And I'm back. After 3 weeks I am finally writing another chapter and this one has a fight scene( dun dun dar). And to Hollow Mashiro two things:

Thank you for the offer but no I don't want a beta as I don't know how to use them and if I did then half the time I would forget to send it to them.

No I meant the Avatar with guns and blue people. Eragon turning up in the middle of the big battle at the end would be funny. I would set it around 20 years after the story so Saphira would be HUGE.

Also I re-read chapter four after i had posted and saw how stupid the Marbo story sounded. It's funny how things sound good in your head but then..... yeah. I also forgot to put a story idea up. Eragon and How To Train Your Dragon. I think Eragon could teach Hiccup some things. But on with the story.

He could make amends. The same thing had happen here but this time he had the power to change it. He could bring the old peace keepers come back from the brink of destruction. And he would save the dragon riders or at least die with honour trying to right this world. He looked up and ignited his lightsaber.

"Yes." He answered.

Obi-wan looked at the red dragon that was getting closer to them. Thorn (he had learnt the Dragons name from Eragons memory) was around 300 meters away and closing. Murtaugh was sitting on his back and had his sword drawn. Obi-wan smiled. This boy would be nothing to him. He sword was most likely to melt on impact with the lightsaber and even if didn't then he wouldn't be able to keep up with someone who would quite literally know what he was going to do before he did. Hopefully.

Eragon had put all of his wargear on and was about to mount Saphira when Obi-wan said to him in a quiet voice .

"Don't. I'll do this. I want to see how powerful this child is." Eragon looked back at him and saw how serious he was.

"Ok , I'll come with in case he is too strong," Eragon said slowly. He then added to Saphira which is most likely. Saphira snorted at this. "come on then. If you want to fight him then you need to get in the air somehow." Eragon told him while climbing on Saphira. Obi-wan let out a laugh and ran toward the dragon which was now only 100 meters away. When he got to a reasonable speed he force pushed the ground and flew into the air. Saphira turned to Eragon and laughed at him.

"How did I know that my brother would be here? He doesn't seem to understand that if I see him I have to capture him." Murtaugh said to Thorn.

Who's that next to him? Thorn asked sending a mental image of Obi-wan to Murtaugh. I don't know but why is he running towards us. He can't be an elf, he's too slow. Then Obi-wan ran into the dark away from the fire and was lost. Oh well he gone now. Why does Galbatorix want that star agARGHHH. Thorn was interrupted by a dark blur slamming into his stomach. Hard. "What the hell was that? A rock? How did it get past my wards?" Shouted Murtaugh as the blur fell back down.

Thorn's breathing was laboured and he was having trouble flying. I've got to land, I think it broke a rib. Did you see what hit me? Murtaugh replied with the negative and was about to reach for magic when he stopped. If he healed Thorn in the air while he was moving then the healing bone would rip through things that got in the way. They would have to land. As Thorn flew down he asked Why haven't Eragon or Saphira moved to attack us yet? Surely they can see that we are injured, unless... wait! That man they must be waiting for him to attack. They think we haven't seen him. So they're planning an ambush. Ha my brother's gotten smarter. Too bad we know his plan. Thorn landed and Murtaugh healed him with two words from the ancient language. The two of them then put their backs to each other so they couldn't be attacked from behind and started to look for any movement in the tree that lined the dusty clearing that they had landed it.

Obi-wan landed with a roll and looked up at the dragon he had kick in the chest. It was injured and was landing nearby. Obi-wan looked over to where they were landing. It was a wide clearing with nothing to hide behind. No sneaking up behind them then. Unless... yes that would work. The Jedi walked up to the edge of the clearing, just out of sight. The rider and dragon were looking around them, most likely for Eragon and Saphira. They wouldn't be expecting a random man with a sword of light to fly out of the trees and attack them. Their reaction would be unpredictable to say the least.

Obi-wan pick up rock and used the force to move it around to the other side of the clearing and dropped it making a noise away from him. Then when Murtaugh was looking away he turned on his lightsaber and once again force pushed behind him propelling himself forward. Murtaugh heard the light saber and turned to Obi-wan with sword in his hand in time to block the light saber strike sent at him. Unfortunately the magic and forging of Za'roc were not powerful enough to stop a blade of pure energy. The lightsaber went half way through the blade before Obi-wan rolled back and adopted a fighting stance. Light saber over his head and hand in front of him ready to use the force. Murtaugh looked shocked at the sight of his sword. He turned to Obi-wan with a look that one might give a demon.

"What are you?" he asked the fear in his voice clear. Obi-wan used the force to lift up hundreds of small rocks around them, just to add to the impression he was giving. He opened his mouth and replied.

"Someone who will stop your king from ruling another year." He then drove to attack.

Ah ha. And you thought that I was going to write a fight scene in this chapter. I don't like this chapter and if anyone can come up with a better story line for it then I will replace it. I still don't know how I am going to do the fight. Probably having Obi-wan being stupidly over powered, like Jedis...Jedies ...Jedi's(WHAT IS THE PURAL OF JEDI ARGGHHH?) should be. With the magic and flying thing, just go with it. Also to sally the sunflower if I write hunger games/Eragon should it be Eragon turning up, volunteering and then when he gets to the capital going on a rampage. Or the boring Eragon has lost his powers and Saphira and his memory and can do nothing. I like the rampage one. It makes me giggle. As per usual review and point out the many mistakes that I have missed. Next chapter will have a fight in it, I promise. Hopefully.