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Title: Hiraishin no Naruto : Naruto of the The Flying Thunder God

Summery: The chunin exams preliminaries and finals matchs are different, Sound and the Sand never invaded, and who is this cloaked figure? and Naruto decides to reveal his true power and be feared as...Hirashin: The Flying Thunder God. Naru x OC

And thanks to all who has read and voted!

WARNING MANY AUTHOR NOTES OR A/N, IN THIS CHAPTER!

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"Oh no...Naruto...your henge! It's dispelled! Yondaime's worried voice.

Naruto's half-lidded eyes widened as much as his pained half-lidded eyes could. He slowly and painfully lifted an arm and picked a long golden bang from his forehead.

'Aw...for fuck sake...'

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chapter 7: found out but battle!

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'Aw...for fuck sake...' Hemused as he continued to lightly pull a long golden bang that was connected to his scalp.

Meanwhile Hitomi was shaking herself from the suprise and started to pulled her fist back for another painfull blow. Unfortunelty for her, he was ready this time.

As for Naruto, still adazed and recovering from the earlier assult, two flustered voices came to him

'Watch out brat!/Watch out son!'

Naruto was just in time to dodge an incoming fist, the blow was fast, but he was able to shift his head to the left so her fist barely grazed his right ear.

He slightly recoiled a bit as her fist made a small crater, but recovered and now roughly in an instant, he summoned chakra, he summoned impossibly large amount of chakra pumped within him.

"Grrr...GET-OFF-OF-MEEEE!!!!" He growled, no, he roared, HE screeched.

Chakra exploded around him, within him, causing the debris around him to rise, the crater underneath him crumpled and collasped and Hitomi was sent flying to the other direction.

But quickly recovering she flipped in midair and landed on the wall near team 8 are. (A/N, Team 8: Kurenai, Shino, Kiba, and last not but least, Hinata)

'Owww... Crap, I was hoping that would finish off...' Her eyes, face and thoughts were still cold, stern and emotionless, but if you look closely, there was a tinge of pink on her cheeks which was growing in color. 'But damn, I got to admit...he gotten...cuter...'

'As he wasn't cute enough when he was younger!' A sort of fangirlish voice that came out of nowhere. but this little mental conversation wasn't helping her already pink face.

Meanwhile for Naruto, due to the small chakra explosion, dust were flying everywhere shielding everyones view.

But what comes, it must go eventualy. The smoke soon lifted and the spectaters are able to see a faint shadowy figure.

For the next 10 seconds, most females were either blushing slightly, a few were drooling or some were having a massive nosebleeds.

Standing in the center of the arena, was a whole different person. Standing before all was a boy, taller then the one before, and his skin tone was no longer tanned as before, He still has a bit of a tan, but he was still pale.

Due to the "death punch" by Hitomi, blasted the orange clothing and the black T-shirt underneath, revealing a extremely well toned, yet bloody stomach,slightly bloody chest and clean broad front shoulders.

(A/N, i decided to change his appearance a 'little' bit.)

He was 4'11 or around Sasuke's height and he was very well built. Not like a disgusting heavy body builder, but lean and enough for him to move nimbly. His hair sunny blond was no longer short and yellow, but flowed gold (A/N like the 4th hair color), silky, long and reached long enough to the waistline, silky in the back and front, also his hair was spread all around.(A/N,Think of Envy's from FMA, except gold colored with some of red locks and bangs, and lot more hair locks, also he has enough bangs to hide 60 percent of his eyes and mostly his face)

His eyes are more narrowed and his bright, happy blue eyes are replaced by a more cold, fierce, Intense electric blue, now carved into his young, but hansome face. But most of his eyes were shadowed by his many mass of long gold and red bangs, so you can see a glint of blue behind all that.

What's interesting was, most of his chest, shoulders and arms were covered in some kind of styllish tattoos tinted in a black/dark purple color, and some tattoos in "rings" in a fading, pitch black, color. (A/n again, but think of the "Tattoos" from the purplish markings of Yusuke's demon form, with some additional spiral markings)

And to complete his appearance, three red tinted slash marks were engraved on each cheek which resembles whiskers, but to others, they know it was either a curse or a blessing.

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'What the-where is the dobe? And who the hell is he!?' Uchiha.

'N-Naruto-BAKA!? Noooo...this is an imposter! If that is, then that baka is gone! SHANROOO/YEAH! THAT KUSO BAKA IS GONE AND REPLACED BY A STUD!

'Sigh...so this is the real you Naruto...? I always knew you were hiding something, but your still troublsome.' A certainLazy sonuvabitch Nara.

'Wha-what the, WHAT THE HELL...!?' "Bark!" Said these two canine duo's. (A/N, his match with OC was a draw, but he was in a good condition, just enough to see the prelims.

N-N-Naruto-K-Kun...no matter how much I s-see you like this, I-I still...!' Sadly Studdered from a certain shy Hyuuga indivisual. (A/N, Neji and Hinata's match was less brutal, so she didn't get carried off to the hospital)

'Shikamaru always says that Naruto was always hiding something...is THIS what he meant!?' Thought a perplexed yet blushing Yamanaka.

The jounins are just staring wide eyed at the new figure some of the jounins kunoichi are like Kurneai and Anko were trying not to ogle or blush at the young gold blond lad.

The 3rd had his mouth open again and his second tabbaco pipe also landed near his first fallen smoke pipe. His face was in shock, but there was a slight blush visible on his aging cheeks and his thoughts were different, something like...

'Hmmm...I'm quite interested in Naruto's sudden power, but I wish Jiraiya was here, he would make great icha icha paradise volumes from my second grandson...hoho! I wonder what kind of women he would have in bed, hehehe...' (Naruto is like a grandson figure to old man Sarutobi)

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Naruto was unmoving, calm and collected for a split second, then he got down on one knee and had one hand on his bloody stomach and the other hand was on the ground barely supporting his shaking, pained form.

'Damn, that hurt like a bitch!' He thought as sucked breath which was both difficult and painful.

'Yeah painful...' Kyuubi commented.

'Yeah...painful...' Naruto recited in daze.

'Wow, my word, she's like another Tsunade' Yondaime adding his two cents.

Naruto mumbled something, but it was still loud enough for everyone to hear.

"...She's like another Tsunade..."

'Except without the bitchness...'

"Without...without the...the bitchness" He drawled, not noticing the looks he is recieving

The last line made everybody's eyes widened a bit of how he's openly insulting Hitomi and Tsunade.

Hitomi, at the moment, had a irritated tick mark developing on her left temple. Clearly she did not like the "bitch" part.

Due to the "deathblow" caused by Hitomi, Naruto was speaking out of focus. So what the author is saying, Naruto doesn't know what he is openly saying right now.

As for Yondaime and Kyuubi, they were slowly realising this, decided to mess with the boy.

'Shes one...hehe...sexy...ha!..Hot bitch...' Said a snickering Yondaime Hokage.

"Yeah...one sexy...he... hot bitch..."

NOW everyones was gaping, but a dozen of others silently agree with him, she IS a sexy son of a bitch.

And the NEXT line made Hitomi unleash a great amount of killing intent and spit imaginary white hot fireballs.

'I...want...to...suck...," He let the human recite these words. '...On both of her BOOBS!!' Roared Kyuubi, hoping the boy the boy will monotiestly repeat.

And he did.

Soon the gold blond genin turned cherry red in the face...

"HEEEY!! THAT WAS NOT FUNNY YOU TWO!!!!"...and roared at no one.

"Tch...damn right it wasn't funny" said a cold, sharp and somewhat sexy feminine voice.

Naruto froze up and paled his already pale face. He, as well as the others. looked up at the railings

Standing at 5'3, was a pissed off, fire-spitting Hitomi. Her body was encased in a dark, raging inferno. Her hair was flying everywhere and had a I-going-to-kill-you look. (Not really, It's how they picture her in their minds)

"Na-Ru-To..." She growled as she cracked her knuckles.

'OH CRAP!' Thought an alarmed long haired Naruto.

'Get ready for round two Naruto/human!!' Roared both Arashi and Kyuubi.

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A/N sorry if it's short but the next chapter will be longer be the conclusion of who will win.

But don't expect me to update fast, I'm only using my Father's already brokendown computer so yeah!

REVIEW PLEASE!

I'm deciding to write another story so please vote/poll..

(poll A) The second death god

Naruto is the desendant of the Shinigami, (deathgod) and when he was killed Sasuke and Kakashi at the vally of the end, he was given a choice by his ancester. to the afterlife or becoming the second deathgod. trouble rises in konoha as they learn that not only they lose the sharingan because of a dead kyuubi, but also the wrath of a god. KONOHA AND TEAM SEVEN BASHING, NOT BLEACH CROSSOVER!

(poll B) Konoha's flying thunder god.

Naruto is the son of yondaime who was also a descendant of a thunder god, so when he was pushed off the gorge by jiraiya, instead of summoning Gamabunta, he has the ability to transform into a huge 100 feet, tri-horned, roaring lightning spitting flying thunder god (A little before the chunin exams finals!

(poll C) do these fanfics later and continue on "Hiraishin no Naruto" and "pity from the white origami"

(poll D) don't do any of these and continue on "Hiraishin no Naruto" and "pity from the white origami"