HEY! wassup everybody! I'm back! and I'm using my dad's computer! and do to my time of school and stuff I'm very busy so don't expect me to update fast.

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and this is my first story

Title: Hiraishin no Naruto : Naruto of the The Flying Thunder God

Summery: The chunin exams preliminaries and finals matchs are different, Sound and the Sand never invaded, and who is this cloaked figure? and Naruto decides to reveal his true power and be feared as...Hirashin: The Flying Thunder God. Naru x OC

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Previous chapter

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"Well...Hitomi...how do you like...MY BANRYU!?!?" Naruto smirked at the stunned expressions.

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Chapter 7: Naruto...is that you!?

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"Well...Hitomi...how do you like...MY BANRYU!?!?" Naruto smirked at the stunned expressions, all eyes were on the giant halberd which is now resting on his shoulder. The sword, zanbato or rather a giant halberd, it was huge and the size and weight should be impossible for Naruto of all people to even lift it up with ease. The halberd was a huge double edge sword and with a very long taped pole as a hilt and at the end of the hilt was a cresent shaped moon blade. It was twice the size of the current wielder and have to be 6-7,1/2 foot long at least.

Hitomi face was as calm, amused smirking one, but her eyes tells something different. An alarmed, worry yet...excitement?

"Heh...Bring it". She said she got herself into a stance and with that Naruto decides to strike first and with both hand on the hilt taking off the "Banryu" from his shoulder and with speed and streangth that shouldn't be possible for his size and in addition of his weapon he charged at the unmoving Hitomi.

"RAOOORRR!!" He strucked hard at his prey.

BOOOOOOOM!!!!!

The shock was tremendous.

Right after the tip of his sword supposingly striked though her and to the concrete created a shockwave. The concrete ground rose quite a bit, smoke starded to gather and the shockwave from the sword tip traveled into a straight line hitting the wall.

Soon the smoke started to dissipate and with a few coughs everyone saw into the clearing.

The aftershock was also mind bogoling, many chunks of concrete were now falling back to the groundl, some small as atoms some concrete pieces were as big as small boulders. more smoke were fading and revealed a large crater and standing in it was Naruto with a smirk and the self proclaimed "Banryu" was resting comfortly on his right shoulder.

He started to look around knowing his opponent has narrowingly escaped. His eyes traveled but he can still see the reaction, oh just how he loved the expressions on their faces, the incredilaty of the jounins, the Genin have the looks of utter shock.

In addition of the shock and aw, Sakura had her mouth gaping then closing then opening it in a gapping like hole and the expression on her face was obvious that she didn't want to believe it.

Sasuke had something like "How the dobe have THAT!?" on his face.

Kakashi was...well thanks to that goddamn mask of his, we can't really tell but his er...eye widened with several emotions and thoughts and we know he's is shocked as well as the others.

The sand sibs were also stunned but the red head was showing a few little interest.

On the other side a certain hooded/cloaked figure twitched slightly

And the Sandaime Hokage, his eyes wide with shock and his smoking tabacco pipe has fallen from his mouth and on to the floor with a loud 'clang'

Naruto took note of this couldn't help but to feel a pang of guilt in his heart for lieing to Sarutobi Sandaime, he was like a Grandfather to him and Arashi but he has to sacrifice to...have...this.

Unknowest to him, the third was more alarmed of the sword and reconized it.

-------------------(SANDAIME AND THE OTHERS POV)----------------------

Everybody was stiff besides a few, shock was easily shown on them, some enmitting hatred and few were reasonable and calm.

'That sword! Why that is supposed to be the heirloom weapon of the Raitonmu clan!' Thought an old Kage and stared deeply into the young lad's figure.'Naruto...how did you...' (AN sorry couldn't think of anything else besides "Raitonmu" since Raiton means something like lightning or thunder)

'Impossible! There is no way that dobe could lift something like that! and the damage, that...power Uug...THERE...IS...NO...WAY!' Thought of the self-proclaimed "invincable Uchiha genin."

'That can't be Naruto-Baka! No way he could actually lift that!' Pinky here.

"..." or "Impossible! A genin or even low leveled jounins can lift that! let alone Naruto/the Demon!' From Kakashi or the other jounins.

The most genin are having their mouth gapping or on the floor and the siblings of Suna are a bit perked.

------------------(BACK TO THE BATTLE)------------------

Naruto snapped out of his thoughts as Kyuubi and Arashi said "Watchout/watchout!"

He spin a 170 and just in time to see his opponent firing up of what seems to be a Katon jutsu(fire jutsu)

'Crap! A "Katon: Gōkakyū no Jutsu!' (Fire Release: Great Fireball Technique)

"Katon: Gōkakyū no Jutsu!"

His prediction came true, a great ball of fire erupted from her lips and advance quickly upon him, thinking fast he thought of many ways trying to counter the looming attack, until one popped into his mind

"Grrr...Damn it! 'Banryūsen'!(Dragon Hammer)

He swung the giant blade and a great wave of enery waves in pink striked on par with the Hitomi's fireball.

Another explosion rocked the arena again.

The spectaters had a hard time standing and shielding their eyes from the blast. Smoke was everywhere, the heat from the fireball was unbearable for a moment.

Soon a figure shot out from the smoke and land on the iron bars where team 7 is, Hitomi stared at the smoke before bringing out a scroll and bit her wrist. She let the blood travel down to her fingers and with one swift movement she flipped the scroll out and stroked the contents of the scroll with her bloody fingers.

(INSERT BACKROUND MUSIC)

Like maybe "the one winged angel" or Sephiroth music theme. if you don't like this choice of music then imagine some rock music like Linkin park or something)

A puff of smoke surrounded her as another figure shot from the arena and into her position.

Meanwhile for Naruto, who waited in the smoke for what seems to forever, fed up with the waiting he decided to take the shot ignoring the voices in his head. As he shot out from the smoke, just in time to see her smokey figure.

"YOUR DEAD!" He swung his sword for a death stroke.

As soon as he stuck her a loud metal 'CLANG!'echoed through out the room.

The blow blew the smoke surrounding her, revealing a really REALLY long kantana holding against the Banryu.

Naruto and everyones eyes widen at the new blade, it was at least 5-6 long and (not good as decsription of the this sword so imagine Sephiroth's sword from FF7 or Advent children)

'That blade...is that...Masamune!?'

Naruto narrowed his eyes. 'The masa-wha?'

'Naruto...Kyuubi,' Yondaime's voice spoken out of the darkness. 'theres no time for that now and-WATCH OUT!'

Naruto, who was off quard while talking to the spirits in his mind/soul, Hitomi took this chance to slash her sword horizontaly, resulting Naruto to fly back to the other side of the arena.

Regaining his thunder back, he flipped halfway across the arena and landed harshly on the demolished floor and looked up ro find her except shes no longer there.

"Hey! Where'd she go!?"

behind...

Naruto reacting fast he sprung a 180 and slashed...a boulder like chunk of concrete, with smoke around it?

'Shit...the replacement jutsu!'

Not soon after, something headed torward to him fast, the piece of the concrete floor has fallen to the ground resulting large amount of smoke to rise, covering his view and one second Naruto was standing and the next second he was knocked out of his feet and his sword fell out of his hand.

Naruto tried to get up but as soon as he lifted a single shoulder, he felt something heavy slammed on him.

"OW!" Naruto's head slammed back to the floor with a bit 'Thud' he opened his eyes and saw what caused it.

Hitomi was straddling him her knees are painfully pinning his forearms and her blade was inches from his throat.

'CRAP...' Was all he could think of. He stiffened as she place her cold steel arsery closer, now touching his throat.

"Do you give up...?" Her voice cold and sharp as her blade.

'Do give up...?' He found his voice distant in his mind, his eyes glazed a bit 'Do I...want to give up...?'

His glazed eyes soon vanished and replaceced my fire of determination and resolve

"NO!" He snarled.

"Oh...And why not?" Her tone still sharp.

He sneered at her. "One, I refuse to give up as long as I breath still, I won't give and two, I refuse to to lose to you, and 3...," He sneered harder. "This battle hasn't even gone that long compared to the other matches." He stopped and positioned a direct eye-contact withher.

"This little spat has gone for only two-and-a-half minutes...I'll be damned if I lost this fast!"

Hitomu gazed at him, her empression soften before a soft chuckle came through her lip which turn into a full-blown snicker.

Naruto glared at her. "What?" He hissed.

She stopped snickering at him and smirked, she moved lower and now straddled his waist and her head was slowly begining to droop a bit her face and her long black hair shadowed his face a bit-and oh boy many of the boys and men in the arena hold breath and some women are now either blushing in embarresment and some are shock and disgust.

Back to the participating fighters, Hitomi still stradled Naruto's waist and is it them or her head is getting closer to his?

"H-hey! What are you doing!?" Said a startled Naruto not very used to this form of close physical contact.

Her smirk widen a bit

"This..."

She abondoned the blade by tossing it aside, shocking him and the others, in an instant she let her head fall and sweetly, delicately, captured his lips with her own.

Now everyone, and I mean EVERYONE's eyes bugged out, and as for Naruto his are twice as wide and his body was stiff from this unfimiliar feeling on his lips.

'U-uh...this...feeling...' Naruto was soon trying to register all of...this. 'Is like a...well, whatever, but still...it feels...good?'

Soon she departed her lips from his own and smirked once again at his startled yet disapointed face.

Naruto blinked stupidly and blinked stupidly again, his surprised eyes soon hardened and glared at Hitomi who suddenly looked innocent.

"What the hell Hitomi!? Why'd you kiss me!?" He yelled. His protest was made a lot less convincing by his unconscious reflex to lick his lips.

"You didn't like it, Naruto-kun? I suppose I'll have to do better than that with the next one, then..." she murmured.

Naruto and everyone went stiff thinking that she'll repeat her actions again.

But instead of lowering herself to him again, she leaned back a bit and raised her arm.

Then she pulled her hand to a fist and chakra slowly gathered througout the tight fist.

'OH NO SHE DIDN'T!/OH NO SHE DIDN'T' Thought of most of the spectaters, ghost and demons encluded.

Naruto however was now gaping at Hitomi with a stunned expression and his eyes were an intense fire of disbelief.

'That kiss was a-'

She punched, HARD into Naruto stomach.

'-distraction...'

And ouch! A large crater quickly formed underneath him.

(THINK OF HOW "PILL EMPOWERED CHOUJI" PUNCHED "CS2 JIROBO")

"AAAAAAH!!!!" OUCH! Naruto was literaly having all the air punched out of him and it hurt!

Unknowest to him, this great sudden pain has ruined a great focus of concetration. And the brief pain took something off of him.

Dust were flying everywhere, shielding both contestents from view, and soon dissipated as soon as it came.

"U-u-uug..." A a sound came from two figures from the dust.

Hitomi had a surprised look the injured figure as well as the others. lying injured beneath her was a different person.

'Aaarg! That...that...THAT HURT!!!' Screamed Naruto his voice echoed throughout his mind. 'Man...It was like a Tsunade right there...except that Tsunade doesn't seduce, then beat the crap out of her opponents' Thought of one Namikaze Arashi.

"Yeah...what he said, but hey! you aright fleshbag?' Kyuubi who sounded uncharacteristicly worried.

'Tch...I'm okay...? YOU THINK I'M OKAY!?!?' His half-lidded eyes traveled to the others. 'What the hell they're looking at?'

"N-Naruto...is that...you?" Sakura's voice reached his ears.

"Of course im not A-Ok you pink haired bitc-I mean Sakura-Chan..." Naruto was annoyed, and annoyed enough that he didn't scream or notice he slipped say that Sakura was a BTH but how can she even ask him that! Of course it was him!

"Oh no...Naruto...your henge! It's dispelled! Yondaime's worried voice.

Naruto's half-lidded eyes widened as much as his pained half-lidded eyes could. He slowly and painfully lifted an arm and picked a long golden bang from his forehead.

'Aw...for fuck sake...'

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Alright people! heres the update

BUT YES, THE "BANRYU" the same "Banryu from Bankotsu of "Inuyasha"

But don't expect me to update fast, I'm only using my Father's already brokendown computer so yeah!

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