Angel: I want to thank yourmaster, jewel ofthedawn, and saismaat, for their reviews. Now onward to the great abyss of fan fiction.
"Well bake my biscuits we crossed our tracks" I said looking up to see them arguing rolling my eyes I stood walking over.
"Listen!" Riddick yelled standing.
"Canyon up ahead I circled once to buy some time to think" he said I stood next to jack, while scanning the area.
"I think we should go now" imam said to Riddick.
"Oh I don't know about that that's death row up there especially with the girl bleeding" Riddick said everyone looked confused; I wrapped my arm around jacks shoulder holding her close.
"What she's not cut" johns said referring to fry I rolled my eyes.
"What am I chopped liver" I said icily at johns.
"Not her…her" Riddick said referring to jack, everybody looked shocked fry turned toward us jack started tearing up.
"I... thought it would be better if people thought I was a guy… I thought they might leave me alone instead of always messing with me… im sorry" she said looking down I tightened my grip rubbing her arm.
"Geese jack why did you" fry said angrily I tightened my grip more, jack slid to the ground I stayed standing knowing fry was coming over, fry leant down.
"Are you really bleeding?" she asked jack.
"You could have left me at the ship that's why I didn't say anything sooner" she said sniffling, I looked to Riddick.
"They've been nose-open for her ever since we left" he said, I walked over.
"In case you haven't noticed they get off blood" he said quietly.
"This is not going to work we have to go back" fry said standing, johns turned to her.
"And now time for animal nature to take over" I whispered to Riddick.
"What did you say?" johns asked.
"You're the one who got us out her… and made us into sled dogs" he said getting angry.
"It was wrong I admit it...Can we just get back to the ship" she said quietly.
"Nice breeze wide open space im starting to enjoy myself out here" johns said I turned to him watching the scene unfold.
"Are you high again? Just listen to yourself" fry said angrily, I moved to stand next to imam.
"I bet you she could totally kick his butt" I said nodding my head imam just looked at me oddly I slowly walked away to stand in a secluded spot just within the light.
"No your right what's to be afraid of? My life's just a steaming pile of meaningless mur-her anyhow…so I say we mush on, the canyons only ten meters and after that its skiff city" he said his eyes blazed, as jack sniffled.
"Why don't you butch up... Stuff a cork in the kid and let's go" he said pointing at jack oh he didn't I thought shaking my head.
"She's the captain…listen to her" imam said stepping in.
"Listen to her... When she was willing to sacrifice us" johns said.
"What?" jack asked scared.
"This does not help us" fry said flustered I could smell the fear radiating off her.
"The crash. She tried to blow the passenger cabin, kill us in our sleep." Johns said on the verge of yelling.
"Shut your mouth!" fry yelled back.
"Were just walking ghosts to you!" john yelled back.
"Shut you mur-hering blow hole" fry yelled charging at johns, he grabbed her arm and threw her to the ground, o stood as johns lit the torch I walked over standing in front of him he scowled at me smiling I waved then I brought my hand back and slapped him hard on the face, amazingly knocking him down I turned I felt someone grab my neck.
"Never do that again or you'll be begging" johns whispered threateningly into my ear he threw me forward I rubbed my neck then stood walking away I helped fry up.
"Come on" I said she didn't talk as we began to fallow them from behind.
" im gonna go up check on our friends" I said walking I handed a snap light to jack and continued forward, coming up behind them johns swung around pointing his gun at me.
"I come in peace I from earth I mean you no harm" I said sounding out the words Riddick chuckled, as johns rolled his eyes and put his gun down. We continued walking.
"battle-field doctors decide who lives and dies it's called triage" johns said.
"Kept calling it murder when I did it" Riddick replied.
"Either way I figure it's something you two could grab onto" he said peeking at me.
"Sacrifice play hack up a body leave it at the start of the canyon… like a bucket of bait" Riddick said, their way to easy-going with this conversation I thought cringing.
"We drag the body forty fifty feet behind us" johns said ducking under the bone ribs.
"Nice embellishment" Riddick replied.
"Why don't we just add papyri and a big neon sign saying were over here" I said sarcastically.
"She's got a point we don't want to feed them but keep them off our scent." Riddick said to johns who scowled.
"So which one caught your eye?" Riddick asked johns looked slightly at me, I stared back.
"Don't even think about buddy" I said quietly to him.
"Don't look" johns said to Riddick who had turned.
"Alright enough of this" johns said looking at me. "You do the girl and I'll keep the others off your back." he said oh no he didn't and yes he did I thought looking over at Riddick.
"Not gonna be too big of a job for you is it?" johns asked Riddick.
"Im just wondering if we don't need a bigger piece of bait" Riddick replied putting himself between me and john's aww he cares I thought (angel: total chibi moment big eyes).
"Like whom?" johns asked stupidly, I took slow steps back away from them I hid in a cleft above them my lights glowing on my back, I watched them fight down below rids had taken off his light belt.
"One rule" he said circling "stay in the light" he finished they lunged at each-other I could barely see what was going on with their fast movement.
"Remember that moment" he said quietly flipping johns. Johns jumped up Riddick sliced his back I could hear the hissing and clicking get louder.
"You should've never taken the chains off" Riddick said standing he walked over to johns.
"You were one braver mu-her before real bad mur-her, the chains… the gauge…the badge... I told you to ghost me." Riddick said I could see him pulling down my goggles I clicked off half my lights, I watched as johns head was bit off I laughed falling from my hiding place.
"I must be losing it or that was the coolest fight I've ever seen" I said looking over at Riddick who raised an eyebrow, I stood walking over to him.
"better go find our friends" I said skipping away he began to run, dang he's fast I thought trying to keep up he had stopped I ran into his back falling down, I looked up to see he was still standing, fry ran into Riddick and jumped back screaming.
"Going back to the ship huh? Just huddle together till the lights burn out? Till you can't see what eating you. That the big plan?" he asked I stood next to him remaining silent I scanned around .
"Where's johns?" imam asked.
"Which half?" Riddick asked.
"Were gonna lose everybody out here...Should have stayed at the ship" jack said I looked at her my eyes shining.
"He died fast...And if we have anything to say about it that's the way we should all go" Riddick said.
"Comforting really I feel fuzzy inside" I said sarcastically, jack had tears running down her face I was about to walk over to her but Riddick beat me.
"Don't you cry for johns don't you dare" he said walking by, I smacked my forehead, walking behind Riddick he came up to a skeleton of one of the creatures.
"Blind from the front, like a horse" I said quietly standing near him.
"Should I pray with you" imam said startling us.
"It's painless" imam said.
"It's pointless" Riddick replied tying something off.
"Because you do not believe in God does not mean God does not believe in…" imam said Riddick cut him off.
"Think someone can spend half their life in the slam…with a horse bit in their mouth and not believe? Think he could start out in some trash bin... With an umbilical cord wrapped around his neck and not believe? You got it all wrong holy man I absolutely believe in God and I hate him." Riddick said I felt something wet slide down my cheek wiping it away im crying I thought wiping my eyes.
"He is with us none the less" imam said.
"Two of your boys are dead how much faith do you have left father?" Riddick asked imam stood walking away Riddick looked at me.
"How about you?" he asked.
"I believe what I believe I don't except you to understand Riddick and I aint going to preach" I said walking behind imam, we stood together now in a small circle, pulling up my goggles I stood next to jack.
"Only see one way. That way, it's the only way off this rock" Riddick said pointing to the dark path ahead. (Angel: that sounds extremely scary)
"Just keep the girl between you" he said turning around to us.
"What about the cells?" imam asked as Riddick walked by.
"I'll take those" Riddick said, grabbing the cells.
"Move" he said evenly.
"Are you sure you can keep up?" fry asked concerned.
"Move!" he yelled we began to run I stayed behind Riddick watching his back as we ran, hatchlings flew over head I ducked keeping out of the way, looking back I saw that the hatchlings were gone, turning around something wet landed on my head feeling it I brought my hand down, ew ew ew gross I thought shaking and dancing around looking up they were a few paces ahead of me, I ran up watching my back.
"Do not look up!" He yelled fry looked up, running Riddick pushed her out of the way before one could land on her.
"Danger danger will Robinson!" I screamed jack and imam looked up I growled in annoyance.
"Next person to look up is going to talk to me" I yelled grabbing part of the rope and helping Riddick pull, we came up on some skeletons I groaned.
"Move keep moving!" Riddick yelled, we crawled through first, hearing a scream I turned to see ali's leg being grabbed by one of the creatures, we didn't stop as we made it to a small hill.
"Riddick, angel!" I heard jack call turning I ran to her I stopped turning to Riddick I turned back to jack stupid kiso protect Riddick or jack uggh I thought.
"Riddick!" I yelled he didn't turn fine you stink face I thought as I ran over to jack grabbing her and diving under the bone.
"Help!" jack screamed, I held her closer.
"Riddick!" I screamed officially scared, fry tried to scare it off waving a flashlight and fire in front of it, the creature flew off I looked over to see Riddick slashing at the creature it fell down dead I rolled out, standing I looked at Riddick.
"didn't know who he was messin with" he said pulling up his goggles, I rolled my eyes running up the hill I grabbed the rope Riddick came up doing the same I felt something wet I looked up.
"Rain" I said quietly, I heard Riddick laughing.
"so where the mur-her is your god know" he asked imam, we stood for a moment , hearing a scream I turned to see ali being dragged off, me and Riddick began to look around I stood quietly as they slipped in, looking around I saw we were basically surrounded.
Angel; ok this is being cut into to two chapters to lengthen it ok ok.