(kay guys I wanna give a shout out TA my first reviewer!!! Ellebella89 thank you so much=} you lifted my spirts and ive been down all day. My best friend called me to tell me that our cat died=,{ R.I.P Fang/Fangs. Yes our cat was named after Fang^.^ I named him and your review made me really happy and ive been inspired to write) -insert evil smiley face here=D-)

Luv, MaCiE

Mpov.

Wow , im sitting here watching Fangs friend gazzy. He was sitting there trying to catch a fly in his MOUTH!. "uh gazzy?" he looked at me, "ye..AH!" the fly went down his throt. I snickered and said "never mind haha".

I heard a big thump and saw iggy running into the wall. Wow these guys a crazy…..im gunna get along with them=D. "uh okay I think you two need to switch me places in this bed cause uh…well I think your damaged" they looked at me and grinned. "AHH MY EYES THEY BURN!!" I screamed as their pearly whites sparkled in the sun. "so max…." iggy begane, Gazzy finished "….do you like fang?" my face went pale and before I could answer (THANK GAWD!) fang walked in carry the most innocent thing!!. "HI MAX" the little girl ran right into me, I looked at fang and smiled. He smiled back and whispered "hey". "im Angel, Fangs little sister im 8! Omg I cant wait for you to meet total!" The blonde girl named angel beamed as she said it.

Apov.

{Fang is so…..wow}

I smiled aw I love max! I thought she was going to be really mean but no! I wonder what she'll do when she meets total! I hope that he don't bite her. cause then he would be grounded.

{Angel seems so sweet, I hope she likes me…} there was a sudden sadness with her thought.

Aw max doesn't think I will like her well ill prove her wrong, she'll be living with fang…

Haha better buy him some condoms!!.

(HEY FANG!)

-SHIT ANGEL YOU SCARED ME!-

(im going to buy you some condoms!)

-!!! How do you know what those are!!!-

(uh hello I can read minds! My brother is 17 and is thinking about maxs lips…AGAIN!)

I looked at fang and saw him blush.

-…STAY OUT OF MY MIND!!!!-

(okay but then im going to tell max that you love her and you had a dream about her last night…which again brings me back to the condoms!!)

Fang growled and everyone looked at him. I giggled softly.

(I win!!!)

-for now little girl-

. . . .

I watched max as she started to fall asleep.

Fang had walked iggy and gazzy down to the parking lot and left me alone with max. I grinned!.

I wonder what max is dreaming of.

{"HELP!!!" she ran with all her might, but not running fast enough. "Fang!" she jumped into the air and her wings snapped out…bloody and torn. She tried to fly to the burning woods where fang was on fire with three babys with wings. They all caught fire and max started to cry}

I screamed waking max up and saw she had tears swelling up, she wiped them away and looked at me. "sweet heart whats wrong!?" she asked concerned filled the room. Fang walked in and I said "nothing I just thought I saw a…spider".

She looked at me and she looked at fang.

Mpov.

{"HELP!!!" i ran with all my might, but not running fast enough. "Fang!" i jumped into the air and my wings snapped out…bloody and torn. I tried to fly to the burning woods where fang was on fire with three babys with wings. They all caught fire and I started to cry}

Someones scream woke me up with a start, I relized I was starting to cry I wiped the tear away and looked over at angel. "sweet heart whats wrong!?" I asked concerned, fang walked in and she replied "nothing I just thought I saw a…spider".

I looked at angel and fang and smiled. "I CANT WAIT TO GET OUT OF HERE!" I suddenly yelled out. Scaring the crap outa fang. I snickered as Angel giggled, I notice fang was blushing. "ill get you back for that Max!" he said in a deep, sexy voice. I smiled, "oh really is that a threat or a promise?" I wiggled my eye brows and angel coughed "condoms…".

I looked at her and fang mumbled "don't ask" so I didn't…but something tell me I should have…

Wow now im scared that the sexy fang might bite=D…wow did I just think that,

Angel was giggling but I don't know what at, I looked over at fang as she ran over there and whispered what was so funny, he snickered and came over to me.

Fpov.

I couldn't hold it back anymore. I walked over to where max was and I sat down. Trying not to think I told angel to leave the room and ill be out in a minute.

(WHAT NO!!!! YOU CANT LET ME MISS IT!!)

-im not going to do anything I just want to talk to her-

(SURE!!!)

She stomped out of the room leaving me and max alone for the first time in hours.

"hey" she whispered I looked up into her eyes and something came over me.

I took my hand and put on her neck pulling her close and kissing her long and hard.

I heard her gasp and felt her put her hand on my chest pushing me backwards, she kissed me back with just as much need and passion as I had.

Angel came running in. "HAHA I KNEW IT!!!"

Great

(okay how am I doing for my first story?)

Angel. I think your doing okay

Me. Thanks!!

Max. I think maybe angel should have came in the room….

Angel. Then you wouldn't be a virgin…well uh for (clamps hand over Angels mouth)

Me. Don't give anything away!!