To all the readers:
First off, thank you for taking the time to read this story, I'm glad it was enjoyed.
That said, when I re-read it for the first time a couple months ago, I decided that it was of poor quality. Not in content, but in structure and grammar mostly. So now I have gone through the entire story and I provide you with an updated version.
The story has not been changed. But the grammar, structure and details have all been improved. Some parts have been altered to correct for this and there has been a decent amount of details added to it.
I hope you all enjoy it and that I didn't pull a George Lucas. (those who have seen the Star Wars Original Trilogy before and after the special edition edits will know what I mean)