Okay here is chapter two please note this is my first story and im not that good of a writer I NEED MORE REVEIWS!
"Birchpaw why are you sleeping?" Troutstar ran over ay once. "What do you mean why is he sle... Oh no..." He had noticed Birchpaws dead body. "Im sorry Aquakit Birchpaw has gone to hunt with Starclan" Aquakits eyes grew so wide. "You mean hes dead?" Riverclaw, Birchpaws mother came out. "My baby! How could you Aquakit!" Aqaukit is crying. "I want to play with him more! I hate being the only kit in the hatchery!" "But you are not the only kit what about nightkit and Frogkit?" "They are so wierd!" Later that night every one sat Vigal for Birchpaw... even Aquakit. Once the vigal was over Aquakit went to the frsh kill pill and tried to grab a fish... but he could not reach it! "Birchpaw used to help me..." Wolfpaw, Birchpaws sister got the fish down for Aqaukit. "Here" She said. "Want to share?" Aqaukit nodded. They sat down and shared the fish.
*Another Moon later*
Troutstar is on the highrock. "Today we make both Wolfpaw and Blackpaw warriors" "They have learned the ways of your mighty code and we present them to you as warriors in return." He looked at the jumpy apprentices. "Do you promise to uphold the warrior code and protect your clan even at the cost of your life?" They both said bravly. "I do!" Troutstar nodded. "Then I shall give you your warrior names from this momment on Wolfpaw you will be known as Wolfleap and Blackpaw will be known as Blackheart." All the cats cheered. "WOLFLEAP! BLACKHEART!" "WOLFLEAP! BLACKHEART!" Blackheart glared at Aquakit making him guess that he had a rival. Just then a snowy white persion cat ran in. Troutstar looked at her. "Icefang? Why are in Riverclan camp?"