Disclaimer: I don't own naruto, if i did then im a monkeys uncle

and this is my first story

Title: Hiraishin no Naruto : Naruto of the The Flying Thunder God

Summery: The chunin exams preliminaries and finals matches are different, Sound and the Sand never invaded, and who is this cloaked figure? And Naruto decides to reveal his true power and be feared as...Hirashin: The Flying Thunder God. Naru x OC

WARNING!! THIS IS JUST A TEST STORY!! (well i might add some chapters someday if im not shy) IT MIGHT NOT BE UPDATED!! I JUST WROTE THIS SO SOMBODY CAN HAVE IDEAS!!! and maybe someone can write this for me)

p.s

I changed chapter 2 a bit replacing the women who visited Naruto with Itachi

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Previous chapter

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His jaw dropped.

'Beautiful'...

She had ...

Sitting on a chair was the most beautiful girl he had ever seen, she can make a old moldy room look good by just standing in it.

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chapter 3

Let the Chunin Exams begin!

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His jaw dropped.

Beautiful...

Sitting on a chair was the most beautiful girl he had ever seen, she can make a old moldy room look good by just standing in it.

She had to be two years older then him, making her around 14 and him 12, and if she stand upright, she would be at least 5'2 or 5'3, so that means she is about 2 or 3 inches taller then him in his real appearance. (alright people, before you flame me at her height, then i am sorry because i don't really know the average height for 12-14 year olds and im also changing Naruto's height to 4'11)

She had shining jet black hair that reached to the middle of her back. She was pretty far for him to see what exactly she's wearing but he could tell that she had dark blue shirt . Also one sleeve is ripped off showing her right arm and hiding her left arm and both of her arms consist A.N.B.U like arm guards. under her waist consist black trousers that reached two inches below her knees, she also had four pouches on each thigh and to him it might have contained kunais,shuriken, and blue traditional shinobi sandals.

And with a Konoha hiate headband, indicates her as a Konoha ninja.

As he stared at her there was a nagging feeling in the back of his head, something about this girl is...familiar. Something clicked, "her!" He thought.

He remembered now! maybe three-four(3-6) years ago! This girl's name was Hitomi Megami!.(1)

All he knew about her was that she was only two years older then him while he was 8, meaning she was at least 10 years old. His first time he seeing her was when he was 5 and she was 9 she was temporarily Assigned by Sandaime to babysitting him. He disliked her at first, because he can't show her the real him, meaning he can't practice his skills and the jutsus he had learned from his father and Kyuubi, unless he would be reported to the Hokage by his charade for holding back at the academy.

She baby sited him for only a week, but his dislike to her became a liking and interest, because she's unlike the others. She was nice to him and not once but twice she helped him prank his next door neighbors who were...mean to him, also when he's feeling down from the cold looks and insults from the citizens who hate him, Hitomi seems to comfort him more then Arashi and the furry nine-tailed fur ball("HEY!!") could ever have at this time.

He became sad when her assignment span of taking care of him has diminish and she had to go back to her regular chunin duties.

Lucky for him he was going to meet her again in a year.

The second time he saw her was when assigned working at the academy with Iruka with his classroom problem. The kids were out of control and were at a riot at a degree Iruka and the other teachers couldn't control! (Mostly him, and the others has started to go at it as well!)

He remembers seeing her coming into the academy with a chunin vest, arm guards and blue shinobi pants, also she introduced her self before talking to Iruka. Although he was in denial, he could'nt help but to have a little crush on this girl and tried hard not to blush as Arashi and Kyuubi teasing him like". Nice curves and body for a ten year old! If i were your place I would also have a crush on her too son! "or "hey brat! In the future... mark her as your mate! she gonna be a goddess when she grows up, so get laid with her in the future or else you won't be a man...And because why!? BECAUSE I SAID SOOO!!!"

Naruto tore off his gaze from the girl and studied her team, they were also far away from him and they had their back to him so he see see they both of her teammates wore some kind of armor in gray color and blue shinobi pants

He tore off his gaze from Hitomi for the last time and went back to the genin group and this Kabuto character.

If he had gazed longer...he would have seen her looking at him directly as well.

He also realize something about this Kabuto character consist skill and chakra that rivals most jounins and maybe Kakashi's.

"...such capacities that should'nt be a genin but should rather a higher jounin by now. I got to watch out for him either." thought Naruto and resumed to Kabuto's "NID" or rather "Ninja Info Cards."

Sasuke questioned." Rock Lee of Konohagakure." Then Naruto, seems interested and asked for a profile as well

"And that red hair kid with a HUGE gourd behind his back and a girl with a HUGE". Naruto kept expressed the word "Fan, and the guy in the cat suit wit hmale-up on his face." (the boy in the "suit" and "makeup" fumed.

The rookie 11 stared at him, wondering how he knows a foreign ninja.

"You know their names?" Kabuto said. "No sweat then!" And with that he pull out two more cards and activated them, and handed them over to Sasuke

Kabuto began to explain "Rock Lee is a Genin a year older than you, he graduated last year. He's done 20 D-rank missions and 11 C-rank missions with Maito Gai, his sensei, and Hyuga Neji and Tenten, his teammates. His taijutsu has grown immensely over the past year, but there's nothing else worth mentioning. Although he was considered a standout among last years rookies, he didn't apply for the exam. None of them did. So, you three and him are doing this for the first time too, eh?"

The twelve genin stood silent

"Anyway. Sabaku no Gaara…I don't have much about him, honestly. I do know he has done eight C-Rank missions and a B-rank mission, which is a surprise, because usually Genins can't go on those. I don't know how many D-rank ones he's done. His skills are unknown, but he always carries a gourd with him. His teammates are his older brother and sister, Kankuro and Temari. The amazing thing is, after every mission, he comes back unscathed. Quite a remarkable achievement."

The twelve genin were thunderstrucked at Gaara's profile who is now smirking at his acheivments.

"He comes back unscathed at every mission!? Even a B rank!?" screeched Sakura, causing the crowd to look at her with killing intent, but she shrugged it off as if the room suddenly got a air conditioner. "On our second C mission, and this time Naruto wasn't attended, Sasuke-Kun still got hurt and this guy on a B-rank came unscathed!" Thought Sakura with a huff." But Sasuke still better! ""YEAH! NOBODY IS BETTER THEN OUR SEXY UCHIHA! (The author gagged)

"This guy go on a B mission while I, a Uchiha got a lowly D's and C's!?" Said a bitter Sasuke.

Naruto, on the other hand was rather in glee and pissed. "Aw man! how can he go on a high ranking mission! and he's still a genin! I CAN'T WAIT TO FIGHT HIM!" He shouted in his mind. "But I wish my real missions were recorded...well it's not really missions, but whenever Kakashi and the others ditch me for a low D mission without anyone knowing im not there, I secretly sneak out of the village and do what not even most jounin can complete, I and what do I get? A insult from emo here, and a silent pervert not caring but just simply reading his porn, and a pink hair 'thing' pounds me as soon as they get back!" He stopped ranting and resumed his thoughts.

"Why does Kami hates me!?" ended a Naruto with comical anime tears, Kyuubi and Arashi remained silent. But his thoughts were interrupted by a female voice..

"hey, do you mind if we ask for information?"

All attention from the NID and the genin, turned around too see...a 14 year old goddess and her lackeys.(to the boys and lesbians of course!...and Naruto as well)

Naruto couldn't see her clearly since she and her teammates were too far in the corner to observe her, now they was only four(4) feet away from him.

Now that she was up close, he took notice of her and her teammates.

She is indeed at least 5'6 and had shining jet-black raven hair that reached to the middle of her back that seems to sway when she moves. She had two bangs that framed her face and fell at two sides of her face. Her face lacked of baby fat making her slim and cute, and her cheeks sported a light blush and had perfectly pink sculpted buded lips. Her eyes were a stunning hazel/brown color. Her skin color was pale as Sasuke and it seem richly, flawless and creamy smooth. She had a dark blue long sleeved shirt, the shirt has one sleeve torn, exposing her ebony right arm and hiding her entire left arm, also it reveal her slim neck, the shirt stopped at her stomach showing her slim, yet toned belly both of her forearms consist ANBU like armguards and both of her hands are gloved. below her waist She wore black trousers like Shikamaru that reached two inches below her luscious knees and blue traditional shinobi sandals.

Her body lacked body fat, from both body and face. and he could tell by her structure, she has to two years older then him.

In the corner of his eye, he saw Sasuke sporting a slight blush but he was not the only one. Neji, Kiba, Choji,Shikamaru, the male of most genin and even Shino who was glad to have his high collared coat...or else...bye bye to his stoic reputation.

"Err...sure, who's info your looking for? "Kabuto answered. For some reason he's not blushing like the other males (Naruto, also not blushing but he's trying to built up a "hot potato" so he looks like he's blushing) (in case you don't know that is a "hot potato" is. is when a person hold their breath and the blood goes up to their heads.)

"Hmm..." She gracefully put her fingers to her lips in a thinking way. "How about...Uzumaki Naruto?.

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MWAHAHAHA!!! EVIIIIIL CLIFFHANGER!!...Actually, im sorry if the chapter is short to you but i...just can't write anymore (and I'll describe her teammates later)

I still got no luck to find a job at the Community service thing or else i can't go to my 11th year high school.

POLL 1): give name for OC (got it covered)

POLL 2): clothing for OC (got it covered)

POLL 3): preliminaries, Naruto vs.

a) OC (Naruto's future pairing) (3) (im looking foreword to this too!)

b) cloaked hooded figure (Itachi) (2) (I'll save him for the finals)

POLL 4) Itachi Uchiha is here as a...

a)Akatsuki spy who's going to the Chunin Exams to test Naruto's strength because he wants to test his capacities or (2)

b)Cloud village Genin for whatever reason (if you read te 2nd chapter im gonna remove his "giant sword" (2)

POLL 5) Itachi Uchiha is...

a) evil, bad guy (if he is, then he is the Uchiha clan true murderer) (0) (huh!)

b) good, good guy (if he is, then Shuishi killed the clan and Itachi killed him avenged the clan, and gaining the mankeyou and lied to Sasuke that he did it) (3)

POLL 6) should Naruto release the henge in the preliminaries? (4) yes (0)no (1)don't know