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Chapter 2.
AN: Fangz 2 bloodytearz666 4 helpin me wif da chapta! BTW preps stop flaming ma story ok!
The next day I woke up in my bedroom. It was snowing and raining again. I opened the door of my coffin and drank some blood from a bottle I had. My coffin was black ebony and inside it was hot pink velvet with black lace on the ends. I got out of my coffin and took of my giant MCR t-shirt which I used for pajamas. Instead, I put on a black leather dress, a pentagram necklace, combat boots and black fishnets on. I put on four pairs of earrings in my pierced ears, and put my hair in a kind of messy bun.
My friend, Willow (AN: Raven dis is u!) woke up then and grinned at me. She flipped her long waist-length raven black hair with pink streaks and opened her forest-green eyes. She put on her Marilyn Manson t-shirt with a black mini, fishnets and pointy high-heeled boots. We put on our makeup (black lipstick white foundation and black eyeliner.)
"OMFG, I saw you talking to Draco Malfoy yesterday!" she said excitedly.
"Yeah? So?" I said, blushing.
"Do you like Draco?" she asked as we went out of the Slytherin common room and into the Great Hall.
"No I so fucking don't!" I shouted.
"Yeah right!" she exclaimed. Just then, Draco walked up to me.
"Hi." he said.
"Hi." I replied flirtily.
"Guess what." he said.
"What?" I asked.
"Well, Good Charlotte are having a concert in Hogsmeade." he told me.
"Oh. My. Fucking. God!" I screamed. I love GC. They are my favorite band, besides MCR.
"Well…. do you want to go with me?" he asked.
I gasped.
Translation:
Chapter 2.
AN: Fangz to 'bloodytearz666' for helping me with th chapter! BTW preps stop flaming my story ok!
The next day I woke up in my bedroom. It was snowing and raining again. I opened the door of my coffin and drank some blood from a bottle I had. My coffin was black ebony and inside it was hot pink velvet with black lace on the ends. I got out of my coffin and took off my giant MCR t-shirt which I used for pajamas. Instead, I put on a black leather dress, a pentagram necklace, combat boots and black fishnets on. I put on four pairs of earrings in my pierced ears, and put my hair in a kind of messy bun.
My friend, Willow (AN: Raven this is you!) woke up then and grinned at me. She flipped her long waist-length raven black hair with pink streaks and opened her forest-green eyes. She put on her Marilyn Manson t-shirt with a black mini, fishnets and pointy high-heeled boots. We put on our makeup (black lipstick white foundation and black eyeliner.)
"OMFG, I saw you talking to Draco Malfoy yesterday!" she said excitedly.
"Yeah? So?" I said, blushing.
"Do you like Draco?" she asked as we went out of the Slytherin common room and into the Great Hall.
"No I so fucking don't!" I shouted.
"Yeah right!" she exclaimed. Just then, Draco walked up to me.
"Hi." he said.
"Hi." I replied flirtily.
"Guess what." he said.
"What?" I asked.
"Well, Good Charlotte are having a concert in Hogsmeade." he told me.
"Oh. My. Fucking. God!" I screamed. I love Good Charlotte. They are my favorite band, besides My Chemical Romance.
"Well…. do you want to go with me?" he asked.
I gasped.
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Chapter 2.
AN: Fangz 2 bloodytearz666 4 helpin me wif da chapta! (I worry about her so much) BTW preps stop flaming ma story ok!
The next day I woke up in my bedroom. It was snowing and raining again. (Ahh the weird weather that hogwarts obviously has) I opened the door of my coffin and drank some blood from a bottle I had. (Just lying around from last time I sucked someone's blood with my normal teeth) My coffin (everyone sleeps in coffins!) was black ebony and inside it was hot pink (Pink is not gothic) velvet with black lace on the ends. I got out of my coffin and took of my giant MCR t-shirt which I used for pajamas. Instead, I put on a black leather dress, a pentagram necklace, combat boots and black fishnets on. I put on four pairs of earrings in my pierced ears, (poor ears) and put my hair in a kind of messy bun.
My friend, Willow (AN: Raven dis is u!) (Oh good lord) woke up then and grinned at me. She flipped her long waist-length raven black hair with pink streaks and opened her forest-green eyes. (Wait wait wait?! She grinned, flipped her haire THEN opened her eyes) She put on her Marilyn Manson t-shirt with a black mini, fishnets and pointy high-heeled boots. We put on our makeup (black lipstick white foundation(your skin is already white) and black eyeliner.)
"OMFG, I saw you talking to Draco Malfoy yesterday!" she said excitedly. (Did she actually say Oh My Fucking God or did she say Oh em ef gee?)
"Yeah? So?" I said, blushing.
"Do you like Draco?" she asked as we went out of the Slytherin common room and into the Great Hall.
"No I so fucking don't!" I shouted. (Calms yo tit's woman she asked just you a question)
"Yeah right!" she exclaimed. Just then, Draco walked up to me.
"Hi." he said.
"Hi." I replied flirtily. (How do you say hi flirtily?)
"Guess what." he said.
"What?" I asked. (You didn't guess)
"Well, Good Charlotte are having a concert in Hogsmeade." he told me. (Yep a muggle band would totally play for a wizard crowd in a wizard village)
"Oh. My. Fucking. God!" I screamed. I love GC. They are my favorite band, besides MCR. (She is just killing My Chemical Romance for me)
"Well…. do you want to go with me?" he asked.
I gasped. (Can't breath?)
Did you enjoy it? I planned on only doing one today but I thought why not?
Thank you all.
Stay beautiful ;)