Well here's chapter 2 i was going to make them longer but i don't have the mental capacity or will to and i was going to wait for reviews and suggestions but whatever so yeah here it is.
"i don't own sh*t and never will they belong to kishimoto and if you don't like it well i just don't give a f# k" :the Doctor
Naruto and sasuke walked into their house to see their parents gutted like fish by the hand of a sword by the looks of it. naruto instantly broke down in tears while sasuke just stood there petrified. Sasuke picked up naruto and told him to go find help naruto looked up at sasuke and let out sobs of "i-i can't i j-just can't"sasuke knew why "naruto i know that your sad but now is not the time we have to find help". "o-ok" the blonde responded as he ran outside to find help when he heard a cry of help. they both ran toward the sound and what they saw shocked the hell out of both stood there stunned as they seen a man raise his blade to the woman who had screamed. they both looked on in horror as the man slashed the woman in half with a single chop. the man then saw them and turned to them and came toward them. naruto stood still anger on his face while sasuke was scared beyond belief and sobbing. the man stepped into the light and smiled at the two and naruto's hate turned into surprise when itachi stepped in front of them drenched in blood and a wicked smile that soon turned into an emotionless face. sasuke simply said "why i-itachi". itachi simply smirked and said "to become stronger" naruto looked confused and said "what the hell does that mean" itachi then lost his smirk and looked at naruto and spoke "why do you care they weren't your family you little bastard" naruto instantly became enraged with tears in his eyes he responded with "WHY WHY THE HELL DOES EVERYONE HATE ME SO FUCKING MUCH A-AND I THOUGHT YOU CARED ABOUT ME". itachi smiled evilly before he simply said "i never cared for either of you i simply did that to make you feel loved to rip it away and watch your faces" the blond started to cry and sasuke just looked at his brother and said "I WILL KILL YOU FOR THIS" itachi looked at him and smiled and in a second knocked naruto out "you will have your time to try and kill me but have to become stronger to do that and the only way to become as strong as me is to... kill …. your best friend". sassuke looked down at the unconscious naruto and said "no.. NO I WILL NEVER BE LIKE YOU … YOU MONSTER!" "that is fine with me that just means you'll never be as strong as me" and with that he jumped away leaving sasuke standing there crying and trying to wake his blond brother."get up naruto..g-get up we have to go tell the hokage or … o-or someone anyone who will listen" but the blond never moved so sasuke tried to carry/drag his sibling to the village he made it barely and told a ninja of what had happened and the ninja immediately took the boys to the hokage and told the story he had just heard."that is very troubling... so you say that the uchiha itachi murdered his entire clan and left these two there alone" said the third "y-yes sir thats what they told me" the ninja said "well uh i will get them an apartment to stay in but in the meantime they will stay here... you are dismissed kakashi" he said to the man "yes sir" and with that the masked nin was gone in a swirl of leaves.'uhg what will i do with these two they can't stay alone but i know no will take naruto in so i guess i have no choice damn it' he thought.
AN/ um if you have any request or dislikes please review and all criticism is welcome good and/or bad and if you want them to be longer just review and tell me