Hello
Okay, hello everyone. I am new to Fanfiction this is obvious by my awkwardness at writing this. When I started this story i had a whole plot thought out, I knew all the powers the kids were gonna have, I had thought up a bunch of twists and some things - that I thought - would make a good story. Yeah the title, i know is a little... completely stupid and weird (by the way if anyone could offer a better title i would love for you to do that) The story is/was originally called Inuyasha and the Time God. This is because I was gonna introduce this being that existed beyond the realm of what humans perceive as reality and yadayadayada. Anyway I am now going over the chapters to fix up some of the major, and i mean MAJOR, errors in my grammar, punctuation and just general storytelling. I really need input on how this is going i would really appreciate somebody saying anything, anything at all. I would prefer constructive criticism but if you want blatant bullying, thats fine too.
Anyway please enjoy, please don't hate me.
Chapter One: The New Arrivals
Inuyasha was frozen in his place the shouts and screams coming from the tent were almost too much for him to bear.
"Aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah, aaaaaaaaaaaaaaah" came the screams from the small hut. "easy, easy deep breath," Kaede tried to maintain her composure as she calmed Kagome.
This was the worst pain Inuyasha had ever felt, he had been sitting there for hours, frozen with a look of horror on his face, even when it had started raining Inuyasha could not move, it was like he was frozen in time awaiting Kaede to emerge from within the tent. Sango was inside, helping as much as she could, this meant Miroku waited outside with his two babies, Suki and Yuka, he sat, calmly rocking them gently to sleep in his arms. It had only been a year since Kagome had finished school and Inuyasha proposed two months before that, in that time Miroku and Sango had, convieved and birthed their twins. Was Inuyasha going to fast should he have waited a little longer before he proposed, millions of questions were firing off in his brain as he tried to make sense of the situation anything that could help him understand the screams of pain kagome was emiting.
"aaaaaaaaaaaaah oh my aaaaaaaaaaaaaaah, I'm gonna kill him, Inuyasha," Inuyasha was not affected by this remark as he still could not bare to move. Days before he was fully prepared and ready for everything to happen "oh no I'll be fine it's you I'm worried about what if you bleed out, or get infected" he explained in his flashback "it's ok Inuyasha" said kagome with the most calming and reassuring voice she could manage he was brought back to reality by the sound of babies crying. Checking his surroundings he could see Miroku and Sango looming over him, it had become apparent just how numb he had been. Sango smiled down at him, sensing his overwhelming distress "Inuaysha she's fine she just lost a bit of blood." They would never admit it, but they were amused by Inuyasha, the great dog demon who had a temper that could put to shame the most violent of demons had gone through such a dramatic change in character in such a short period of time.
Inuyasha got to his feet he felt his heart pounding in his chest, as though it was about to explode out and run away into the night. He was truly afraid of the questions he was asking himself, "will I make a good father, will I scare my own pups, will I destroy them" Inuyasha went pale and felt a sense of depression and anticipated failure sinking in. He managed to make it to the tent "Ka- kagome are – you – alright" he walked in and saw Kagome lying on the floor of the hut as tired as he had ever seen her, tired, but she had a faint smile and her eyes were weak, he felt the need to bring her up to him and hug her but he fought his urge in fear of hurting her. Kaede emerged from the other side of the hut carrying, with her one small bundle and Sango emerged from behind her with two more bundles. "Inuyasha I would like to introduce you to your pups," she brought them to Inuyasha and positioned them in her arms so that he could see them clearly, it was a beautiful baby girl, with dog ears and golden eyes she resembled Inuyasha so much it would be a crime to think anything else of it. Kaede then attempted to put the baby into Inuyasha's hands, but just as Kagome predicted Inuyasha darted away from it. It was one of his ultimate fears, that he would hurt the baby because of his destructive claws, he was made for destruction and death, not to hold anything so precious.
Kaede moved towards him with the baby in hand, but Inuyasha just darted away, Shippo burst into the hut looking for his new brother or sister, but he was amazed in seeing three babies, the little fox demon began to jumping up and down with joy. Inuyasha screeched "no, no keep them away from me", Kagome moved to stand, Kaede stopped chasing Inuyasha, after seeing Kagome "Lady Kagome lie back down you need rest dear child" Kagome stumbled at first and as she walked to Inuyasha she tripped, however he was there before her feet left the ground, he caught her without any effort and was about to help her down when he heard her speak. "Inuyasha you have been able to take care of me, you have protected me from danger, from demons, you protected me from everything, but you must not try to protect the babies from touching you, you are the most gentle and selfless person I know, now take your child." Inuyasha was still very hesitant but with that short speech he took the baby from Kaede. As Inuyasha saw the baby look up to see who was holding her he worried about scaring the baby, but all he heard were giggles and a strange cooing noise, he opened his eyes to see his child and looked into it golden eyes and immediately he felt a wamrness in his heart that he hadn't felt in a long time other the kagome, he felt like he could do this, he could care for his babies.