Disclaimer: I don't own naruto, if i did then im a monkeys uncle
and this is my first story
Title: Hiraishin no Naruto : Naruto of the The Flying Thunder God
Summery: The chunin exams preliminaries and finals matchs are different, Sound and the Sand never invaded, and who is this cloaked figure? and Naruto decides to reveal his true power and be feared as...Hirashin: The Flying Thunder God. Naru x OC
WARNING!! THIS IS JUST A TEST STORY!! (well i might add some chapters someday if im not shy) IT MIGHT NOT BE UPDATED!! I JUST WROTE THIS SO SOMBODY CAN HAVE IDEAS!!! and maybe someone can write this for me)
p.s
I changed chapter 2 a bit replacing the women who visited Naruto with Itachi
And thanks to all who has read and voted!
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"Hmm..." She gracefully put her fingers to her lips in a thinking way. "how about...Uzumaki Naruto?.
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They gawked at her. Well at least Konoha citizens gawked at her
The Konoha genin or anyone who know/heard of Naruto, were wondering.
''What the-? Why is this chick interested in the dobe?'
'Hmmm it seems fate has gave me a sight to remember'
Why is the vixen wanted to know about that loser of all people? She should be asking me! an uchiha! But look at that body and face!! She must be mine!'
'W-W-Wow, she l-looks s-strong! and so are her t-teamates'
'CHA!! that slut in interested in Naruto-baka!? Wait! i get it! She's trying to get close to Sasuke-kun!! I WON'T LET THAT WHORE HAVE HER WAY WITH MY SASUKE-KUN!!' SHANROO!!!!!
'wow, i wish i had her looks, but I'm still disgusted that i hugged Sasuke! blugh!! but i'm still disappointed with Sakura's decision to break us up.'
But Naruto has other thoughts besides "why the chick interested in him" thing
'Shit! She couldn't have known!!' He panicked as Kabuto began to search what she's looking for.
"Aaah here we go! Uzumaki Naruto. I't said here...he is the dead last of his class-" He was interrupted when Kiba's cocky voice gushed out.
"HAHAHAHA!! See girl!" He nodded to Hitomi He's a dead last! D-E-A-D L-AS-T! He ain't special! He ain't nothing! NOTHING!! What kind of Hokage will he be? I'll bet he'll be killed in the first and lowest c mission he'll ever got!" People started to laugh, also a certain blond hair, orange laded figure started to tremble a bit. "He probaly been abandoned by his parents because he's such a loser! AHAHAHAHA-" But he and his 'audience' was silenced by a cold chill that passed over him. In fact everyone was affected by a sudden killing intent. I't was small at first, as if it was being suppressed, but now it was massive. And it was enough for most Genin to soil themselves.
Meanwhile for Naruto, he got out of his panic and became irritated by Kiba's comment but what he said after that...HE GONE TOO FAR!
As he was unleashing killer intent. There were also two other killing intent but Naruto's it was massive enough to pale the other killer intent, But they only noticed Naruto KI (Killer Intent) which was visible to the naked eye.
Naruto started walking to the petrified Kiba and looked him in the eye...before kneeing him in his...jewels.
"...IF you talk like that to me again...I'LL-CRUSH-YOUR-RABIES-INFECTED-BALLS!!" He growled coldly. Everybody was stiff at his tone and his presence, even Sasuke and Neji. Only three in the room were calm and unaffected, but they were impressed.
Naruto continued to glare Kiba in the eye until he smelled...urine?
He looked down and turns his head with a disgusted "ugh."
There was a wet dark spot on Kiba's crotch and the dark spot increased little by little. He couldn't tell if it was fear or his low blow that caused it.
"Erm...Still looking for Uzumaki's profile?" Kabuto voice snapped everyone's attention to him again. Hitomi immediately act first with a quick "yes".
The feeling of panic rose up again. And like slow motion, He tried, and I mean TRIED to take the card that was starting to approach her hand.
WAP!
Naruto's fingers covered the bottom half of his profile while her fingers was holding tightly on the top half. His so called 'bright blue' eyes are now cold and fierce and glaring at her clear, calm yet frosty hazel/brown eyes.
"I believe I should read it, since it is MY-" He tried to yank the info card from her but her grip remained strong "Info card" He calmly finished, but inside he was a little nervous.
"Sorry but I believe..." She pulled the card closer to her "...I asked first" She calmy said. Her face was unreadable.
"Hehe...I apologize...gorgeous..." He gritted his teeth "...But my profile" he pulled the card with a little more force. "Is for my eyes...ONLY" He growled softly through his teeth.
"Weeeell...This 'gentlemen' Kabuto kindly let me the see 'your' profile FIRST..." She pulled even harder.
The people are now watching the two preteens fighting over a card. Their fingers are tightly secured on the thin piece of paper, which was being pulled left and right by the two who were refusing to give up.
"Well so sooorry if I..." He gripped the 'NID' (Ninja Info Cards) harder."...A little...cautious" bring his face a bit closer to hers "...Of-my-life" He bared his teeth and fangs are visible for only her too see. He tried to intimidate her but what he didn't expect was her calm but imitating look turned to a smile which made him blush a bit and not noticing a slight 'thump' from a crowd of red face men/boys.
Naruto yelped as she suddenly yanked the card which pulled him forward so that he was very VERY close to her face. He could feel her slightly hot breath on his face and their nose are just a centimeter apart.
NOW everyone was staring at them in either Curiosity, jealousy and confused.
"You know Na-ru-to-Kun...She phrased "When I babysitted you, didn't I tell you being a gentleman while talking to women?" She gazed into his surprised expression.
"Soooo...you finally acknowledge that you...'babysitted' me, and I thought you forgotten me" He started, Every boy except the Sand genin and the cloaked figure was now red with envy.'He got babysitted by a hot chick!? Especially the Konoha genins 'how can the dead last get such a hot chick to take care of him? Man...I wish I was in his place.'
Everybody's thoughts were shattered when there was a slight 'RIP!'
Naruto's Ninja Info Card was ripped in half and there was two pieces of it in both Naruto's and Hitomi's hands who were now scanning the ruined profile.
'bla bla bl...wait, how did he know that I sneak out of the village every time my assigned team ditch me?' He narrowed his eyes at Kabuto . 'I hide my tracks perfectly...He definitely NOT genin level!'
Meanwhile, Hitomi who was finished with her share of the card was now having a look of irritation and a hint of satisfaction.
"So girl...er-'Hitomi'...why are you so interested in my life?" He narrowed his eyes at her graceful form.
"That's for you to find out!" She giggled (making most boys 'sigh') and left with her bored teammates.
"Hitomi huh? Well 'Hitomi'...I don't know why you are interested in the dobe but...YOU'LL BE MINE!" Thought a certain chicken butt Uchiha.
Naruto was about to retort when a male voice shouted out and smoke appeared in front of the room.
"ALRIGHT A(BEEP)HOLES!! QUIET DOWN! IT'S TIME FOR THE FIRST PART OF THE CHUNIN EXAM!" A big, tall guy with a black overcoat, black Konoha headband that hide his entire head and there was two long deep scars on his right cheek and his left temple running down to his chin.
Naruto ignored his rules and the only thing he found out was that that the man was named Morino Ibiki and he was the Procter of the first part of the exams.
But he didn't know was that the first sequence was...
"A PAPER TEST!?!?" Everybody stared at his stunned figure.
"Aaarg...the answer sheet of death!" He glared at the white sheet of paper. "...My mortal enemy..."
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SOOO SORRY FOR A SHORT CHAPTER!! but like i said, I can't right long chapters very often.
Also for "Reincarnation of Envy!" and Get em Kyuubi!" Im a little stuck, so email me for ideas!
AND HERE ARE THE POLLS!!
POLL 1): give name for OC (got it covered)
POLL 2): clothing for OC (got it covered)
POLL 3): preliminaries, Naruto vs.
a) OC (Naruto's future pairing) (6) (im looking foreword to this too!)
b) Cloaked hooded figure (Itachi) (2) (I'll save him for the finals)
POLL 4) Itachi Uchiha is here as a...
a)Akatsuki spy who's going to the Chunin Exams to test Naruto's strength because he wants to test his capacities or (2)
b)Cloud village Genin for whatever reason (if you read te 2nd chapter im gonna remove his "giant sword" (4)
POLL 5) Itachi Uchiha is...
a) Evil, bad guy (if he is, then he is the Uchiha clan true murderer) (1) (huh!)
b) good, good guy (if he is, then Shuishi killed the clan and Itachi killed him avenged the clan, and gaining the mankeyou and lied to Sasuke that he did it) (9)
POLL 6) should Naruto release the henge in the preliminaries? (7)yes (0)no (2)don't know
POLL 7!) vote yes or no if you want to skip the first exam (the paper test)
POLL 8!) vote yes or no if you want to skip the 2nd exam (the forest of death)