Yay! chapter 2 is out. I was so pumped to get a review that I jumped to do another.
Thank you KasaneMikufan865 for your review and following the story. Now my oc Anna! Do the disclaimer
Anna: do I have to?
Amber: Yes! I demand it!
Anna: *sighs* OK. Amber here does not own Fullmetal Alchemist or any other references she might make in the story.
Amber: Good girl. And remember I own you and Helen.
Anna: Lies!
Amber: You wish! Now! Enjoy meh story~
Now what? Our main character seemed to have met an early end. But that isn't much of a story is it? No. There is much more. Her death was only the beginning. Now that the prologue's over, the real story begins…
Part 1: the beguining
Anna's P.O.V
I feel myself gain consciousness and let out a groan. Ugh, what happened? Everything in my body hurt.
A lot.
Then it hit me; I died. That crazy truck driver hit me and I tumbled over dead. So… how am I still alive? Is this heaven or something? Or did I hit rock bottom and go to the devil. Not that I was very religious anyway… Ah well. It doesn't really matter much. Not like there was anything I wanted to do before I died. No regrets. So does this mean I finally get to rest in peace? Is this, like, divine happiness?
"Your delusional." A voice called out. I snapped my eyes open to see who had spoken. If there was another voice, I might have been reborn or something. That's what happens in all the books I've read . It was all black, even with my eyes open, so it was possible.
"Still in a delusion." A tick mark appeared on my forehead. "Don't get angry at me. I'm just doing my job." Argh! Was this person a mind reader or something?
"Actually yes I am" Wait, what? That's not possible! At least not for a human… "It is possible for me and are you trying to imply I'm not human?" The board voice trailed off. "Although you are correct. I am indeed not a human. Or not currently anyways."
"What are you then?" I ask, finding my voice for the first time.
"A messenger of god." And as if on cue, lights flipped on, showing I was in a small white room alone with a woman who seemed to be in her early twenties. She had glossy blond hair and a cute white dress which flowed down to her ankles. I could almost see the sparkles and roses behind her, as if she was the very picture of beauty.\
I stared with an open jaw.
"So are you like my guardian angel or something?" She just laughed. A little too loud and long for my liking.
"Ahaha... no. But I'll tell you who I am. I'm Helen. The angel who will decide your divine and heavenly judgment."
I blinked "Isn't than the same thing?"
She gave me a hardened look. "No."
I shrink back, looking at the girl in exasperation.
Perfect! just what I need! a sadistic angel who'll probably give me hell before sending me there.
"I can still hear your thoughts you know." She informed me with a chuckle.
"Ah! Stay out of my head!" I quickly place my hands on top of my head in hopes of shielding my brain. She just laughed again. "Is this really what you should be concerned about at the moment?"
Oh yeah, I was dead.
"You just remembered?" I twitched "Well, not all of my assignments can be clever." Another twitch "Ah well, it doesn't make much of a difference to me, brat" Twitch "I mean, it's a bit sad you died so early on in your life but now I understand why." That was it.
"WHAT THE HELL ARE YOU TRYING TO SAY HERE?!" She chuckled yet again. How annoying.
"You know" I spoke irritably "I thought angels were supposed to be comforting, innocent and pure."
"Well, you just got unlucky, brat. I might be an angel, but there's no requirement saying I actually had to be nice to others as long as I'm doing my job."
"What! That's horrible!"
"Why? is there something wrong with my personality?" She got in close to me, an apathetic lock on her face
I answered instantly "Yes! there is! I demand a new angle! I want a refund!"
She snorted. "Tough luck kid."
"Kid? You only seem in your early twenties!"
"Wrong!" she said with a grin "I'm one hundred and forty-two thousand. Or at least that's what is was last time I checked." she held a confused look on her face as she counted silently. Fingers moving to keep track of the numbers.
"Wow! That's old." I inform her before I could stop myself earning me a punch on the head, courtesy of Helen. As I rubbed my new sore spot, she spoke up again.
"Well, now that you're finality quiet, Let's see how you will get the privilege to go to heaven." On cue, a large spinning weal, accompanied by a rainbow of colors and flashing lights appeared next to her. "Welcome, to the wheel of fate!" Our lovely yet for some reason oddly plain contestant today is the ghostly Anna Richard, who died from a hit and run!"
"Great way to put it." I mutter. She ignored me.
"Now spin the wheel to decide what you need to do to get to eternal peace!" Grumbling, I got up to spin said wheel slowly my hand moved to the side of it. With a gulp, I push down my arm as hard as I could, and the wheel begun to spin.
and than it slowed down. "Not very strong, are ya?" "Sh-shut up." I reply, embarrassed.
The sadistic angel just shrugged. "Well, I don't really care. It's not my life that's in the hands of a wheel."
Jerk. I mean why did I have to be the one to get some insane angel. I know I wanted to have something different happen to me but I didn't want this to happen. Am I really that unlucky? It's just-
I was cut off mid rant by a loud ding. "Looks like your fate has been sealed, brat." On a red panel, in thick black letters it said 'Eight years in Amestris. Fullmetal universe. Requirement: Stay alive and learn alchemy.' "What's that? Why did they put 'stay alive' as one of the requirements? And where's the Fullmetal universe?" I ask in disbelief.
Helen leered. "Oh? You don't know it? It's a famous manga. And anime. Well, actually, there's two anime. Wonder which version you got stuck with."
"What's a manga?" I question.
She waved it off but gave a sadistic smile "Oh, nothing important. Well good luck meeting the requirements. You'll start at the age you are now, twelve. Also, all the stuff you need, currency, chalk for transmutation Circles, etc. are in the bag you'll get."
What the heck? What does that mean? Before I opened my mouth to speak, she cut in.
"Oh! And don't try to screw up the story line too badly. Good luck."
She winked and her hands reached my shoulders, with a soft shove, I found myself falling into nothingness. Struggling, I manage to shout out my concerns.
"Wait!" I yell, quickly loosing consciousness. "Where's Amestris What's alchemy? What's transmutation circles? What do you mean don't screw up the story line? WAIT!" And just like any other good heroine would do, I blacked out.
Lovely.
Tada! My second chapter done! now I can get to the fun stuff!
Please review or I'll make sure Anna will haunt you.
Anna: Don't talk as If I'm dead!
Helen: But you are.
Anna: Shut up!
Amber:*Ignores the fighting and loud crashes in the background* Bye~
Preview for chapter 3!
"I see a damsel in distress! Young lady! how may I be of service!" Behind me, a large man with blond hair and small blue eyes looked at me expectantly. He was what looked like a military uniform in a shade of navy blue. Also, I could have sworn I saw sparkles floating around his head. Pink ones.
"Well, you see. I wanted a train ticket but I don't have any money and.."
"Speak no more! Helping out people in need is a quality that has been passed down the Armstrong family for generations!"
