Here is the alternative ending. I hope you enjoy it.
For one brief and shining moment, the head of The Lion appears to her, but still she refuses to acknowledge Him. You can never go home. The thought echoes in her head, she knows she has already made her decision. She knows that it is too late. But the seed has been planted. For the short and pivotal ride home a battle is waging in Susan's mind. A battle for her very soul. The darkness has the upper hand, it is what she has clinged to for many years. But the seed that was planted by Aslan's arrival grows, a part of her clings to the spark of hope, begging for Him to come back into her life. But the part that lives in darkness is stronger. For one instant, Susan knows peace, but then it is gone, replaced by familiar anger and despair. Then Susan Pevensie made a decision. Aslan. Was the last thought that she ever had upon this earth. The squealing tires and honking horns are lost in its echo. Susan never made it back to her flat in London, but that did not matter because she had finally made it home.
You are done
You can now go home
It was a dark and rainy day that Susan Pevensie forever became one with the earth. Many people attended, coworkers, "friends", anyone who considered themselves important enough. But the people who were important to Susan chose not to attend. Instead they gathered around her and embraced her. For so long three, now four again. And Susan felt something she had not felt in far too long. Whole. Complete. Perfect. Home. Forever the cries of "Long live Queen Susan!" would echo in New Narnia, forever would her quiet laughter be heard, forever would the four be whole again.
You are home,
You will never go back
Please read and review! Also, the lyrics are no longer from the same song. Actually they are not from any song. Anyway...
Thanks, Jacquelyn