Author's Note: So a person named James Firebrand wrote a review on the last chapter and they had ALOT of good info and things that might not make sense just yet. The following are clips of their comment and in this chapter I'll try to address them all :
"Neku pretty much capitalized and for another thing, if Joshua wanted to bring Gracie, Neku and the rest of the gang, back into th UG, he wouldn't have needed to kill them or force them to play the game. All he would need to do is simply elevate their vibe, easy enough for the God of Shibuya.
Also, even as powerful as Sho is, I repeat: Joshua is the Composer. Even with those new Noise, Joshua could pretty much just obliterate them AND Minamimoto with a wave of his hand.
And in closing, you're writing of Hanekoma seemed,OOC, if nothing else. He seemed more than a little overly angry and cold. In the game, Hanekoma was always very laid back and rarely, if ever lost his cool.
I'm looking forward to what else you have planned!d the whole 'music obsessed' thing in the game. Having your character be overly interested in music after Neku, just seems kinda redundant...
Also, Joshua's hair and eyes are Ash and Violet, respectively."
So here we go: Neku seems perfect but just for now. It's Joshua, he likes killing people :) can you blame him? The way the Chaos Noise are is a big part about why Joshua can't just obliterate them. Hanekome does seem OOC but I'll try to explain it in the chapter. The redundincey with Neku and Gracie is ment to be that way, it's gonna work out soon. And Joshua's eyes and hair: I simply did not know and I'm going to edit it :)
Thank you for all of the reviews and this chapter will be shorter but explain more.
Secret Report 1
Chaos Noise. A type of Noise that can destroy the UG and the RG...
Even the Composer is afraid of the power they posses. And that, in itself, is a scary thought.
When I asked him what they were he put it simply: Taboo Noise plus blood from their creator plus a new material called Shadow Matter. These things made the Chaos Noise. The blood from the creator of the Noise makes them only listen to them. But the blood also means that if you kill the creator, you kill all the Noise.
The Composer says that a person with a strong enough will and heart can possibly destroy them. He decided to bring them back: Neku, Shiki, Beat and Rhyme. He knows if anyone can beat the Noise, it would be one of them. But he added another Player at my request.
Her name is Gracie. The Composer also has the feeling that she'll be the one to get rid of the Chaos Noise, but I know for a fact that if anyone can, it's Gracie.
We've only had two encounters with these Chaos Noise. They are vicious noise that can look like humans. This is one of our problems with destroying them. Only the Composer can tell which humans are actually Chaos Noise. Their attacks are powerful and the second time we encountered them, they killed a Reaper with one hit. The Composer predicts if he was hit at least twelve time, he too will be Erased. Gracie must be the key to keep Shibuya alive and to keep you alive, Composer.
As for her entry fee... Jane took her memories of someone precious to her, her older brother. Sho broke the sphere containing her memories yesterday. Slowly, but surely she will remember. This might jeopardize the entire plan.
I have been too uptight lately. All of these things are happening at once.. I'm thinking of closing Wildkat till things settle down. At any given time I can die... the stress is really getting to me. The Composer is bring Gracie to Wildkat to explain everything to her.
There is something that factors into all of this that I have yet to mention. Only Jane and I know this fact. Gracie's brother, he's Sho Minamimoto. This is why she might be able to defeat the Chaos Noise. His blood is her blood... Just as only Gracie can keep the Composer alive, he is the only one who can keep her alive. They need each other to survive. And if they don't realize this, both will be Erased for good. Gracie has untapped powers, but still has to learn how to control and contain them.
The fact still remains that Sho doesn't even know Gracie is alive. When he was little, Gracie got hit by a car. Sho was told that his sister was dead and ran away from home. The truth of the matter was that Gracie escaped with only a few broken bones. But when the Composer and Gracie find out about this.. I wonder what she'll do. Save Shibuya or be with her brother...
-Mr. H
