this is my 4th chapter so here it is
Wednsday
After me my brother and Jimmy took out the preps word was going around that our gang was hardcore and people wanted in so after we talked for a little bit me and Raul started to look for new recruits we went to the greasers hangout and and we started a rumble so one of them came at me thinking he would take me out and i ran up and closelined him. When he was knocked out I said who else wants to fight me then two of them ran at me and i grabbed a pipe and i clocked both of them over the head and kicked them away and i turned to see what Raul was doing and he was in trouble. Raul: i guess Carl wasent looking because a huge greaser came up and tryed to put me in a full nelson grapple and i kicked him and upper cut him straight in the jaw and he fell down and just when we thought it was over Johnny Vincent came out. Carl: Raul yelled to me look out and i saw Johnny swing a chain and lock at me and i put my pipe in front of my face and it wraped around and then i hit him in the side of the face and when he was on the ground i asked him if he would want to join our gang and he said yes and said this clique was getting boring any way. Later at school: when i was at the first class was shop and me and raul made a new bike and that let us pass the class for the day the next class was biology and we had to dicect a piglet i almost threw up but I passed and so did Raul. At lunch raul and I finaly ate some of the food here and some of the other cliques were looking at us but it dident matter our gang was gaining a reputation and with one clique leader in our gang we were going to run this school. It was finaly the last class was photography and me and raul split up to get good pictures and when we got back to class we both passed and we got back to the dorms and we got on our street clothes and we went on our bikes to find more recruits.
Raul: when i got to town I went to the store to go get some soda and one of the jocks came over and said hey let me join your gang and i said no when I said that he got mad and tackeled me and I punched him in the face and and in the gut when he was hobbled over i kicked him in the face and before i left the store i said you have to prove yourself to be in the warriors. Carl: I went to the townies part of town and to look for recruits because if i had the streets to my advantage it would help me later on but as soon as i got there 2 of them jumped me and knocked me out 2 hours later when i woke up i was in what looked like the old chemical factory and i came face to face with jimmys old nemisis Gary.
i love cliffhanger endings dont u sorry just seemed like a good ending point more chapters comming soon