Mika and Sukira just walked onstage, too lazy today to do anything special. "Hey y'all!" both shouted.
Mika started off. "First off we have 2 new contestants. Alices-little-sister and Unbelievably Dazzled. Jocie-chan (Alices-little-sister) already has her story up along with Chiharu-chan, sakuuya-san, and Toma-san. So lets get on with mine and Sukira's thoughts (Suki= bold)."
He and Her IN LOVE
Decent start, I really liked it. The problem is alot of grammer mistakes which made it abit confusing. Please fix that.
Great story girl but I have to agree with Mika. You don't want readers getting confused now do you?
Invictus
I really liked this one. Nasu really doesn't have usual OC personality (hyper, crazy perfect, etc) which made me like her from the start. And who can't love Ume's personality? Great start.
Really great story but girl was that your prolouge? Not having a prolouge can make you lose MAJOR points. Other than that, really good. Keep it up.
The Bucket List
(singsong voice) Loved it! Really awesome beginning. And Ichiru's personality is perfect to Kish minus the pervertedness which I loved. We got some real competition happening.
Same as sakuuya, was this suppose to be your prolouge? But other than that, loved it! If Nanako doesn't want Ichiru can I have him? (this earned Sukira a giant wack upside the head)
The Long, Long Past
Liked the emphasize on the title, it made me giggle. Awesome start even though its abit sad. Nice how you gave Kish an american name! No one's done that so far. Some competeters (I know thats spelled wrong, I'm just lazy right now) better watch out!
Awesome dude! Keep up the good work. Me can't see any mistakes in this one.