Hey, Aneras sent this from camp, It's basically the same as the last chapter, but with a different ending.
I haven't read it yet so I'll read it with you.
Disclaimer: She owns nothing, Since we've all read this before just scroll down to the next time I start talking
P.S. I deleted the talking in the middle.
Cinderella
Alternate Ending
"CINDEREEEEELLA!" shrieked Mitzi from bellow. Sarena was pulled roughly from her dream and fell to the floor with a yelp. Typical day, nothing special, but when she reached for her pendent while April brushed her hair, it wasn't there. "April, my pendent, it's gone!" said Sarena alarmed. "But who would steal it?" asked April "The ones in the kingdom who know its true value are you, me, and Casey." "You don't think aunt Karai found out, about the ball?" asked Sarena. "If she thinks that, she may only be suspicious," said April.
Later Sarena was in the foyer scrubbing the floor tiles and humming the song from last night when someone knocked at the door. It was Casey. "Rena, You'll never guess what Sid just told me," said Casey. "What?" asked Sarena. "Casey looked around briefly to make sure no one was listening in before speaking. "It has been proclaimed that whichever girl fits both the slipper you dropped and your description will become the eldest prince's bride," he said. "The prince? I danced with the prince?" Sarena asked. "Yep, you've been dream dating with royalty," said Casey.
Karai couldn't believe her ears. Not only had Sarenaty been humming the same song the girl at the ball danced with the prince to, but her own friend had confirmed it. Her niece had danced with the prince last night, she had been right. She would not let this happen, her daughter would become the prince's bride, not this, this, servant girl! April would never go for it, she was Sarenaty's best friend, but Mitzi would do it. She hated Sarenaty, and would do anything to break Sarenaty's heart. At that moment, her cell phone vibrated. "Hello?" she asked answering it. "Hello Karai," said the voice on the phone. Karai gasped, it was Splinter.
As Casey left Karai came down the stairs. "Sarenaty, your father just called," she said. "Is he alright?" asked Sarena worried. "Your father is fine, but I'm sorry to say your great grandfather has passed away," said Karai. Sarena was shocked, she knew how bad her great grandfather was, but she thought he would eventually recover. "Your father has requested that you fly at once to the funeral," said Karai. "But all planes have been delayed til this afternoon," said April walking out of the kitchen. She had heard the whole thing and knew her mother was up to no good. "Well then, Sarenaty, continue with your chores, Mitzi will pack your things," said Karai. "She will?" asked April. "I will?" asked Mitzi from the stairs. "I'll explain later, now both of you get to work," said Karai.
As both of them left April confronted her mother. "I know what your up to, and I won't let you get away with this," she said. "I think I will, you see this?" Karai asked dangling something over April's head. It was Sarena's pendent. "Hey, that's Rena's!" April exclaimed. "Wrong, It's Mitzi's now, and unless you want me to destroy Sarenaty's precious worthless piece of junk, you'll play along, even if you don't, no on will believe you," said Karai. "The evidence will be too great, the slipper will fit (Mitzi and Sarena had the same shoe size), Mitzi's hair will be cut to Sarenaty's length, and on top of it all, she'll wear the pendent, Mitzi will become the prince's bride, and there's nothing you, or Sarenaty can do about it," she said going up the stairs. 'Maybe not alone,' April thought.
Sarena had, of course, heard the whole thing, and ran to the garden to cry. If only she could talk to the prince through a day dream. She'd tell him 'That's not me, She's not your true love,' but she knew it was hopeless and returned to her chores.
'That's not me, She's not your true love,' Leo could have sworn he heard the girl from the dance, but the only other ones in the car were his brothers. Don noticed his brother's uneasiness and was about to ask what was wrong, when his phone rang. "Hello?" Don asked answering his phone. "Don, April just called, her sister Mitzi is posing as Sarena, and then her mother Karai is going to send Sarena away,"said Starlee quickly over the phone. "So then what do we do?" asked Don. "We've gotta convince Leo that Mitzi isn't the girl from the ball, and if we can get Sarena's pendent back to her, Sarena can sing that song and confirm it's her," she said. "And what about the slipper?"he whispered so his brothers wouldn't overhear. "Sarena has the other one, it's in her pocket, but if Sarena and April reveal her, Karai will destroy Sarena's pendent,"said Starlee. "Okay, we'll do what we can, later," said Don hanging up. His brothers stared at him, confused. "Something I have to do later," Don explained. "What's our next stop?" he asked. "The Splinterson's house," said Raph looking at the list. Don's eyes widened, that was Sarena's house.
"I don't understand why I have to pretend I'm that dumb servant girl," Mitzi complained. Like Karai had promised, her hair was the same length as Sarena's and she was wearing the pendent. "Because, you want to become the prince's bride, right?" Karai asked. "Yeah," said Mitzi. "Then you'll have to deal with it, and besides, soon you'll never have to deal with Sarenaty again,"said Karai as the doorbell rang.
Sarena was walking around back to finish her chores, when she bumped into someone on their way to the door and fell to the ground. "Sorry," she said. "No it's alright, I wasn't looking where I was going," said a voice as a hand came down to help her up. When she reached for it she saw it was the prince's. Leo stared at her for a second, recognizing her face. "Sarenaty, what are you doing!?" came her aunts voice from the door. "I am so sorry, your highness," she apologized bringing Sarena to her feet. "No, it's alright it's my fault," said Leo. "Sarenaty, go back to your chores," ordered Karai. "Yes aunt Karai," Sarena muttered. As her aunt went to greet Leo's brothers, Sarena hummed the first two lines of the song low enough for only Leo to hear it before running to garden.
"This is my daughter Mitzi, I believe she matches your desription of the girl," said Karai. Don slipped the slipper on to Mitzi's foot, it was a perfect fit. "Well I guess that settles it," said Karai. Leo was still unsure, the servant girl, that Sarenaty, knew the song, and had the same face as the girl from the ball. "I can prove who's the girl from the ball," said April coming down the stairs with Casey.
You were dancing with a very pretty girl,
pretty girl,
then at midnight she ran off in such a whirl,
such a whirl,
Mitzi played with Sarena's pendent, and knew this time her sister was finally on her side, Or so she thought.
Well her name was Sarenaty, she's the servant girl you met,
she the one you want to marry,
Don't forget, Don't forget
Cause at the ball, at the ball, at the ball,
at the ball,
Sarenaty was the maiden at the ball.
"And here's the worst part," said Starlee coming out of the kitchen.
Sarenaty can't even try her best to take a stand,
Take a stand,
Cause mother's having her banished from the land,
She'll put Rena on a plane that gonna send her far away,
So it's up to all of us to save the day,
Save the day,
Cause at the ball, at the ball, at the ball,
what a ball,
Sarenaty, won you heart,
now mother's keeping you apart,
and she'll soon be gone forever, unless you can recall,
That Sarenaty was the maiden at the ball,
At the ball!
"So your saying, this girl's an impostor?" asked Raph confused. "Even if I am so what," Mitzi burst out. "What's so special about that servant girl anyway?" she asked angry.
I know you, I walked with you once upon a dream,
Every one looked at the door, and there was Sarena, singing the song from the dance,
I know you, the gleam in your eyes is so familiar a gleam,
April took the pendent from Mitzi and placed around Sarena's neck.
And I know it's true, that visions are seldom more then they seem,
Leo placed her foot in the slipper as Sarena took out the other one and slipped it on the other foot.
But if I know you, I know what you'll do,
Leo took her hair out of it's ponytail.
You'll love me at once the way you did once,
Starlee used her device to turn Sarena's clothes back into her ball gown.
Upon a, Dream
They kissed
At that moment the door opened, it was Splinter and Sarena great grandfather, The Ancient One, alive and well. As they saw Splinter's only daughter kissing the prince, The Ancient One turned to Splinter and asked "Did we miss something?" scratching his head.
Okay, lets see what Aneras wrote, It looks kind of short.Karai looked at Sarena with disgust, then turned to April "You traitor!" yelled Karai pulling sword from a nearby statue. She charged towards April. It all happened so fast no one saw what happened, but the next thing they knew Sarena was on the ground in front of April, dead. She had taken the blow for her cousin. Leo gathered Sarena in his arms and cryd for his lost love. Everyone else (except Karai and Mitzi who Mikey and Raph had tied to the staircase) started crying too, their little servant girl had gotten her dream come true, and then lost it in one blow.
...SHE KILLED ME?!
Just wait until she gets home, I'm gonna KILL HER!!
?: didn't she say the alternate ending would have an epilogue that took place in another dimension?
calms down Oh ya, Thanks Bro kiss
By the way, if you can guess who my brothers are, you get a cookie. Go ahead, guess, Aneras's little goof up last chapter probably gave you a good enough hint.