This is my first fanfiction, or at least, the first one I write and publish for Fifty Shades. Also, english is not my mother lenguage, even though I'm trying to get all spelling and grammar in check. Please, enjoy and let me know what you think.
Disclaimer: I do not own any of there characters. they belong to E.L. James and her books.
The rain fell hard on the streets. Cars bypassed her as she tried to get somewhere with no umbrella or something to cover her.
To say today was a shitty day was a really positive thinking. Not only everything that could have gone wrong went even worst, but everything she could count on was leaving her behind. Firs, her car, her Wanda, decided all the miles she had on her were more than enough, and she had to go to work on bus. On second place, Kate, her best friend and roommate, was leaving, again, with her parents on a holiday. Well, more like she's gone. Late for work means staying late. She must admit some parts of her were more than envious; she really could use some holidays.
On her work, the thing that always could even worse... surprise! It was even worst. Not only her boss was starting to get on her nerves. It wasn't just he was getting closer and closer every time he wants her to do something, and with closer she means physically closer, his outbursts and angry shouts were just getting on her nerves. Her dream job was that, it was the editorial world, the place where the books, all those worlds, the new dreams were made; only days like this one made her rethink his choices and if everything is worth the fight.
As she got to the end of the street and crossed to the left she could see the bus she was trying to get to. Leaving the bus stop.
Ok, today was a really shitty day.
Tired, wet, and cold, she decided to get into the bar she just passed. At least it would be warm.
And I really could use something to drink.
As she got inside, the bar was really something else. It screamed luxury and money and she was tempted to turn around; probably one drink would cost her half of her salary. Finally, the welcoming warmth from inside won her internal fight. One day is one day, and today she really needed something.
As she went to the counter bar, she could feel all the stares on her. Of course, all those gentlemen must be wondering what the hell is someone like her, jus an ordinary girl, dong in a place like that, full with men on suits and business meetings.
She took off her coat as she got closer to the bar. At least her baby blue shirt and her black pencil skirt weren't wet and it made her look a little less out of place. As she took a stool and made herself comfortable, a woman about her age, dressed in a silky blue got to the other side of the counter.
"Can I get you anything?", said as she looked at her with a sincere smile. Ana doubted about her choice, and the waitress seemed to notice. "May I suggest something?" Ana looked at her with a doubtful look. "I just though you look like you had a bad day. Maybe something strong to ease you but not so much you end up drunk?"
Ana smiled the woman back. "Yes, please". A couple minutes later she had a nice looking cocktail, strong and sweet at the same time. "Thank you", she said to the waitress as she was waiting for her to try her drink. With a smile, she returned to her work as more customers were demanding for her.
As she was enjoying her drink, a man got closer to her. He was tall, with dark hair and blue eyes. His stare was straight on her and she must admit he was really handsome and good looking with that suit, plain white shirt and dark blue tie. "Hello beautiful", he said as he took on the stool right beside her. "How is it we never meet before?" He asked as he looked at her with devouring eyes.
Feeling a bit uncomfortable, Ana scooted as much as her tiny seat allowed her to get as far as possible from him. "This is the first time I came here", she said trying to be polite.
"Nice voice, and nice accent. I can see you're not from here. Do you want a tour around?" The last question was made like a whisper, as he got closer and closer.
"No, thanks. I've been here for a while. I already know the place." She was sure he must be feeling how uncomfortable she was.
"Don't be like that" he said as he touched her and turned her face so she was forced to look at him "I won't bite you, unless you want me to", he said winking at his last retort.
As she was building up her courage to say something, another voice interrupted them both. "Hi, sorry, I was on a table and didn't saw you coming", said another man right behind her. As she turned around to see who it was, she saw a Greek Good looking at her with a kind smile. His black dress pants fitted him like a glove, and he seemed to have lost his tie to open his shirt a bit. As she stared at him open mouthed, he looked at the man seated beside her "Excuse us, we have a date" he said, taking her drink and moving back to the table where he came from.
Ana looked at the man beside her, who was staring open mouthed to him too. "Sorry", she said as she took her coat and her purse and went with the other man. As she got to the table, a very comfortable booth at the other side of the place, he motioned for her to seat with him, her drink placed by the place just in front of him.
"I hope you don't mind I interfered. I just saw how uneasy you were since he got by your side" he said as he took his scotch on his hand.
She smiled. "Uh.. No... actually, thank you"
"You can sit here and just enjoy your drink. Or have a conversation. Or go back there when he leaves. Although I admit I'd love to get to know you. You have a very nice smile" he said, making her blush. "And you look cute when you blush", he said smiling again and making her reciprocate.
"Honestly, I would love a nice conversation." She said. He made her feel nervous and confortable at the same tiem. She liked that. "My name is Ana"
"Hi Ana", he said taking her hand from the table, kissing it softly. "My name is Christian".