OH
MY
GOD!
Flame Rising: Instead of flaming me and telling me that I suck and saying I can't write and telling me about your left tecticle, TELL ME WHAT I COULD IMPROVE! Give examples of my mistakes, and I'll fix them and look out for them in the future. I use spellcheck and I proofread my chapters. If you think that you're better than everyone else, why don't you write your own freakin' fanfic? Screw off. Asshole.
On a lighter note...
Jaredfan: He'd drown you without any physical water nearby. XD
I don't know what's with them. They just don't take the end of the world seriously, I guess. She'll be as powerful as Thalia or Percy or Nico is. Like the Big Three's children all are.
Ariel and I got to be really good friends. Me and Lisa and her would hang out on Half-Blood Hill, talking. On Saturday or Sunday (I can't remember which), we were talking and I heard a growl.
"What's that?" I asked. They shrugged.
"Stay behind the tree!" Lisa said. "I think it's a hellhound!"
I gasped. I could feel the ground shaking. Then I saw a gignormous black hellhound come bounding up the hill. I took out an arrow (I never went anywhere without my bow) and shot it four times. It exploded into a cloud of dust. Behind where it used to stand, I saw a smaller hellhound, who looked like a baby (even though it was the size of a German Shepherd). The hellhound I shot must've been its mother. It wimpered. Percy ran down the hill with his sword (I guess someone called for help,) and prepared to strike.
"No!" I shrieked. He stopped mid-swing.
"What? It's a wild hellhound! It's dangerous!" He yelled.
"What about Mrs. O'Leary?!" Mrs. O'Leary is a giagantic hellhound who lives in the swordplay arena. Percy takes care of it, because Daedalus (inventor, son of Athena, creator of the Labyrinth) asked him to before he died.
"That's different! She's tame!"
"We can tame this one too!"
I looked down at the hellhound, who was afraid of Riptide and cowering behind a bush. He recapped his sword. He sighed. "Fine," he said. "But ask Chiron first."
I squealed and ran to the Big House.
"Chiron! There was a big hellhound outside so I killed it and now it's pup doesn't have a mama so can I keep it please please please pleasepleaseplease?"
Chiron look surprised. "Sam, slow down! I can't understand you!" I took a breath and repeated myself, slower.
"Take me to it," he said. I ran outside where the hellhound was still behind the bush.
"Chiron! I think this thing might not be too wild," Percy said. "It hasn't attacked, even after I recapped my sword."
"Well, I don't know if it would be wise to keep him as a pet, but we'll see. Let's bring him to the swordplay arena. Perhaps it can befriend Mrs. O'Leary."
"Yes! Thank you thank you thankyouthankyouthankyouthankyou!" I ran over to the hellhound and pick him up. It cowered at first, but when it saw I wasn't a threat, it let me. It wasn't very heavy for it's size. I ran into camp (I had to allow the hellhound to enter), then ran down to the swordplay arena. It and Mrs. O'Leary began wrestling. I smiled.
"What the-?"
I jumped. I saw Ariel, with a three foot long celestial bronze sword with a bunch or horses and shells that I've never seen before. She tapped it and it morphed into a bracelet.
"Sam, what's going on with Mrs. O'Leary?" she asked.
"She's playing with a young hound we just found."
"There's two hellhounds there? I can barely tell!"
"What's with the sword?"
"Oh, this?" she tapped the bracelet and it morphed into a sword again. "A gift from Dad."
"And who's that?"
"Poseidon."
"Okay, so let me get this straight."
"Okay."
I was with Ariel, Lisa, and Annabeth on Half-Blood Hill.
"The oath has been broken four times now."
"Yeah."
"One of the half-bloods is immortal and can't be the child of the prophecy."
"Yeah."
"And one of them is two months away from turning sixteen."
"Yeah."
"Uh-oh."
"Percy!" Annabeth ran down the hill to Percy, who was standing there with a duffel bag. She hugged him fiercely.
"Think they've made up?" I whispered to Lisa.
"They visited each other over the winter break."
"Oh. I'm gonna go meet Percy." I ran down the hill.
"Ohmigods! Percy Jackson! I read the book series you wrote for school! They are soo awesome! Sometimes I would wish that I was a half-blood and now I am! This is awesome! Hopefully you'll live long enough to write the fifth book! Haha, but really, people have been dying to read the fifth book. You have to go on a quest so you can write it!"
"Stop! You sound just like Rachel-"
"-Elizabeth Dare, I know! I know her. She's one of my friends. She says hi."
"Um, okay. Annabeth, after I get unpacked, you want to go down to the beach?"
"Sure, Percy!" They walked down to the cabins together.
"So... What do you guys want to do?" I asked them.
Lisa looked at Ariel, who shrugged.
"Let's go to the archery targets. I don't think there's a class right now." And we did.
The next day, I went down to breakfast. As usual, I sat alone at the Zues table. Chiron stood up to make the annnouncements.
"Well, campers, as you know, this Friday is Capture-The-Flag. Currently, Athena holds the laurels.
Cheering from that cabin.
"We have also learned that our own Drake Origen is the God of Time!"
I was shocked. Drake was a god? How? How come he never told me? Well, I guess he didn't know. But this was crazy! He's a god? The god of TIME? How?!
"Yes, I know, it is quite shocking. He will be staying at camp for the next few days, then off to Olympus to speak with the Olympian Counsel of the Gods. "
"I am?" he asked.
"Yes, you are."
"Okay, then, thanks for the heads-up, Chiron."
"Well then! In other news, my archery lessons will be cancelled today. Enjoy your meal!" Crap! No archery!
Hehe, funny ending instead of cliffie. Oh well. R&R for donuts! (Did I spell that right?)
Disclaimer: I don't own Ariel or her sword. Is it Horse Whisperer? Whatever. HorseyGal23 owns them, go read her strories! :D
