Thanks to all you AWESOME reviewer people!! So, in the first chapter, I asked if you guys wanted me to write this is 1st person, or 3rd, so I tried 1st person, to see which one I like. Please tell me! I like 1st person a lot for this story.......maybe i'll do both???
THANKS!!
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Puck's POV
The old woman opened the door to reveal a family of four. Two adults, and two girls, around my age—wait, cut that, around my PHYSICAL age.
They were both thin, with long brown hair. One was a few inches shorter than the other. Her hair was darker, and so were her eyes, and other features. She wore blue jeans, tucked into brown leather boots, with a tan coat and a pink furry scarf. The other girl wore blue jeans too, but they were black, and she was wearing a black coat, and brown converse high tops. She looked older than the other girl.
The old woman was talking to the adults, and the man was saying something about the car dying, and if this was an inn, and what were the prices for a room?
Sabrina nudged me.
"How old do you think they are?" she whispered.
"I don't know." I said.
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Ellie's POV
The door of the house opened, to reveal an old woman, wearing pastel knits, with a straw hat. Her hair was curly gray.
"Why hello!" she said kindly. Her voice had an accent. German? Or Russian?
My dad told her about how our car died, and he asked her how much a room would be, and all that adult stuff. Behind the woman, I could see a stair case, and sitting on the staircase, peering back at me, were three kids. Two girls and a boy. One of the girls looked around my age, she was pretty, with long blonde hair. The other girl was younger, her hair was chocolate brown, and she wore it in braids. The boy was also attractive, he had shaggy blonde hair. He also seemed my age.
This was freaking me out, it seemed exactly like the sisters Grimm.
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Puck's POV
The family decided to stay the night at our house. Costumers, GREAT. They got their suitcases and luggage, and the old lady made me and Sabrina help them take their stuff up to the room they were going to stay in. I could see the shorter girl watching me and Sabrina intently. She and her sister kept whispering. I found out when the old lady introduced me, that the shorter girl was named 'Ellie' and the taller was 'Amber'. I also found out that they were in New York, because Ellie had a flute competition or something. The old lady told the family that dinner was at 6:30 if them wanted any. It was 6:00 now.
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Sabrina's POV
It turns out that the headlights belonged to the car that the family, who are now in this very house, were driving. They're a family of four. A man and a woman (the parents) and two girls, (the kids). The girls look around my age. They both have brown hair and brown eyes. They seem nice, I guess, but they kept staring at me and Puck as we helped haul their suitcases up to their rooms. I wonder why?
Sorry it was short, I'm bad at writing long chapters, I'm better with lots of short ones (gets more reviews too!!!) SPEAKING OF REVIEWS, let's get some for me, shall we????
(please)
THANKS!!
~dancingflutesquirrel