Mr. Freeza
Chapter One: Planet Cold Destroyed! Saiyans Show Ruthless Ferocity!
"Haa… Death Beam!" A young metsu-jin called out, with a stern look on his face.
"Hmph! Freeza, you have to do better than that!" Coola, now a young warrior, called out to his younger brother, with a smug expression on his face.
"Shut your mouth Coola!" Freeza charged at his brother, desperately trying to land a hit on his brother's smirking face, and plow him into the icy training grounds.
"Alright Freeza, you can hit me once, and one hit only. Strike me anywhere you want."
Good… now I have an idea. Suddenly, Freeza grinned, and fired a single Death Beam, he was just about to split it and…
"Too slow!" Coola zanzoukened out of the way, and behind Freeza.
Then he used his newly developed move…
"Sauzer Blade!"*
"ARGH!!!" Freeza was slashed in the back, leaving a trail of blood all over the frosty ground.
"There's a lesson you need to learn Freeza, and that's to never believe your enemy. Come now, I'll bring you to the training grounds." With that Coola picked up his brother, who was actually still conscious, unbeknownst to Coola.
"Brother, there's a lesson YOU need to learn," a barely conscious Freeza rasped out.
"WHAT?" A shocked Coola dropped Freeza into a patch of snow.
"Heh… never assume your opponent is incapacitated or dead until you know for sure."
Out of nowhere, Freeza's death beam came back from the distance and split into ten separate beams, burning and blistering Coola's back as he shrieked in pain. He then immediately dropped unconscious from the sneak attack.
"Well I think this match ends in a draw you old blowhard, the closest I've come to winning so far. I hope father will sense our battle-powers dropping with his scouter, we might die if we're left alone too long." Freeza used up the last of his power to utter those two sentences, and laid his head on the snow, unmoving.
Meanwhile:
King Vegeta was flying over Planet Cold, in search of the king himself; for he had a mission that only his (Cold's) top elites could go on. Although he had motives he only wanted the king to know… right before he died. At the moment, he saw two Metsu-jin fighting, so he stopped to watch their fight at a distance. The heir to the throne Coola, and a young one, why would royalty fight with even a potential elite unless… Cold had another son he did not know about? Vegeta was in a stupor, and yet he absentmindedly heard the name "Freeza", so that was the boy's name! Too bad he would have to go down with the planet while Coola was taken by the king, what's this? The match has ended in a draw, maybe he'd have to take the both of them… in any case, he decided, destroying Cold came first.
At the Royal Palace:
"Sire! Prince Freeza and Coola's battle-powers have suddenly dropped, King Vegeta was also scouted to be near their location" A palace grunt said, reading the security drone's report.
I knew it would come to this one day. Cold grimly thought, then he issued an order. "Stay here and guard the palace, gather the elites while you're at it. I'll bring my sons to the hidden bunker, where they can be healed and then I can confront Vegeta. Hmm… on second thought, Frost, my second in command, you can guard my sons, for you are the only one besides me that needs a third regression* to control your power."
The aforementioned Metsu-jin saluted, and without a word, blasted off to the secret bunker.
Time had passed, King Vegeta had arrived, demanding an audience with Cold, when he was denied as Cold was not present, after blasting a few low level Metsu-jin out of existence, he decided to wait. Finally, after what seemed an eternity, Cold had arrived.
"Hmph, Cold, do you know why I'm here?" The king of Saiya-jins sneered.
"Yes, I do, you want to kill me, don't you?" The king of Metsu-jins answered, a snarl creeping up his own face.
"Oh yes I do. Your race is much weaker than our own, and you all are so incompetent, even my child, the Prince, could decimate your kind! I have no use for you, and that, is what shall bring upon your end. I've also seen your second son, Freeza, is it? I might plan on taking him and Coola, and training them to be killer machines!" The vile king maniacally laughed at Cold's horrified expression.
"You won't do anything to my sons!" Cold tried to shout, but it came out as a feeble squeak.
"Famous last words, now DIE!" Vegeta roared, then punched Cold in the stomach, puncturing it, let him fall, stomped his neck, and obliterated him with a violet ki wave.
"Hmph. What a fool, let me show a larger fraction of my power now! HYAAAA!" With a deafening yell, Vegeta let out his power so violently, it destroyed any structures within 100 miles, leaving flat ground as far as the eye can see.
What Vegeta did not know is that the Sauzer Armored Squad and the Ginyu Corps. were at the bunker as well, seeing as Frost contacted them to protect Coola and Freeza. Frost knew the planet would inevitably be destroyed, so he contacted them to bring space pods as well, for now, he was waiting for the two teams to show up, so he could stall Vegeta. Knowing his ruthlessness, he probably killed Cold before he could transform, but he wouldn't do so to Frost. Frost was now a small yet formidable Metsu-jin (similar to Freeza's final form, only with dark green skin, and where the purple parts are, they're black instead). His scouter then picked up the two teams arriving, so he sped off to King Vegeta's location, which was a town filled with innocents.
Freeza and Coola had awakened, by now, the fight was long over, with Vegeta systematically killing off the Metsu-jin, unfortunately, King Vegeta was almost at the bunker.
"Master Freeza, Coola! You're awake! Now we've got to get going…" The words died on Ginyu's lips, as he noticed Vegeta floating overhead.
"Where are you going, tell me Ginyu." Vegeta gave an evil smile, and charged towards them.
A/N: Phew! I finished this chapter! A few things I need to address, one is that Celipa from the previous chapter is Fasha, but Celipa fits the vegetable name pun as Celery. Next is that Bardock's unnamed "pale lookalike" is Turles, or as I'll be calling him, Tullece, as that fits with lettuce. Also, Sauzer was the one who used Sauzer Blade, not Coola, but I'll let him have the attack, let's say Sauzer taught him. Finally, I mentioned something about Cold having "regressions", in the original series, Freeza notes that his forms are all like masks. He needs them to control his power, so that's saying he's so powerful, he needs to regress his power in a weaker form three times. Same with Cold and Frigid in this story, also, Coola's 4th form is his true form, 5th is like the Super Saiya-jin of the Metsu-jin (if he obtains it). What about Freeza and Coola now if they have no regressions? Then they look like they're final forms in the show, only shorter and less powerful. I don't think I'm going to set up a battle-power system, I might. One last thing, I don't know what to do the next chapter. Should I split up Coola and Freeza, have one be kidnapped by Vegeta, the other to Earth? One on Earth, one on Yadrat? Have them both be kidnapped? Have them both go to Earth or Yadrat, etc. etc. So I'm looking for reader input… and that's about it! See ya' next time!