Lose Focus

by FigureIt

Amaya is sent to the Death Note world after falling asleep on the park bench. She finds the Death Note's opposite, the Once Note. What is it exactly and can she save L and Watari in the end? **BEING REWRITTEN**

18. Apology

I was around fourteen when I 'attempted' to write fanfiction, and while many people had enjoyed some of what I had written, the style is very immature. That being said, I'm around nineteen now, and seeing what I had written before almost pains me. So, I will be rewritting 'Lose Foucs', because I feel as if I made my character, Amaya, a bit too MarySue-esque. There are some issues with plot etc etc. Hopefully, you all don't hate me too much for making you wait this long. And sorry if I got anyone excited with the prospect of having a new chapter. This story will come up as being 'deleted' because it'll just be easier on a whole to have a entirely new prompt, be on the look out for it within the next week! (It will probably be the first two chapters that will be up, also look for a new DN fanfic I put up if you feel obliged!)

Thanks for being so loyal and dealing with me so long!