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Author: actionliker
Fiction Rated: M - English - Adventure/Romance - Naruto U. - Reviews: 77 - Published: 07-10-07id:3647486
Disclaimer: i don't own naruto, if i did then im a monkeys uncle
im also known as a reviewer "action naruto lover" but now my pen name is actionliker
and this is my first story
Title: Hiraishin no Naruto : Naruto of The Flying Thunder God
Summery: The chunin exams preliminaries and finals matchs are different, Orochimaru and the sand never invaded, and who is this cloaked figure? And Naruto decides to reveal his true power and be feared as...Hirashin: The Flying Thunder God. Naru x OC
WARNING!! THIS IS JUST A TEST STORY!! (well i might add some chapters someday if im not shy) IT MIGHT NOT BE UPDATED!! I JUST WROTE THIS SO SOMBODY CAN HAVE IDEAS!!! and maybe someone can write this for me)
p.s
I changed chapter 2 a bit replacing the women who visited Naruto with Itachi
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Arashi and kyuubi stared at him for a full minute, then they stared at each other, then looked back at Naruto again with a creepy smile on their faces and what they said made Naruto regret asking for training from these two.
"fiiiiiiiiine" they said slowly and if possible, they're smile turned even creepier " we will begin your worst tortur-eer we mean your intense training...starting...NOW!!
Naruto's face was priceless .
..."NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!..."
And if it wasn't for the sound resistance jutsu enchanted walls, all of Konohagakure would hear the scream that reached to Otogakure
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chapter 3
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It was been a week and a half since the village had seen cell 7. (The village think Naruto left with them because Kakashi still had the fake shadow clone of Naruto walking with them at the gates)
Now they're back and Kakashi has nominated all three of them for the Chunin Exams. He has personally give Sasuke and Sakura two copies of application paper to inform them where and what time the exams commence, and the 3rd copy was pinned to the door to Naruto's house by a kunai that seems to fall any second which obviously means he has just put it there without a caring if it falls off or flies away.
Naruto was going to meet his loving teammates and go on to the exams, but not before he decides to henge himself.
He seems like the same "dopey," orange clothed Naruto, except this time he seems like he had his short blond hair grew out an inch or two and the headband was lopsided so he can make his teammates or rather Sakura go to a tantrum comment of how he can't even groom himself unlike her dear Sasuke-kun...
Sasuke looks the same except the aura of arrogance and ego around him seems to increase dramatically by tenfold.
Sakura...he was expecting she was still like the last time he saw her, whining, moaning, complaining, bitching bitch.
And she still is...damn.
Sasuke was the first to notice Naruto's presence and sneered.
"So dobe...your actually here...and I was hoping Kakashi-sensei replaced you." He let these words sink in," I mean come on...do YOU of all genin can last on something like the Chunin Exams?" he ended with a even bigger sneer.
Naruto just said nothing, but inside he was raging why does he even bother to listen to this...this brat.
"Yeah! Yeah!! Like Sasuke-Kun said! What makes YOU the world biggest loser to exist would ever be chunin when you can't even do a simple henge or a bunshin!?" shrieked out the pink bimbo
Naruto looked at them with a blank stare, but inside he was using a method that he learned from Kyuubi of how to subside his anger or else all hell break loose.
"Huh! Guess like they don't even notices how messy i look."
"Naruto! You even look messier then usual! Guess the dobe can't groom himself!"
It was a miracle that he didn't twitch an eye or go berserks and choke the pink hell out of this pathetic excuse of a kunoichi "well if she train and uses that freaky super strength she could be the next Tsunade." Naruto deadpanned in his mind, but he'll be damn if she finds out what he just thought.
Sasuke and Sakura was waiting for Naruto to explode to a argument fit to him or whine at her and babble excuses, but right now he's just standing there looking far up at space with a deadpanned expression.
"HEY NARUTO!! ARE YOU BRAINDEAD AGAIN!?!? LISTEN TO ME!!!!" the pink banshee who right now seems to have a iron lung SCREAMED with a higher volume then usual and she closed her eyes so she could stretch her mouth while she's at it.
She opened her eyes only to see Naruto AND Sasuke on the ground holding their ears in pain
"GAH!!!" Naruto was in more pain then Sasuke, thanks to his heightened senses as a jinchuriki. "OH KAMI!!! PLEASE TELL ME THAT THERE IS NO WAY SHE CAN BE ANY LOUDER THEN THAT!!" Both Arashi AND kyuubi are in the same predicament as his son/container, they are rolling on the sewage floor holding their ears in pain.
"I hope those banshee clanswomen doesn't find her. They will make her the new leader to replace the old one. because the old one had a voice that almost beat me for the title of 'STRONGEST DEMON OF THE YEAR". I don't think I would want to face this pink haired Exploud pokemon any time soon!" thought Kyuubi, shivering at the thought of facing banshee Sakura for the title of "STRONGEST DEMON OF THE YEAR".
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After an embarrassing moment of pain, they followed the information prescribed on the Chunin Exam nomination papers. The trio known as cell 7 is making their way to school room-to-room 301, which was crowded with many other wannabe chunins.
As they got there, they heard an commotion somewhere in the crowd. The three fresh genins of cell seven pushed and shoved their way in to see what's the commotion about.
A young preteen whose probably a year older then they are is on the ground with bruises on his face and he was bleeding from the mouth.
Naruto cringed. But not at the boy's condition, but it was his appearance that seems to cause his eyes to a total agony to a point not even his damned orange clothing could cause. He wore a green spandex.
("Aaaaagh!!!" Kyuubi, Arashi and Naruto with their knuckles/paws rubbing furiously to their eyes. andhis hands are bandaged up to the forearms, his leaf headband was on his waist and the cloth was in a color of red.
And besides that, what really made him cringe was the hairdo of this guy, it was jet black and it was a style of a bowl cut, he eyes went down lower to see his face, he had HUGE eyebrows that seems alive and looked as if it had the third amount of anyone should have.
And his horror turned to anger when emo boy, Sasuke just had to stepped up .
"You better let me through..." Sasuke started."...and take off force-field henge while your at it."
The crowd of genin is now muttering to themselves.
"What's he talking about."
"Who knows."
"HE HOT!!"
Naruto would have sweat drop at the last comment and in his mind he would have said, "If He's hot, Then you should check ME out." Instead he was thinking how Sasuke blew off their chance to eliminate a few candidates.
"What the hell? He just blew off our chance to eliminate some of these pathetic sons-of-&&, who couldn't even see a simple..." he ranted in his mind. Also his ignoring the two voices whose agreeing with him.
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ALL RIGHT...IM JUST GONNA SKIP THE SASUKE AND THE CHUNIN KICKING THING, ROCK LEE THING, AND THE KAKASHI GRADUATE THEM THING.
BUT I'LL GIVE YOU WHAT HAPPENED. and besides...you guys probably know what happened.
After Naruto's mind rant, Rock lee challenged Sasuke. Sasuke accepted, Sakura protested, and Naruto was...snoring. Then Sasuke got his ass kicked, and Lee was about to do his true Taijutsu. Gai appeared to scold Lee and freak out cell 7. Naruto who woke up, and almost has a mental breakdown from seeing an upgrade of another Rock Lee. They continued walking down the aisle and to saw Kakashi standing in front of the door way to the exams then was praising them of how proud he was when they came to the exams willingly, aaand after that he did not notice Naruto had just flicked him off behind his back.
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"W-What is this." Sakura blurted out.
"It's a room full of pissed off Genins Sakura..." Naruto muttered sarcastically, luckily nobody heard or at least Sakura didn't or else.
'What the...It can't be!' Kyuubi voice echoed through his cage.
'What?/What?' Both Naruto and Arashi said.
'Naruto...look in the middle of the group and you'll see a boy with red hair somewhere in there." Muttered Kyuubi. (I'm going to stop BOLDING lines for the Kyuubi and Arashi thoughts from now on)
Naruto scanned through a horde of genin and found who was the one Kyuubi descript.
The boy indeed had red hair, and by judging by his face and stature he seems to be 12 . He had teal colored eyes that seems outlined by rather large amounts of black lining around the eyes and behind him was a big ass gourd. (I can't describe Gaara or Temari's clothing, sorry)
The boy was also emitting a dark presence and was leaking killer intent that made the surrounding people soil themselves and standing besides him were two people.
On his right was a boy at the age 14 who seems to wear a black laded cat suit, he consisted purple war paint on his face and behind his back was a big ass wrapped figure.
And his left was a pretty girl who seemed to be older then the two at least age 15, she wore a... (I can't really describe her clothes either)...and she has a big ass fan on her back.
"what...I don't see anything special about him...beside the killing intent that can make people shit themselves and the eyes that can freeze a jounin in his place...but besides that, he aint nothing!"
Naruto with a huff.
"Baka!" snarled the kitsune. "Don't underestimate this one. If I'm correct...the chakra im sensing from the boy, he is the container of Ichibi no Shukaku.
At this, Naruto's eyes snap wide open and before he could ask anymore he was interupted by a loud "Sasuke-kun! did you miss me!?"
Naruto turn his head around to see a blond girl hanging onto Sasuke by the neck, he took note of her, she wore purple clothing, her long pale blond hair is in a ponytail and she consist to bandages her legs instead of pants.
"Sasuke-kun...do you miss me?" I bet your miserable with these losers..." She purred in his ear. Sasuke had the look of disgust on his face.
"Inoooooo!! Get off of MY Sasuke-kun!" screamed you-know who.
"Well if it isn't mutant giant forehead girl trying to show off!!" screamed back Ino.
And the catfight continues to many peoples displeasure.
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FAST FORWARD NO JUTSU!! Because you know the introductions of the rookie 9. (jeez im already losing my touch on this story.
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"Would you guys...do us all a favor and just shut up." they all turned around to see a silver haired teen youth whose hair is tied back to a ponytail, and wore Harry Potter shaped glasses and he seems to be 17 is now walking to them.
"You all genin barely out of the local ninja academy? HMF! All wet-behind the ears and runny-nosed!" He paused and closed his eyes." This isn't a field trip you know," he finished.
"Who do you think you are?" Ino scowled, not liking how this person is dilacerating them. (Don't know if I spelled correctly)
"Names Kabuto.so what?" he asked. "You kids need to open your eyes and realize the danger" he nodded to the foreign group of shinobi.
Naruto and the other turned around and faced a mild amount if killing intent that was shooting directly at them for making suck a ruckus.
"Watch out for the group behind you. They're Amagakure, and those guys have very short fuses." He sighed." Everyone is on edge, waiting to take the exams. I wanted to give you heads-up before someone snap and beat the living fuck out of you.
"But it's probably unavoidable. Like all rookies you think you already know everything." He said." I remember what it was like."
Sakura spoke up. "Are you saying this is the second...blah,blah,blah." Naruto tuned her out.
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Sakura spoke up. "Are you saying this is the second...blah,blah,blah." Naruto tuned her out.
Naruto started to get bored of Kabuto and stopped listening when Sakura started to speak. He began to scan the crowd for any threats besides the Ichibi vessel, he slowly sense two high level chakra from the right side and one far left of the room. He checked the right, his eyes widen, it was the cloaked stranger from before, he never noticed until now but his chakra signature is at least a kage, "he's WAAAAY too strong to be a genin," Naruto thought. He noticed he had two teammates aside him, but he didn't care about them, the only thing that is interesting is their headband consist the two beside him pales in comparing to this guy.
He slowly tore off his eyes on the then he began to search for the 4th strongest chakra that is on the far left. (Naruto's chakra is the strongest, Itachi 2nd, Gaara 3rd, and this person 4th, )
His jaw dropped.
'Beautiful'...
Sitting on a chair was the most beautiful girl he had ever seen, she can make a old moldy room look good by just standing in it.
She had...
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WARNING! THIS STORY MIGHT BE DISCONTINUE, DUE TO THE FACT THAT THE AUTHOR IS STUPID AND GET DEPRESSED BECAUSE THAT HE CAN'T WRITE A DECENT STORY OR A STORYLINE AND HE/SHE HAS NO CLUE TO WHAT TO WRITE.
Alright people I decided to write another chapter. but I ended because have no idea what to name the OC or describe her (I suck at description, plot and other things) , I also lack of putting something Japanese-like in a fanfic so let you know if the Jutsu is ENGLISH translated and you wanted to see a Japanese-English translator
Poll: OC categories.
I don't know how to describe a good OC that will be paired up with Naruto slowly. And I don't know how to dress her up or give her a good name.