you advice, but I've got similar worries. Just tell me this do you know for a fact that Percy feels the same way about you as you do for him?" "Yes, I think he loved me just like I love him." Piper said simply, "Then he'll remember you. I think you truly love him and if he has the same feelings he'll remember you." Annabeth was calmed by Piper's words, her worries were still there, but they weren't tugging at every fiber of her being anymore. So she asked, "What did you mean when you said you had similar worries?" This time it was Piper who sighed and replied, "I'm worried that Jason might not be telling me something and I think I know what it is. I think he might have a girlfriend at his camp." "Well, don't worry about that now just like I'm not going to worry about Percy," then she smiled and opened her mouth to speak, but Leo's voice called out, "Land ho! Camp Jupiter due east!" Then she heard Jason say, "That's west, dummy." "Um, Camp Jupiter due west!" Piper and Annabeth exchanged grins and looked down to the camp as Jason joined them, and Rachel, Camp Half-Blood's oracle, came down from inside the Argo 2 and joined them as well. They all could see the Romans gathering on a field (Jason called it the Field of Mars) and she tried to find Percy, but she couldn't distinguish any one person. She then reminded everyone that Jason should get out first then the rest of them so the Romans would give them the time to explain their presence. Soon after, the Argo landed with a thud and everyone disembarked. When everyone was down it was deathly quiet and she searched the crowd and soon found her seaweed brain, she exclaimed, "Percy!"
Yeah, cliffhanger ah well you'll have to wait to find out what happens next. Sorry I couldn't make the two after Argo in Roman numerals, but I don't know how to do that with Microsoft Word 2003. Any criticism is fine just please do it in a nice fashion.