A/N : Sorry for the late update.
- I forgot my laptop's password, I've tried many passwords but I failed…miserably. Then 2 weeks later, I finally fixed the problem, but when I opened the new chapter I've already done long time ago. It has been corrupted, broke, and I discovered my laptop contained many dangerous viruses…
So I have to rewrite my chapter, then I tried to remember what I have wrote in that chapter, but I can't remembered a damn thing, even a single word. Then I give up, and I turned lazy… Sorry~
Don't worry, I'm not putting this story on hiatus or stop it.
Please read this, it's very important :
I've changed a little bit in this chapter
I think it was absolutely ridiculous when Voldemort attacked Alan with bare hands
Why?
Duhhh, he's a wizard, a powerful dark lord and already mastered the wandless magic, why wasted his strength, his "precious time" on a child, a "filthy" Muggle, he could have just casted a wandless Stupefy, Crucio or even Avada Kedavra though. It's completely rubbish at that part, but I have realized that problem anyway
So I decided to write it like this. Hope you guys like it!
Enjoy!
~Shadow Chaser~
Then the man used some sort of energy slammed the woman on the wall and hold her there, she struggled but unsuccessfully. And he launched to Alan, his eyes glow dangerous - Chapter 1 Part 2
Give Up?
All of a sudden, Alan felt his body turned hot and hotter each moment, as if it went up in flames, he felt like hundreds of needles pricked into his stomach, chest and guts and everywhere, made him down on his knees and dropped the wand, Alan twitched in pain. The man gave him a mocking laugh, and walked up to the messy black haired boy. He grabbed a fistful of Alan's hair and hissed something that's definitely not in English
The red eyes man pushed Alan down on the floor, his hand moved down Alan's throat, then he squeezed the boy's throat slowly with both his hands, and that malicious smile never stopped on the man's face. The woman can't do anything but screamed
The man leaned down and whispered next to Alan's ear
"Not even a scream, huh? Interesting, I thought you must be screaming, begging or do something pathetic; after all you're a Muggle, a disgusting, useless and filthy Muggle. Don't worry this is just the beginning, a small warning to keep you in place, boy"
But Alan heard none. His body was screaming in pain, his eyes getting cloudy. Alan wanted to scream out loud and beg this to stop, but instead he clenched his jaw, he wouldn't scream, because it'll getting him to no where and not even change this situation, and Alan wouldn't let himself show his fear in front this man, a stranger, not here, not now...
Damn! – Alan cursed silently
He just wanted to close his eyes for a permanent sleep, a never-wake-up sleep, maybe the pain will stopped, oh god it hurt so much, he wished to die, unfortunately his death was full of pain. 'Why I have to die like this?'
And Alan decided to close his eyes, to end this. While in his thought, he didn't hear the woman was screaming, begging the man to stop...
A/N: Yeah more grammar and spelling mistakes on the way, life's peachy *sign*. Okay Alan is seriously in trouble, now that's what I like: Totally stuck and no way out, how do you guys feel? Tell me
Uhmm, the truth is I don't know how to get Alan out this mess, "Harry" is powerful, but this is "Alan", yes even if they are the same, Alan is just a child. Ughh, now I'm the one who stuck, maybe I should retire for a month…What? It's Summer *smile*
On 13/6, I'm going to Singapore to study abroad, luckily I can take my laptop along, maybe I'll think a way out and write a new chapter before I forget it (I'm a very forgetful person) =]] . Or…I could just put the story on hiatus and run away from it, then come back in a month or more *smirk*