Albus Potter and the Diamond of Destiny

by etymockery

Albus returns to Hogwarts along with Rose, Scorpius, and Sapphire. In his 2nd year, he struggles with his past as the year brings upon new adventure. With the enemy striking unexpectedly, allies or foes yet to be determined, and new found knowledge discovered, shocking secrets will be revealed. With self-doubt marring his way, will Albus satiate his thirst for knowledge?

2. Chapter 2

Okay yeah actually I'm so awful :S If you've read my profile, you've seen my mixed feelings on this series.

The thing is, I was 13 when I wrote it. And okay, I'm like only a year older now; but I've improved my English a lot. You guys may have liked it (for some reason I have yet to fathom) but the series was really disorganized and badly written. I do think my plot line was OKAY...so this is what I think I'm going to do. I'm going to rewrite these books; make them a lot better. If you (again, for some unfathomable reason) liked them now, then I swear you'll be awed when reading my improved stories. Characters will be changed, as will some plot lines, and the writing will hopefully be a lot more detailed; but I think the basic idea of the story will remain the same (rooted to auras and such). This time, the plot twists might be easier to predict; as you've read the story before, but yeah; I think this is what I will do. Something else I will do is ask for input. Any ideas that you think might be good for this series; like improved magical technology (which I already plan to incorporate), things you'd like to see happen, or even original characters you'd like to include, PM me or write it in a review. I really want to make it up to you; and you might have ideas I like.

So yeah, again, so so so sorry. Especially if you liked this series :S But if you did, I swear I'll make the rewrites better. So yes; please give me your opinions!