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Cheshire996
Already very interested which is hard to when it comes to me but this looks good so far keep it up. :)
me: thank you, I hope you like this one too
Issue No 2708786
I'm guessing Ace or/and Marco...But just for a laugh, why not make it Whitebeard? Then you can have those two coming running as she screams once she looks up and see the old man snoozing next to her. A young woman is attacking their captain while he sleeps! Hahahahaha!
me: I like your idea though I made it little different
Two men were having conversation in the very same room where Flora first time came to world of One Piece.
"Still haven't figure it out yet?" Dragon asked
"I'm still amazed on how the ancient gate still working and let ten people passes through it." Kuma stated
"weren't there supposed to be nine?"
"I forgot to report that the tenth person has passed through the gate three days ago."
"where is that person now?"
"I sent her to somewhere safe, comfortable and warm just as she wished for."
"is she going to be fine?" The revolutionary leader seemed to worry
"I already understand on how weak these outside world people but their knowledge on our world should be enough to survive."
"I wouldn't be so sure about it. Two of them arrested on Impel Down, three on mental hospital and four of them was actually dead."
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A woman scream was head all over Moby Dick early in the morning; two commanders ran as fast as they could but ended up bumped at each other.
"What's happening?" Marco asked curiously
"…." Ace shook his head
Meanwhile in the Captain's cabin, Flora stretched up a bit as her sleep a bit disturbed by the scream. So, the scream wasn't come from the fanfic writer, yet. She thought she was dreaming when saw the strongest man alive snoring next to her and went back sleeping.
Edward Newgate opened half of eyes and stared the young woman next to him.
'I'm going to punish Thatch and the nurse, maybe' He thought before back to his sleep
When they arrived to the source of the scream, they found Thatch and a nurse on the same bed.
"This is not like what are you thinking." Thatch tried to defend himself
"Oh yeah, let's hear some word from Pops" Ace said before rushed to Whitebeard's cabin
"Wait, you can't do this to me Portgass" The forth division Commander ran after a certain Fire fist.
With their speed and luck they both ended up crushed the door of their old man's cabin, woke the two people who were share a bed up.
"Pops?" Ace and Thatch with shocked expression
"Morning Mr. Newgate, Thatch and Ace" Flora yawned
One minute later she gains her conscious only to provide the second scream on that morning. The three of pirates were sweat dropped.
"She sure has a quick respond." Thatch stated sarcastically
The Revolutionary Army knew something about this. Will Flora able to survxivxe or return to the worls she belong to?
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