I know, I know...it's been ages since I updated I'm sorry! I really did mean to but my phone broke so I lost half of the chapter (because I do most of my writing on there, it's just easier) and I'm still rewriting the stuff I lost, but just to keep you guys going I've decided to post it in 2 parts instead of 1 long chapter :D so here you go! and remember 3 reviews before I post a new chapter, thank you to all of you who have stuck with this so far especially those who have taken the time to leave me a comment! I noticed a lot of people worried about jack and Tooth getting too close, I wont spoil anything I'll just remind you that this is a Jelsa fic so I wouldn't be too worried, and I totally agree with you guys, I definitely think they're better off as friends anyway and without giving anything away, some of you have gotten pretty close with your ideas of what's to come :) Though like I said it's not going to be an easy ride for Jelsa, I have some tricks up my sleeve :D anyways enjoy! xx


Chapter 5

(150 years earlier)

'Hey snowflake' Jack grinned, touching down beside her.

Elsa, perched on a large tree branch, turned to him a little startled, but she relaxed when she realised it was him.

'Snowflake?' Elsa protested, raising an eyebrow.

'It's suits you.'

'But that's silly. I'm not a snowflake, I'm a person.' She told him stubbornly. Hands on her hips.

'Oh come on,' Jack said holding his hands up in mock surrender. 'Don't
use your princess logic against me.'

Elsa's lips twitched upwards and finally she dropped her arms.

'You came back.' She said suddenly.

'Did I?' Jack asked looking around.

'What are you looking for?'

'Me.' He told her, 'I can't seem to see me anywhere...oh look!' He exclaimed holding a hand up to his face, wriggling his fingers dramatically. 'I did come back.'

He winked and Elsa covered her mouth to stifle a giggle.

'I promised, didn't I.' He told her and Elsa smiled 'I though maybe I'd imagined you.'

Jack shook his head 'No way.

'So what you doing up here anyway?'

'Just looking. It's fun thinking about all the places past the water. Wondering if they're different from my home.' She said.

Jack smiled. 'There are so many places out there and not one of them is the same. There's places where it always snows. Others where it never even rains.'

'Wow.' Elsa said in awe and the two of them sat in silence just staring out across the waves. Elsa suddenly turned to him.

'Do you want to play a game?' She asked excitedly.

Jack looked down at the little girl. 'Sure. What did you have in mind?'

'Hmmm I don't know' Elsa said. Jack laughed but was cut off when a snowball hit him square in the face, nearly knocking him out of the tree.

Elsa fluttered her eyelashes innocently and Jack smirked 'Challenge accepted.'

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It was the end of that first winter, the snow was melting and it was finally time for Jack to move on.

'Do you have to go?' Elsa asked.

'I'm afraid so, Snowflake.' Jack told her regretfully.

'Will you come back?' She pleaded.

'Of course.' He told her 'I'll be back with the first snow.' He promised.

She looked down at the almost defrosted ground, and sighed.

'But that's so far away. What if you forget about me?'

Jack knelt down in front of the little girl, meeting her blue eyes.

'I couldn't forget about you.' He told her, placing a tiny ice snowflake in her palm.

'I'll be back.' He said. 'I promise.'

She closed her fist around the snowflake, and nodded.

'I believe you.'


I know it's only short but like I said it's only half of what I was going to post. I'll get the rest posted soon! (remember though I need 3 reviews :D)