Yo, here's chapter 2. It's a bit cheesy at the end but it will get better i promise! Please comment and suggest XD
Kennie013
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[The morgue]
Clip, Clop, Clip, Clop... "Do you have to wear those shoes Raides?"
"Yes, and stop calling me that!"
"Sorry, we have another one"
"One what?" by his point Dr. Raider was getting bored of the policeman's well-rounded talking. He was always like this at the moment, but that being said, she knew exactly what he meant. For 3 weeks now, every Friday another mother and daughter was murdered. So far the local PD had no connections between the victims and I had no cause of death for the mothers. They had been cut on their arms and their faces and one clean cut through their neck, but none of their wounds, not even put together, could kill them...so what did?
"Right, let's see what the bastards done now!" rader said in a cold, hatful voice. She hated the killer for more reasons than you would think. They all wanted to catch him!
Dr. Rader and the young police officer walked into the morgue and stood next to a gurney decorated with a young girl's body. The girl was of a slim build but she had huge hips, she had muscular arms and thighs and she was very tall. All of the girls that had been killed were stunningly beautiful, they all were covered in make-up as well, but this girl was different, she was naturally pretty- the others where bordering on anorexic but not this girl- she was thin but not too thin, she had on make-up, but not too much make-up, the only thing that made her look horrific was the massive bullet wound at the bottom of her neck.
"The bullet killed her, there are no other...wait!" Raider looked over the body, this was different! There was light bruising on her knees all the way up to her belly button. On the other bodies the killer had carved foreign words, there was no words, no symbols, but she was raped. She must have been special to the killer? Or maybe he didn't have any words left? This was weird!
"Ok, i think we need some help"
"Help? From who? The feds?"
"Not the feds, not yet, there was a guy i used to go to school with, he works in philli now, and he is a damn good cop, no offence, but apparently the new path there is good two and i can't get heads or tails of this case! What do you think?"
"Sure raider, Dr. Raider, what's the guy's name?"
"Peter Dunlop and the paths called Megan Hunt"
"I'll get right on it"
"Thanks"
"I really hope they can get this case!"
With that they left, raider to think about what the hell was going on in this case, and the detective to call Peter Dunlop.
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End of chapter 2, please comment!
Kennie013