Hey all who are following my story.
Sorry not been much updates, but my beta reader, a friend of mine who is in her 3rd year of doing creative writing at university is very busy with assignments and getting a life, so please be patient for chapters to come.
They will come though, in the past week I sent her 3 chapters for her to review, which she will send to me hopefully in the next few days.
Also I am writing like crazy, in the past week I have written chapters 3-6 and just starting chapter 7 and have also written a chapter where Alice has a premonition, but not sure where that fits in yet.
For those of you asking, this is going to be a longish story and is not going to end by chapter 10 or anything like that, hell, Bella has only just woken up from turning into a vampire by chapter 7!
For me stories that start and then end like half an hour after reading are not worth the read. A good story is one where it builds the character out and gives you tension so that at any moment, something unexpected could happen that will surprise you.
Thanks for taking the time to read this.
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