Ok, so much thanks to MiyaCook13! ? I adore Canterwood Crest! Thank you for the very helpful review! I will add paragraphs! Can't believe I forgot them! I'm glad you like it, so this chapter is dedicated to you. And to my amazing English teacher! I love her and she reads Percy Jackson and she agrees with me on the fact that the movies sucked! ? Ok, so here goes nothing!
Chapter 2 Annabeth's Point of View
I walked up slowly to Paige. How was I ever going to tell her? It would crush her. The tears came when I heard her talking to her beloved horse,
"that star is our star, and I'll remember you whenever I see it." I looked up to see her counting stars with her horse. Oh, gods, this was gonna be hard.
I gently tapped her shoulder, "I-I need to tell you something." She looked up at me, visibly paling. I took a deep breath, "It's-it's about Star." Her hand flew to Star's shoulder, where she left it, seeming to be protecting him. "He, um. He has a problem we noticed while you were away. And-and." Oh, gods, who was I kidding? I couldn't do this."Star... Star has to be put down in a week." My words hung in the now tense air.
OK, so that was really short and cliffhangery. I think I'm going to just write short chapters and update often. What do yall think?