Replaced by a Note
By Lightkit (YAY!)
A/N: YAY I'm back! FINALLY! I am not writing this from my home computer! Anyway, moving, thank you reviewers and read on!
Disclaimer…blah blah blah.
Oh yeah, those who got the answer right are:
Mudblood-girl-101
Kyonkichi-san
Kyki- The Late Night Writer
milibloom
kibamaru87- *slaps back* what do you think I'm trying to do! *slaps again* I try hard enough to get this story updated! As I mentioned earlier, my father like hates me for going on here at all! Deal with the short chapters!
Ch. 7- Who can figure out the note?
The note had everyone (Momiji, Haru, Kyo, and Yuki) confused to the point of extinction.
Kyo threw a punch at the nearest thing, which happened to be a wall. "What's that supposed to mean, d--- it?!"
"Maybe it has something to do with the beach?" Yuki suggested.
"Let's go ask Hari!" Momiji squealed, showing no sign of the bad-mouthing he had done the night before.
"Fine. Let's go," Haru said blatantly, showing no sign of emotion.
So the little group set off for the Sohma main house. Once there, they headed for Hatori's place. After knocking on the door for 3.92 seconds, Hatori Sohma answered the door.
"What took you so long? We've been knocking on your door for 3.92 seconds!" Kyo glared angrily at Hatori.
"You counted?" Hari raised an eyebrow.
"Yeah!" Momiji bounced around from the front to the back to the middle, and back to the front again.
"Can you help us please?" Haru asked politely.
"What do you need my assistance for? You all look perfectly fine to me." Hatori crossed his arms.
"Miss -" Yuki started.
"Ahem!" Kyo coughed loudly.
Yuki voice shook slightly when he continued. "Tohru-san was kidnapped two nights ago, and we were left notes to lead us to other notes, which will hopefully lead us to Tohru. We're stuck on this one. Can you decipher it?"
Yuki handed Hatori the confusing note. He looked at it for a few seconds, then looked at them and shook his head. Then he slammed the door in their faces.
"Hey!" Kyo banged on the door with his fists.
Hatori opened the door slightly. "Yes?"
"You can at least give us back the note!" Kyo yowled angrily.
"Oh." Hatori reached into his pocket. "Here."
Hatori handed Kyo the note and slammed the door in his face. Again. Yuki rolled his eyes and led them around back, opened the paper door, and let everyone in. In the living room, they found Ritsu, Hatori, and a white-vapor-looking thing.
Hatori sighed. "What do you want now?"
"Our note solved!" Kyo exclaimed, throwing the note down on the table. The white floating thing came over and took the note. Momiji just stared at it, Haru looked blankly at it, Yuki sighed and face palmed himself.
"What do you think Shigure?" Kyo asked.
Shigure (A/N: or rather his ghost (Mitchan finally got to him! XD)) 'looked' at the note, shook as though he was laughing, and handed the note to Ritsu, who looked at it for 15 minutes, during which time they all enjoyed a nice game of Di Hin Min (Rich man, Poor man, for those of you who didn't know already).
Suddenly, Ritsu began yelling and screaming, "NOOOOOOOO! I'M SOORRRRYYYY!" Everybody looked up from his cards at the screaming Ritsu. "I COULDN'T FIGURE IT OUT!!!!! PLEASE RENDER MERCYFUL JUUUUUUDDGGEMMEEEEEEEENTTT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!"
Shigure's ghost quickly threw a card, shurikan style, right into Ritsu's side. "Haaaa," Ritsu kind of sighed and fainted. The white thing, a.k.a. Shigure's ghost, shook a little.
Hatori rolled his eyes. "Yes Shigure, we all know that that poking thing comes in handy sometimes." Shigure's ghost began to shake even more. "Oh be quiet!" Hatori frowned. "Or I bring out the fan!" he added threateningly. A hole appeared at about head level, and an eerie scream echoed throughout the room. When all cared to open their eyes after squeezing them tight with their hands over their ears, Shigure's ghost was gone.
"I've got it!" Yuki shouted suddenly.
"Got what, the measles?" Kyo scoffed.
"Ah ha ha!" Momiji rolled on the floor laughing. "I get it! The measles… catch (inhale) measles…" He sat up, rubbing his eyes.
"NO! The answer to the riddle, idiot!" Yuki scowled.
"Ohhhhh…" Kyo realized. "Right… so what's it mean?"
"Dunkin' Donuts!"
"Yay donuts!" Momiji clapped.
"This isn't the right time to be thinking about buying donuts, Yuki. We haven't figured out the note to save Rin's one and only friend yet," Haru said blankly.
"No!" Yuki exclaimed, laying the note flat so everyone could see. "The last line gives it away!" he explained, pointing it out. "Dunkin' Donuts has coffee and some people, who are seriously weird, dunk their donuts in their coffee! And there's a Dunkin' Donuts down the street by the Lake Beach!"
"So you finally figured it out…" Hatori smirked.
"Yes, now drive us to Dunkin' Donuts," Yuki demanded, gathering up their things.
"Fine. Come on." Hatori shook his head, grabbed his keys, and walked out the door, leaving everyone to scurry out behind him.
So! What will the next riddle be? Will there be a riddle in the next chapter? Or will there be Tohru there, sitting quietly at a table sipping coffee? Or will they all DIE? What will happen next? Find out next time on…
REPLACED BY A NOTE!
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Luv,
Lightkit
PS- BTW, CLFBF helped me a little bit with this.
THIS IS THE REWRITTEN VERSION. IT IS NO LONGER IN SCRIPT FORMAT.