heres my 3rd chapter please leave reveiews

So when I looked at him and said I guess u want to try and beat me up too he nodded his head no and he told me that he sent that greeser after me to test me I said I thought you went off the radar and people dont see you anymore he said he did but only because the cliques wanted him and he wanted to get away from it all I said cool and Jimmy said he heard that I was starting a new clique I nodded yes and he said he would like to join i said awesome. Raul: it was a hard day in practice the coach basicly killed us and i just got over being intitiated into the jocks and I got my lettermen jacket to show it and all around campus I heard Carl was starting a new gang and when I went back to the dorms 3 preppies tried to fight me and i hit one of them in the face with a right hook but the other grabbed me and held me there and I elbowed him in the gut but when I turned around one punched me in the face then i got angry and I tackled him and puched him repeatedly in the face then Carl came and pulled me off . Carl: woah raul what the hell get off of him I got raul off but i brought him into our room and let him cool off and I went to jimmy and asked him why they would go after raul and Jimmy said it might have been a tactic to throw me off creating the gang and he said to go to the glassjaw gym and smash it up to show them what the warriors are all about. Raul: I was cooling off after i almost killed a prep but I looked out the window and saw Carl riding with Jimmy who he told me about and i ran out before he left and asked him what he was doing and Carl said he was going to smash up the preps gym I asked him if I could go with him he said ok so I grabbed my bike and followed him. Carl: I had Constintinos scope out the gym as our scout and he came back and he said there was five of them so i told him to stay back while we are there (five minutes later) after going across the bridge we were outside the gym and i punched the first prep I saw and i asked Raul was he ready he grabbed his bat and said always.

I kicked in the door and yelled whos the coward who sent three of his men after my brother then on the second floor a muscular blonde haired boy said he did and he introduced himself as Darby Harrington I said Darby your about to lose this gym to the warriors and he said to second rate trash i think not and he snapped his fingers and 5 of his men came and he said put this trash in the garbage. Then they ran down stairs i got ready the first one ran up to me and i put him in a choke hold and punched his kidney threw him near the punching bag Jimmy threw 3 punches and kicked one of them into the boxing ring i thought to myself I should test Raul then I yelled hey Raul if you can take the rest of them out I will give you ten dollars. Raul: its a bet I yelled back and one of them ran up and i hit him in the ribs with the baseball bat and one tried to yank it from my hands and I kicked him in the chest for the last one he was scaired so I put him in a head lock and spit in my hand and rubbed hit in his face and he ran away and I said you better run bitch. Carl:I said no more men Derby this is what you get when you mess with a Batchelder i ran upstairs along with Raul and Jimmy and i told them to wait on the steps i get to fight this one and they said ok no where to run Derby now lets settle this Darby said fine I guess i have to take care of this trash myself he went into a boxing stance oh crap i said but i can still beat you we exchanged blows i hit him in the stomach but his blow missed but his knee didn't I said I thought you were a boxer now its on. When he tried to punch I grabbed his arm and held it and i punched him in the face and thrown him away and when he was on the ground i stomped on him he screamed i give, you better Darby if you give my twin anymore trouble i will do more than this i said when i came back i told my brother that he was part of the warriors now and soon the school will know of what we did. ( aross town at happy volts insane asylum) at last im back and i will get you soon Jimmy.

thats the chapter the warriors have defeated the preps

Auther note me and raul dont look anything alike thats why there is no confusion