Ok so... Don't judge me this is my first story and I've had this in my head for awhile... So I've decided to put it on fanfic! Lol I would love to hear your opinion and CONSTRUCTIVE criticism! Not your story sucks or this is bad! You don't like it don't read. Anyway thoughs that like it please read and review! Love, LN
CH. 1
Renesmee-
School had just gotten out and I was heading to my apartment on the west side. I'd usually grab a cabbie and head there but none would stop, so I gave up and decided to walk the 15 blocks home. I was 5 block away when someone grabbed me, dragging me into any ally way. I tried my best to scream but my captor had his hand over my mouth. I fought, but he was too strong and through me to the ground. "You scream and I'll shoot you right here." He said. "Please" I begged, "if you want money I'll give it to you, all I have! Just please don't do this-""Shut it!" He snapped, "I don't want your rich money! I want-""Now Marcus is that any way to treat a young lady?" Came another's voice as he stepped out from the shadows. "Ha! Like you know how to treat women Jacob Black!" My captor says as the other comes closer. "Now you know I can't let you do this." He says. "I don't need your permission!" The man, Marcus, yells. "Oh yeas you do. Because you see, me and your boss Aro made a deal and this side of York is now mine. So if you take what's mine I'll just have to kill you." His voice is soft but there's an undeniable threat to it. "Now be on your way or I will do just that." "Ha! You and what weapon-"BANG! Marcus fell to the ground screaming. "Don't make me repeat myself!" this Jacob Black snarls and the other stumbles back onto his feet. "You'll pay for this Black!" he spits, holding is wounded arm, whilst hurrying out of the ally way. "Are you hurt?" Jacob asks slowly walking towards me. "No, I'm fine." I tell him, "Thank you for saving me." He just nods and puts the weapon in his jacket pocket. "You better get home." He says. I look at him questioningly, not knowing what else I should say. So I just pick up my belongings, nod and start to leave. As I get to the ally's entrance I turn, "Jacob?" "Yes?" "Thank you and if there is ever anything you need, anything at all, here's my number." I say scrabbling it onto a piece of notebook paper and giving it to him. " It is the least I can do." I say. He shakes his head and puts it in his pocket. "You won't hear from me" He says. "Well just in case" "Ha! Well alright then." He laughs. I smile and he smiles back. That's when I finally get a good look at him. He is tall; I mean really tall, with jet black hair and soft brown eyes. His smile is perfect and bright, he looks like he is in his early twenties. And boy was he good looking. "So, are you going to stare at me all day, princess?" He asks, "Or are you going to go home?" I blush at this and look away. "Don't call me princess." I say. "What should I call you then?" "My name is Renesmee." I tell him. "Well that's a mouth full." He smiles, "If I ever do see you again I'm going to call you Nessie" I roll my eyes, "Alright" I say as I walk out to the main street, "See you around." I call turning back to look at him, but he is gone, replaced by the darkness. "Or maybe not" I mumble under my breath.
Jacob-
I watched her leave from the shadows of the ally. She was pretty, with milky white skin, bronze curly hair down to her waist, and chocolate milk eyes that made me melt inside. But a girl like that was dangerous to a man's heart. She wasn't like other girls; there was something different about her. She had an innocence most others didn't. Deciding to make sure she made it home okay I followed her. Staying back a ways. Five blocks later she came to an apartment complex. She looked around, not seeing anything and opened the door, quickly walking inside. I waited a bit thinking of what I should do now. BEEP BEEP. "Hello?" I ask into my phone. "Jacob where are you?" "On the west end Quil. Why?" "Cuz I just got a call from Embry. The stock is in and ready for pick up." "Alright, take Paul and Sam, I'll meet you there." "Okay Jacob." "See you in an hour" I tell him ending the call. "Taxi!" I yell, throwing in a whistle for good measure. The Cab pulls over and I hop in. "NW 182nd street." I tell the driver, throwing him a ten. "Yes sir" He says. - "Alright boys put it down slowly now." I tell Paul and Sam as they bring in the stock. It's heavy and I hope that they got it right. "Alright open it up." I say, just before the loud ringing of gun fire begins to echo all around. "Shit!" I yell, "Quil, Sam, grab the box and move! Paul, get your as over here and help them!" BAM BAM BAM! "Damn it!" I hiss under my breath as one of the bullets graze my arm. "Jacob!" I hear Quil call. "Get out of here!" "But-"BAM BAM! "Get out of here right now Quil with that box or so help me these bullets will be the least of your worries!" I hear a car door slam and bullets go flying everywhere. BAM! Another hits my arm. I fall to the ground clutching it in pain. 'Damn it! I need to get out of here' I think as I start to crawl towards the back door. "I think they're gone" I hear a voice say. "Good, now search the place and see what you can find." I recognized that voice as Aro's, "And you better hope for your sake, Seth, that we find what we're looking for!" Seth?! "It'll be here Aro" Seth? What the hell?! That traitor brought them here! But why? "It better be, for your sister and girlfriend's sake as well." Of course, Seth was weak for them! I crawled out from under the desk, if I could just make it to the door, I could get out of here. CRACK! I looked down as my foot fell upon a piece of plastic on the floor. "What was that?" "It came from over there." I tried to move faster but it was too late. "Hey, stop right there!" "Damn it!" I hiss. "Now, stand up slowly." I did as was told, trying to keep pressure on my wounds. If I needed I could reach my gun, but I doubted I'd get the chance. "Hey boss look who we got here!" One of the goons says. "Jacob Black." Aro states, a hint of amusement in his eyes. "Aro" I replied back, a hint of disgust in mine. "Well, what a pleasant surprise. I'm guessing you were with that group, huh?" "Precise as always" I shrug. He smiles, "Well, I'm glad I now have a chance to talk about the little incident with Marcus." "Indeed" I say. "You see, I'm not very happy that my second in command was shot, so I thought that we should get a little pay back. Don't you agree Marcus?" said man nodded. "We had a deal Aro he went against." I explained. "And when to the Volturie ever keep their promises?" I hissed, "Well if you are going to kill me do it already!" "Oh, I don't think we'll kill you, at least not nicely" He says smiling, "I think torture is more like it." BAM! A bullet skims my leg, but I refuse to cry out. BAM BAM BAM! The bullets keep coming, hitting me on my arms and legs, grazing my sides. But I don't cry out. As the shooter gets closer I fall to my knees grinding my teeth to ease the pain. "What do you think now Jacob Black?" Aro asks, "Not so tough now, huh?" "Go to hell!" I spit before pulling my gun and shooting him in the gut. As he falls to the ground, I get up, as quickly as I could in my condition, rushing towards the door. I hear the others yelling and then bullets begin to fly. I slam through the thick piece of metal and into the ally. Everything has been compromised. I can't go back and I can't go to any of our safe houses, not now, because of Seth. What can I do? I stumble through the streets; reaching for my phone I feel a piece of paper. Nessie's number… I punch the digits in so fast my fingers feel stiff. "Hello?" comes a sweet voice on the other end. "Nessie?" "Who is this?" "It's Jacob- I'm in trouble and I could use some help." I say. "Jacob! Alright where are you I'll come get you-""NO! I- I'm not far, can you meet me at 140th?" I ask. "Yeah, I'll be there in a couple minutes." "Thanks Nessie." "I'm coming Jacob." She says, and I can hear her grab some keys. A few moments later as I reach the 14th my head starts to spin, the world growing dark. "Jacob!" I hear someone call, but I can't see and I fall to the ground. Darkness taking over….
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