SO, I'M NOT GETTING A LOT OF REVIEWS, SO I GUESS NO ONE LIKES MY SERIES:( I DON'T KNOW IF I SHOULD CONTINUE WRITING. PLEASE REVIEW AND TELL ME YOUR OPINION IS THIS SERIES STUPID AND SHOULD I JUST STOP WRITING?
(in the car)
Ally's Dad: ALLYSON, WHAT THE HELL WERE YOU THINKING!
Ally: Ummm.. Dad I wasn't doing anything bad!
Ally's Dad: Yes you were! Ohh yea kissing a guy in public isn't bad! Please do you have any respect!
Ally: Dad, it's something called love!
Ally's Dad: Love? Ally you don't know anything about love. You're just a 17-year-old that won't obey her father!
Ally: Dad, you're just a freak that stalks me around, and you're now acting like a jerk because I'm in love with Austin!
Ally's Dad: I'm acting like a freak? (laughing)
Ally: Yes you're! You aren't the same anymore. You use to be cheerful and happy all the time, but when my mom died you just changed. You aren't the same. You aren't there for me anymore like you used to.
Ally's Dad: Yea, you're right. I'm not the same without your mother. I miss her! I can't live without her and now I don't care about my life. I don't care about me. And I don't care about you! And it's all your fault that your mother died. If you would've never been born, your mother would still be with me!
Ally: Dad, you can't say that. It wasn't my fault that my mom died!
*****Flashback begins*****
(in the car 10 years ago)
Ally's Mom: Ally! Wanna go to Baskin Robins?
Ally: Yay!
I started cheering and jumping.
Ally's Mom: Ally... Ally... Ally! Sit down!
My mom then turned her head around and made me sit down, leaving the steering wheel unattended. When she wanted to get back on the road it was too late. A truck was coming our way my mom lost control and we crashed.
Ally's Mom: Ally, are you okay.?
Those were the last words I heard from her mouth. We both ended up in the hospital and I was the one that survived.
*****Flashback ends*****
My dad parked on the driveway and started to open the door.
Ally's Dad: Ohh yeah start packing because in a week we're leaving Miami!
Ally: What!
With that he slammed the door leaving me in the car. Wow, my dad must hate me so much! He didn't care about me. I wanted to cry, but I knew I had to be strong. I opened the door and got out. My dad has ruined my life! When I had finally found love my dad is separating me from him. What was I going to tell Austin? I went in the house and climbed the stairs. I went in the room and locked the door behind me.
I opened my eyes to realize that I had fallen asleep. I stood up and looked at the clock: 9 PM. I walked over to my phone and noticed a lot of missing calls and texts. There were all from Austin. I was about to call him when I suddenly received a call from Trish.
(call with Trish)
Trish: Aye, Ally! I'm so happy right know!
Ally: Well... at least you're happy.
Trish: Ally what's wrong?
Ally: Nothing forget it. So, why are you so happy?
Trish: Okay guess who got a job as Dez's girlfriend?
Ally: No way! What happened?
Trish: I was hanging out with Dez, just like you told me. I was eating when Dez randomly starts acting all sweet and even started complementing me. Minutes later, BAM! He asked me out.
Ally: OMG! Congrats! Told you he loved you!
Trish: Yea, so why are you sad?
Ally: My dad found out I was hanging out with Austin at the park. Trish, I'm leaving Miami in a week.
Trish: No way, I'm going to miss you. I'm not going to let you leave Ally!
Ally: I'll miss you too Trish, but I don't know how I can convince my dad to let me stay.
Trish: But how are you going to tell Austin this?
Ally: I don't know!
Just then I heard noise coming from outside.
Ally: Hey Trish, I got to go! Talk to you later!
Trish: Okay, you better call me.
Ally: I will!
I opened the terrace doors and walked on the terrace. I looked everywhere and I couldn't see anything. I turned around and started going back.
?: Ally wait! I'm down here.
I looked down and there I saw Austin climbing a tree. He looked so hot climbing a tree.
Ally: Austin! What are you doing here! Why do you look so scared? What's wrong?
Austin: To see you! And I'm trying to face my fear!
Ally: You're afraid of heights?
Austin: No, I'm afraid of your neighbor's dog. It keeps barking at me.
Ally: (chuckling) Austin, it's a Pomeranian.
Austin: I know. They're scary!
Then Austin finally finished climbing the tree and went up the terrace. When he was finally on the terrace with me he started speaking again.
Austin: I was really worried about you!
Ally: Why?
Austin: I called you all day and you didn't answer! I thought your dad killed you or something.
Ally: I'm sorry I was going to call you, but Trish called me and I forgot.
Austin: It's okay babe.
Ally: You called me babe!
Austin: Yea! Why what's wrong?
Ally: You had never called me that.
Austin: I know. Hey I brought some pizza!
Ally: Where is it?
Austin then unzipped his jacket and pulled out the box of pizza.
Ally: Wow. How did that fit in your jacket?
Austin: A man has his ways.
Ally: No comment.
Austin: (laughing) Hey Ally. I feel bad for always getting you in trouble with your dad.
Ally: It's okay but... (gets interrupted)
Austin then came over and hugged me. He put his hands on my waist and pulled me in for a long kiss.
Austin: And you were saying...
Ally: I love you!
Austin: Me too BABE!
Ally: (blushing) Umm.. let's go in my room.
Austin nodded and we left the terrace and walked into my room. Austin laid the pizza down on my bed and then sat down on my bed. I closed the terrace doors and walked over to sit on the bed by Austin.
Austin: So you wanna eat?
Ally: Sure.
We opened the box and we started eating. I ate 2 slices and Austin ate the other 6 slices remaining.
Ally: You sure eat a lot.
Austin: I know. Someday I'm going to grow up to be a fat, cranky man.
Ally: Wow Austin.
Austin: (smiling) Where's your dad?
Ally: About that... he's at the airport right now.
Austin: Why? Is he picking someone up? Is he going on a business trip? Is he (gets interrupted)
Ally: Austin, my dad is buying the airplane tickets. I'm leaving Miami in a week.
Austin's eyes started getting watery. Wow I have never seen the great Austin Moon cry before. He indeed started crying and started hugging me. I couldn't help it. I started crying and hugging him tightly. I then started singing him a song in his ear. It went like this.
I got a lot of things
That I have to do
all these distractions
our future's coming soon
we're being pulled
in a hundred different directions
but whatever happens
I know I've got you
you're on my mind your in my heart
it doesn't matter where we are
we'll be alright
even if we're miles apart
Oh
all I wanna do
is be with you be with you, be with you
there's nothing we can't do
I just wanna be with you only you
no matter where life takes us
nothing can break us apart
I just wanna be with you (you know its true)
yeah
be with you oh
yeah yeah
you know how life can be
it changes over night
it's sunny then raining
but it's alright
a friend like you
always makes it easy
Iknow that you get me
every time
through every up through every down
you know ill always be around
through anything you can always count on me
Oh
all i wanna do
is be with you be with you
there's nothing we cant do
I just wanna be with you only you
no matter where life takes us
nothing can break us apart
I just wanna be with you (you know it's true)
I just wanna be with you
Austin stood from the bed and went over to where I was sitting at.
Austin: I love you and I won't let you leave!
Ally: I love you too, but sadly you can't because I'm 17. I'm still a minor. My dad still has control of my life.
Austin: I know, but still I won't give up.
He stood up and held out his hand so I could stand up. I looked in his eyes and then I started to kiss him. Austin looked shocked that I took the first move. Then I wrapped my arms around his neck and started kissing him.
Austin: Ally, I better get going it's getting dark.
Ally: Okay.
Austin: I'll come back to see you tomorrow.
Ally: Okay, I'll be waiting for you!
Austin: Okay! I love you!
Ally: I love you more!
Austin started climbing down the trees.
Ally: Austin! You know my dad isn't here. You can leave through the door.
Austin: I know, but climbing trees is cooler!