Hey if there is any rude/helpful critics for my story, then plz leave them the would really help me.
I want to make Ichigo a new technique, but I have no idea what it should be... need advice?

[World of the Living]

The attack was destroyed by Ulquiorra who slapped it out of the way. Ichigo, surprised to see that Urahara just tried to kill him he retaliates and uses Getsu Gatenshou. Ulquiorra simply destroys that attack too in order to avoid a pointless battle. "What are you doing, Ulquiorra? Don't make me tell Aizen that you just helped a soul reape..."

"You know nothing Ichigo. I do not take orders from you. You take orders from me, I'm your superior, did you forget that?" interrupts Ulquiorra as he shuts the door between the two worlds. [Hueco Mundo] In an instant Ichigo senses his spiritual powers increase drastically due to the high amounts of hollow energy. "You're back. Well how did it go?" asks Sosuke Aizen as Ichigo and Ulquiorra walk towards his throne.

After Aizen is briefed on the situation in the World of the Living he sends Ichigo to train in another part of Hueco Mundo. Dark, somewhat more evil than the part of Hueco Mundo he is use to. He starts is training with a quick yet extremely complex exercise: three-hundred dips, five-hundred push-ups, and four-thousand crunches. Blood and sweat running down his face and arms, he gets up after finishing his exercise, he collapses to the ground.

[Zangetsu'sWorld]

Unconscious, he wakes up in the familiar city where he first met Zangetsu, but can't seem to find him. "Well, well, it's been a while "KING" I thought you'd never come to say thank you," informs ikasoruK ogihcI "So, what do you want?"

"I want you to give me complete control over your powers," asks Ichigo"What do you say about that "HORSE"?" their bodies the same, but their fighting instincts are clearly different as Ichigo and his inner hollow decide to fight over Ichigo's body. Their bankai's the same, yet different, ones black while the other is white... Ichigo's inner hollow seems to have more control over the power of his bankai "When did you master bankai?" questions Ichigo as he senses that his inner hollow might just be stronger than him, "Getsu Gatenshou (black)," Ichigo screams in frustration.

With a face of utter disappointment ikasoruK ogihcI says "That attack is only good if you have the intentions of ripping your opponent to shreds. You learned that attack by watching me use it; you disgust me. I'll never give my powers to someone who is weaker than "I", I refuse to help you unless you can kill me in this battle."

With Ichigo's bankai crushed by his inner hollow he starts to device a plan on how to beat him. "Ichigo, Ichigo, Ichigo. If you want to kill me than you have to have a killer instinct. Since you don't have one, you can't kill me; it looks like I will be the one to get this body, Ichigo." He spins his zanpaku-tô over his head, he releases it from his grasp, impaling it into Ichigo's chest. Blood coming out as if it were a gentle stream of water, he then takes the white Tensa Zangetsu and flash steps in front of his inner hollow. He points the zanpaku-tô at his neck, but he grabbed it. "Well, you do have a killer instinct after all," states ikasoruK ogihcI...